ginaRAWR's Fics
#1
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:48 AM
I won't be adding anymore unless someone comments
Also, you can guess who the mystery girls are..
(The title is likely to change, I couldn't think of a better one)
Confessions - Teaser
I took a deep breath as I stood in front of her door, my heart pounding as I thought through what I was about to do. Yeah, nice one Jun, freaking out just as you’re about to confess to your best friend. Great idea, she could come to the door any minute and see you standing like a fool. I bet she-
“Oh, hey Jun! How long have you been there? I didn’t hear you knock..” she said.
“Oh I just got here” Liar, you’ve been stood here for 15 minutes already. “Are you busy?”
“Well I’m sort of in the middle of somethi-”
“Hey! Who’s at the door? I was sleeping!” I heard a voice shout out from her bedroom.
Wait a minute... I know that voice…
#2
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:53 AM
uhh...Eri opened the door
and reina was the one who was sleeping
riiigghhtt?!?! lol
Ai: ah Gaki-san, wait till we get into the dressing room
Gaki: Sorry can't
#3
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:53 AM
#4
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:56 AM
indigoburulove As far as I remember I've only read about JunJun being the main character in one fic, so I figured I'd make her the main character in mine. I'll write an update now
#5
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:57 AM
#6
Posted 08 February 2009 - 04:13 AM
Chapter 1
“Kame-chan, what’s going on?”
“Look Jun, I know how you feel about her. But I can’t help it, I’m in love with her…”
“You’re in love with someone who’s cheated on you countless times, with guys she can’t remember the name of. She’s even cheated on you with Sayumi! For god’s sake Eri, when are you going to stop crawling back to her whenever she clicks her fingers?!”
“Jun, I think we should take this outside…” It was obvious she knew that Reina was listening. She could tell when anyone was talking about her even if she wasn’t in the same building. Well… I guess I’m exaggerating. But she could normally tell.
“To hell with that, I don’t care if she hears! She knows that our relationship doesn’t go past the group, so she’s not going to care if I tell you what you already know.”
“Wow Jun, the way you’re getting so worked up anyone would think you had a crush on Eri!” Reina always chose the most irritating moments to make her appearance and sarcastic comments.
“Oh don’t be so ridiculous, she’s my best friend. Why would I have a crush on her?!” Another lie, I can almost feel my nose growing. “Besides, I’ve got every reason to be worried about her. I’m going to presume that you’ve already heard what I said? You can hear anything anybody says about you.”
“Jun, let me reassure you, I’m not going to hurt Eri again. I’ve realised I’ve made mistakes but I’m willing to make it up to her.”
“Hmm, I’ve heard that before…”
“She means it Jun. She’s already made it up to me.” Eri smiled shyly. Ugh. I don’t want to think about the love of my life with another girl.
“If you say so.. I’d better go, I bet Gaki-san’s wondering why there’s no food for her and Ai-chan.”
“Well okay, see you la-” Eri was cut off as Reina slammed the door. I could hear the murmurs even as I was walking away.
As soon as I got down the first flight of stairs tears were streaming down my face.
#7
Posted 08 February 2009 - 04:14 AM
EDIT: Wouldn't you know it...I post for the preview, but the first part gets squeezed in first. Well, I got confused as first when Eri said that she knew how Junjun felt about Reina, but now I understand it... Aw, but poor Junjun.
#8
Posted 08 February 2009 - 04:20 AM
hahaha
I guessed reina first as the one that was yelling since she's the only one i would think that kinda had a temper. And then who goes along with Reina? Eri of course! hahah
ooo anxious on what happens next. I have a bad feeling about Reina though lol
Ai: ah Gaki-san, wait till we get into the dressing room
Gaki: Sorry can't
#9
Posted 08 February 2009 - 04:21 AM
#10
Posted 08 February 2009 - 05:12 AM
#11
Posted 08 February 2009 - 07:38 AM
Can't wait to see how this unfolds.
#12
Posted 08 February 2009 - 12:08 PM
#13
Posted 08 February 2009 - 02:55 PM
I really like reading your theories on what you think will happen! So feel free to post them
#14
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:02 PM
And my theory is that JunJun will get Eri at the end. lol But I would like to see how that's going to happen, because Reina won't let her take Eri away so quickly. I can't wait.
#15
Posted 08 February 2009 - 04:12 PM
Chapter 2
For the rest of the day everything was a blur. I gave the taxi driver the wrong address on the way home and didn’t even realise why he was so confused about it.
“Look love I’m sorry but I can’t take you there.”
“Eh? Why not? It’s not that far…”
“I don’t know why you think China’s not that far but there’s no way I’m driving there.”
“EHHHHH?! China? Sorry..” I quickly told him the correct address to stop embarrassing myself further.
On the way home I was looking out of the window all the time, watching all the trees merge together. The world seemed incredibly bland to me at the moment, I didn’t even notice that the store near my apartment was doing a free sample of banana milkshakes, and I love bananas.
I paid the driver double the fare due to giving him the wrong address and walked quickly into the building towards the elevator, fighting back more tears as I moved quicker and quicker towards my floor. I didn’t even bother announcing I was home.
“Oh Ai-chan...." She giggled. "JUN! You’re meant to tell me when you get home!”
“Sorry Gaki-san, don’t let me interrupt you and Ai-chan. I just came home to make you lunch and have a shower.”
“Aw Jun, did she turn you down?”
“What the hell are you talking about? I told you, I was just going to the store.”
“You went to the store and brought nothing back? I know you went to Eri’s, Jun.”
“How did you know?”
“I know you a lot better than you think. If you’d have mentioned it to me I would’ve been able to tell you not to bother since I saw her walking hand in hand back to her house with Reina. I only realised that’s where you’d gone when you’d been an hour and the store’s only up the street.”
“I’m sorry Gaki… I don’t know what I was playing at.”
Ai-chan decided to skip out of hers and Gaki-san’s room at that point, wearing nothing but her underwear and a sock.
“Ai, I worry about your fashion choices sometimes…”
“Ah sorry Jun, I just came out to see where my Risa had got to.”
“Would you mind getting dressed? I know you want to turn Risa on but I’d rather not see.”
“Ahhh I’m so sorry! I’ll be right back!” And with that she ran back into her room.
She waited until Ai had shut the door before she started talking again.
“Look Jun, I know that you’re mad about Eri. And don’t tell Ai-chan but I think that you could do with someone to take your mind off her. Tsunku told me to mentor this new girl but I figure you might as well do it, here’s her details.”
“I’m not sure Gaki-san…”
“Read it.”
“Fine.”
I quickly made them their lunch and headed towards my room to have a shower.
As I was taking my jacket off, I glanced down at the sheet of paper that Gaki-san had handed to me.
Hmm, she’s cute. Very cute in fact, and she’s 21. Not far off my age, actually.
What’s her name again? I wonder as I try to make out the katakana of her name. I’ve lived in Japan for nearly two years and I’m still pretty useless when it comes to reading Japanese.
ShenShen… she must be the leader of that new group. What was their name again? Something Musume...
Ah yeah, Ice Creamusume. Cute name.
I wasted no more time in calling her.
#16
Posted 08 February 2009 - 05:18 PM
You're including Ice Creamusume?!
But I don't even know who's who yet.
Time to look up on them.
First prize to Ai's fashion sense.
#17
Posted 08 February 2009 - 05:44 PM
Yeah, I'm bringing ICM in since I'm sick of JunLin pairings, and I can't picture JunJun with anyone else in MoMusu, so ShenShen was my choice
#18
Posted 08 February 2009 - 06:00 PM
(ok, I didn't suspect Yorkshire, specifically, but I did detect a slightly rough English voice)
#19
Posted 08 February 2009 - 06:05 PM
#20
Posted 08 February 2009 - 07:00 PM
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