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#21 ♥アメーバー !♥

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Posted 20 September 2008 - 02:26 PM

^you posted on the make a wish time
and if you wished for a new chapter you got it
here it is today

CHAPTER 2

*Reina and Eri go rushing downstairs holding hands and beaming like there`s no tomorow.(Reina`s actually showing teeth how cute..if you forgot how that looks here`s a pic of how pretty it is Posted ImagePosted Image ) They run downstairs to the kitchen where there is a bar and a dining table ( its like that at my house..problem?lol) They find Gaki Koha LinLin and Jun Jun at the table and Sayumi Ai and Mittsi are sitting at the bar.They decide to sit in between the couch and the coffee table and watch tv.*
Reina and Eri:Itadekimasu
*The meal consists of meat potatoes and rice (reinas a meat lover so that must be her favorite of all time...p.s the meat is yakiniku...where`s mikitty?lol*
Reina:Oishii!
*Eri holds her hand under the table and smiles at her.Reina does a half smile back because she`s eating lol*
Gaki:What were you two doing?It took you forever to come back downstairs.
Koharu:They seemed to be talking about something when I went up there.Maybe a problem that needed to be discussed.
LinLin:They`re here now.So we aren`t gonna be nosy
Junjun:Right!
*Sayu runs over to where Ren and Eririn are sitting*
Sayu:So what happened?
*They all laugh*
Sayu:What?!
Eri:I was just asking Reina some advice.My friend has some problems so I went to her OK?
Ai:Oh well that`s nice of you to want to help Eririn. *smile*
*Sayu runs back to her chair and pouts because people laughed at her nosiness lol*
Mittsi:Speaking of problems..in two days I have to go back to school!I wonder if I can pull the plan off.
Reina:I`m sure you`ll do fine dear*Takes a big bite of yakiniku*
Risa:Don`t worry about it.I don`t want you getting sick like SOMEONE worried yesterday too much.
Koha:Well eating Panacakes or Waffles is something VERY IMPORTANT!
*they laugh at koharu*
LinLin:Well whatever it is..you should`nt worry too much.Whatever you`re worried about may make you sick so you won`t be able to do it anyway.
JunJun:*Scolds her in Chinese*Don`t give her any ideas she might wanna skip school Monday because she "feels sick".
Sayumi:*pouts again*You know I can`t understand when you do that.
*Eri looks at Reina.They both shrug*
Ai-chan:Well I`m done.Kuchizo sama (idk if i spelled it right)
Mittsi:Me too. Kuchizo Sama deshta!
*They both put the dishes in the sink*
JunJun:Wow you guys are fast.
Reina:*whispers to Eri*Hopefully the rest are done soon too so we can be alone a while.
Eri:*whispers back*I don`t mind as long as I`m here with you Tanakacchi.
LinLin:What are you guys talking about over there?
Koha:Mindless gossip.
Sayumi:Why don`t you do that Koharu?You ARE mindless!
Mittsi:*laughs as she goes to her room*You are.We love you.
Koharu:Yeah yeah yeah.
NiNi:I think my little cousin may come visit me this weekend.I`m not sure when he`ll be by.
Sayumi:How old is he again?
Nini:3
Sayumi:Well do you think he will cry if I hold him or something?
Eri:THOSE POOR KIDS IN THE PARK! (LOL Reffering to Haromoni@)
JunJun:I remember watching that.That was sort of funny.
Reina:When Yossi held the boy he didn`t cry at all.He was smiling so big.Maybe he had a crush on her.*Rubs Eri`s hand*
Koha:*Gets done eating and puts her dish in the sink*Well maybe Sayu is bad with kids.And just seeing her scares them.
Gaki*pokes KOharu as she gets up and puts her dish away*You mean like we get scared of *points to Koha* THAT in the morning (Lol)
LinLin:*Gets done eating as well and puts her dish away*I`m going back to Youtube.I think they have some Azumagna episodes (Azumanga Daioh)
*Sayumi and JunJun has the same mind as the other leave they sit beside Eri and Reina.Sayu sits beside Eri and JunJun is beside Reina*
Sayumi:You`re both hiding something.
Eririn:*quickly lets go of Rein`s hand*What are you talking about?
JunJun:You guys must have a secret you aren`t telling us.
Reina:*furrows her brow*Why would you think so
*Eri thinks OH MY GOD SHES SO CUTE*
Sayumi:Well you`re not telling us. *her and JunJun get up and leave*
JunJun:*looks back and smiles at them*When you wanna talk let us know!
*Everyone is gone now except them*
Eri:That was awkward.
Reina:Ya very.
Eri:How can they tell?
Reina:I have no clue at all.
*Eri leans on Reina her head on her shoulder*
Reina:*pats Eri`s head*So are we official now?
Eri:As long as we and everyone who knows keeps it a secret.
*Reina kisses Eri`s forehead*


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#22 OneWingedWolf

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Posted 20 September 2008 - 03:43 PM

YATTA!!! MORE TANAKAMEI!!!!

I just love this couple :)

Kya~a Eri and Reina holding hands underneath the table... so cute <3

I want to read more, please <3

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Posted 20 September 2008 - 05:29 PM

OHH, wat a cute kiss on the forehead...

Eri:As long as we and everyone who knows keeps it a secret.

OHHH, sth bad is gonna happen sooner or later >:]
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Posted 20 September 2008 - 07:09 PM

"the word" http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/tongue.gif

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Posted 20 September 2008 - 08:51 PM

^ haha she said it XD
love how you refer gaki-san as "NiNi" ^^ adds to the cuteness and fluffiness of the story :)
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Posted 20 September 2008 - 09:34 PM

ya thats what i call her smetimes
but its usually gaki

i saw her singing that song 声 today on hph
i fell in love again lol
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Posted 20 September 2008 - 10:34 PM

i've seen, or rather i've read that her nickname is sometimes "nini" but i have yet to hear anyone use it. it's too cute not to use. should be a rule, EVERYONE use the word "nini" when referring to risa, got it?

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Posted 20 September 2008 - 10:59 PM

NOTE:if you want to make it more romantic with TanaKame please play this song hph

*That night at 9:47 pm*

*Eri and Reina are talking and laughin*
Eri:Remember the time when Miki and Aya went on the roller coaster?
Reina:Yeah.
Eri:She was like
Both:MAMA!PAPA!OBAACHAN!
Reina:Then Mikitty said she`s not just going to appear you know?!
Eri:Yeah..
*Reina sits on the bed with Eri sitting in her lap*
Eri:What a day eh?
*Reina lays down so eri ends up sitting on her tummy*
Reina:Itai ERIRIN~!
Eri:?*bounce* what?
Reina:*pushes her lightly*off off!
Eri:Ok*lays down beside her*
*They both are on their backs staring at the ceiling*
Eri:You wanna get under?
Reina:Ok.Under the blankies then.*laugh*
*They get under the covers*
Eri:So we are basically in bed..dating...i like this..
Reina:I like it so far.I`ve never dated...
Eri:You?Never dated?Seriously?
Reina:Yeah why?
Eri:You just seem like you would have dated alot I mean you are very beautiful.
Reina:You think so?*Turns on her side facing Eri*
Eri:I know so.*turns on her side to face Reina*
Reina:*gets adjusted to the light and can see Eri now.They turned on the lamp so it`s a little dim*Thanks alot.
Eri*puts one arm around Reina*I`m getting alittle....comfy *laugh*
Reina*giggles*Me too.*Scoots closer*
Eri:I never noticed you were so...
Reina:What?
Eri:*blushes* you know.
Reina:Yeah I know.
Eri:So have you always liked me or...?
Reina:It went little by little ever since we met..
Eri:Yeah same with me.
Reina:So....um...can we hang out alot now then?
Eri:Of course.Nothing will change.
Reina:Do you want to tell them..?
Eri:Whatever you want.*kiss*
Reina:i`ll think about it.
Eri:I`m sleepy.
Reina:Ok..me too..
Eri:Goodnight.Love you.
Reina:Love you too.*She turns out the light*
*They cuddle as they fal asleep*


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Posted 21 September 2008 - 12:43 AM

Awwwwww :)

TanaKame rabu-rabu <3

And that they're sharing the same bed is even cuter ^^; :wub:

More please XD

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Posted 21 September 2008 - 12:55 AM

cute! and yes, please write more.

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Posted 21 September 2008 - 03:06 AM

whoa :w00t: , this is getting good. azumanga rocks. haha thx for the visual aids, ur right.

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Posted 21 September 2008 - 04:42 AM

more please ^^ this scene is so sweet and mellow~ + thx for adding the song koe for us to listen to, really made it better ^^. btw NiNi's singing is super awesome ^^
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Posted 21 September 2008 - 05:15 AM

Note:Please listen to this while looking~
Tanakame opv


*The time is 2 am*
*Eri wakes up from her sleep.She reaches over Reina and she turns on the light.She starts staring at Reina while she sleeps
Eri:*thinks* Oh my God..she is so cute...I love her so much...Now she is mine....I love her!
*Eri strokes Reina`s cheek with her thumb.Reina stirs a little bit*
Reina:*moans a little*Mmm.
Eri:*thinks*Woops.I didnt want to wake her..maybe I should stop.
*Reina rolls over*
Eri:*think*I love her so much.*she scoots closer to Reina and starts rubbing Reina`s back*
*Reina doesnt stir at all*
Eri:*kisses her* *whispers* I love you.
Reina:*rolls over and opens her eyes slightly*Mm...huh?
Eri:Sorry did I wake you?
Reina:mmm..*Groggy* No its ok...Why are you up?Can you not sleep?
Eri:It`s not that..I was just thinking about today..and how I`m lucky to be with you.
Reina:*giggles*You`re so cute..I love you
Eri:Love you to..very much
Reina:*rubs Eri`s arm*You`re soooo cute.
Eri:*laughs*Oh really?
Reina:Really.*kiss*
Eri:I am so lucky
Reina:I feel lucky too.Youre like my best friend and..
Eri:Now its at another level.
Reina:I remember when I was in Hawaii.All I could do was think about you...
Eri:Really?Aww..I thought about you in Thailand.
Reina:When we hung out on the sets all the time for music vids always talking and laughing..I loved it
Eri:Yeah I get along so well with you..
Reina:*pout*I wish we couldve done this sooner.
Eri:Yeah I know.Love it when you pout!
*Reina yawns*
Eri:Aww...well if you want to sleep you can...
Reina:Yeah..you sleepy?
Eri:I am a bit...well we`ll talk in the morning
Reina:Ok..I love you .
Eri:Love you too.
*They kiss and hold hands while they go to sleep*


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Posted 21 September 2008 - 07:01 AM

motto motto~ more more more~ lol that is a nice song to go with the scene ^^ ah~ must be so nice to wake up and find the one you love right next to you... tanakame 4ever~ lol and thx for showing us this opv, lol at the beginning scenes of the 2 sleepyheads :wub:
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Posted 21 September 2008 - 02:15 PM

sorry they have been so short!
ill update with more next time~
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Posted 21 September 2008 - 05:10 PM

MOTTO!!! TanaKamei B) :c03: ^_^ ^^;

God they're... made for each other!!

Looking forward to more :)

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Posted 21 September 2008 - 09:28 PM

Kyaa~~
More and More TanaKamei >__<
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Posted 22 September 2008 - 04:01 AM

heres another update

*The next morning at 11:30 Eri rolls over and looks at the clock.She gets out of bed trying not to wake up Reina.She goes downstairs and sees Sayu JunJun and Ai eating lunch*
Sayumi:Hi Eririn.
JunJun:Hey sleepy face.*Gets up and puts plate in the sink*
Ai-chan:Sleep well?It`s so late!
Eri:Yeah I did thanks.
Koharu*Looks up from her cellphone she must be texting*Where`s Ren-chan?
Eri:Still sleeping.
Gaki:*playing mario party again with mittsi and lin lin*She better wake up soon!I need to challenge her!
Mittsi:How long did you guys stay up?I stayed up late reading and I was still up at 8 am this morning!
LinLin:So what did you guys do last night
Eri:Nothing in particular just talked and stuff until about 10.Then went to bed.
Sayu:Oh that`s boring.
JunJun:Ohh look here she comes
*Reina shuffles into the room with her eyes half closed*
Gaki:You`re cute *gets up and hugs Reina*Morning.
Reina:*mumbles as she hugs back*Hi.
LinLin:Owch my tummy hurts.
Ai-chan:*concerned*You too?First Jun now you?
Mittsi:This is a Chinese thing?
*They laugh*
Koha:Well whatever it is it must feel horrible.
JunJun:No it feels like sunshine.What do you think numbnuts?
Gaki*hysterical laughter* Numbnuts?!?!
Ai-chan:*giggles*She got you.
Koha:*pout*Whatever~ *goes intot he other room and calls someone*
Reina:*sits down on the floor her head on Mittsis shoulder*How the game?
Mittsi:I`m doing better.I guess you were my problem.
Reina*Gets up *fine. * sits next to eri on the couch and lays in her lap*Ah~!
Eri:*pats Reina*Cute (XD)
LinLin:So what`s up any news with anyone?
Sayu:*too busy watching Gaki and Mittsi and LinLin play* hm?
Gaki:*Gets up and sits next to Eri and puts Reina`s legs on hers*You need some help holding this thing.
Koha:*comes back in room*Mom called i need to go home a while.I`ll call someone to pick me up.
Mittsi:Whats up?
Koha:She just wants me there
LinLin:*in this story she can drive*I`ll drive ya.
Koha:Thanks alot
*Lin Lin puts her and AI`s plates in the sink and they leave\*
JunJun:Well now what?
Ai-chan:I`m going to take a shower now!
Reina*closes her eyes a minute*Alright.Don`t drown!
*SHe goes to the bathroom*
Eri:(pokes Reina)don`t jinx her please!
Sayu:Yeah I`m going to sit outside a while.The breeze feel so nice today!(she goes out on the porch)
Gaki:You`re getting a little heavy Reina.Gained weight?

Mittsi:Please don`t be mean haha.She`s a good girl (gets up and pats Reina)

JunJun:Well since Reina is tired andLinLin left and Gaki is helping suport thhe heavy load (lol) you wanna play with me?
Mittsi :Sure grab a controller
*They reset the game and play*
Gaki:*leans over and whispers to Eri*Can you tell me what`s up?
Reina:*whisper*We`ll tell you later OK?
Eri:It`s a secret.You have to please not tell anyone?
Gaki:(pats Eri`s shoulder)Ok I promise.
Mittsi:*Screams* YOU BEAT ME?!WHAT?!
JunJun:*laughs*Oh well.
Eri:*lets go into your room Gaki-san
Gaki:Ok *pats Reina* Hup up!
*Reina gets up and all 3 walk into the guest room and shut the door*


IM STOPPING HERE LOL
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Posted 22 September 2008 - 05:44 AM

the plot is thickening!
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Posted 22 September 2008 - 09:21 AM

Can't wait to read more >__<
Really nice job^^

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