I like more and more this story
"Courage"
Odori and Ima: Fanfic II Revenant Story
Started by Odori, Jun 29 2008 08:22 AM
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#41
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Posted 10 July 2008 - 04:38 PM
I'm waiting to read next chapter.
I like more and more this story
"Courage"
I like more and more this story
"Courage"
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Posted 10 July 2008 - 09:33 PM
Keep the story coming, it's really interesting. Reina and Eri's kiss was soo cute 
Reina=Queen(spanish)+Reina=Perfect(japanese)=Reina is a perfect queen.
喜欢是淡淡的爱。爱是深深的喜欢。
#43
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Posted 10 July 2008 - 10:24 PM
Awesome chapter~
TanaKame x]
Thanks for the update Odori & imaretard
TanaKame x]
Thanks for the update Odori & imaretard
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 06:09 AM
haha. thanks guys.
and yea.
Odori will be away for 2 weeks.
bah. and i'll try my best to keep this thread alive.
so. i'll keep this alive ! following story is not related to Revenant Story , wish everyone would like it. ^^
MOAR RenAi!
Crush
"Cut!" A crew member said.
The 5 girls stopped dancing as the song started to
fade out.
"Ok,thats it for today!" the director said.
"Otsukaresama deshita!" the girls chorused.
The girls started to exit the the room, and headed
for their dressing room.
"ahh! atlast! a break from intense dancing!" Reina
threw herself in the couch after changing.
"Tanaka-senpai..." Yuuka was standing in front of the
exhausted Reina.
"Hm?" Reina replied as she started to close her eyes.
"Uhm..So..how was my dancing?" The younger was
fidgeting.
"uhm..your dancing.." Reina shifted as she was trying
to get comfy in the couch.
Yuuka was standing there looking at her sleeping
Senpai.
"Hey Reina..." Takahashi the leader of Momusu tapped
Reina on the shoulders as she leaned to look at her
face.
Reina on the other hand woke up and sat up so fast,
that Ai didint have the chance to stay out of the
way...
"AH!ITAI!!!!" Reina was now back on the couch lying
down as she was rubbing her forehead.
"Ouch.." the leader of Momusu stated.
"ahh! Tanaka-senpai! daijoubu?!" the little Yuuka
kneeled and tried to comfort her Senpai.
"hey! wat happened?.." The tallest of them all, Maimi
walked in the scene.
"Whats with the screaming?" Saki followed Maimi.
"uh..nothing really.." Ai smiled as she glanced at
Reina who was being comforted by her Kouhai.
"ah.ok then we'll get going.." the both went out of
the room as they were laughing about a joke.
Ai walked towards Reina and Yuuka.
"So..you okay now?.." Ai sat on the couchs arm.
"Uhh...yea.." Reina sat up and was now arms lenght
near Ai.
"Im sorry for waking you up.." Ai fixed Reina bangs.
The Kouhai was there watching every move of her
Senpais.
She was speechless as she saw the way Ai looked at
Reina and how Reina blushed as she was being cared by
Ai.
She didnt exactly know what was happenening between
them. But she was sure that her little crush on Reina
had no space in the scene right now.
"Uh,...i think i'll have to go now.." Yuuka stood and
ran to the door.
As soon as the door closed Reina wrapped her arms
around Ais neck and pulled her closer.
Ai almost fell over Reina, but was able to stop as
she held on the amrs of the couch.
Reina smiled, "So..wat did you wake me up for?"
"oh yea..Yuuka-chan was asking you something about
how her dance was...and you were there ignoring
her.." Ai flicked Reinas still hurtin forehead.
"what?! i was tired!.." Reina took her arms off Ais
neck as she touch her forehead.
"well..you know that girl has a little crush on you
did you not?" Ai was there standing.
"well..i do..but you perfectly know that.." Reina now
pulled Ai into the couch.
"That..?" Ai was now half lying down on the couch.
"That you're the only one i want.." Reina skimmed her
lips on Ais.
Ai shudder at the light contact.
"I have no time for little crushes..." Reina fondled
with Ais belt.
Ai started to sweat even more.
She couldnt take it anymore.
She pushed her Kouhai off her.
Reina just smirked and stood.
"Like i said..you're the only one i want.." Reina
whispered to Ais ear and left.
Ai was left there smiling as she packed up and headed
to Reinas place.
and yea.
Odori will be away for 2 weeks.
bah. and i'll try my best to keep this thread alive.
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so. i'll keep this alive ! following story is not related to Revenant Story , wish everyone would like it. ^^
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MOAR RenAi!
Crush
"Cut!" A crew member said.
The 5 girls stopped dancing as the song started to
fade out.
"Ok,thats it for today!" the director said.
"Otsukaresama deshita!" the girls chorused.
The girls started to exit the the room, and headed
for their dressing room.
"ahh! atlast! a break from intense dancing!" Reina
threw herself in the couch after changing.
"Tanaka-senpai..." Yuuka was standing in front of the
exhausted Reina.
"Hm?" Reina replied as she started to close her eyes.
"Uhm..So..how was my dancing?" The younger was
fidgeting.
"uhm..your dancing.." Reina shifted as she was trying
to get comfy in the couch.
Yuuka was standing there looking at her sleeping
Senpai.
"Hey Reina..." Takahashi the leader of Momusu tapped
Reina on the shoulders as she leaned to look at her
face.
Reina on the other hand woke up and sat up so fast,
that Ai didint have the chance to stay out of the
way...
"AH!ITAI!!!!" Reina was now back on the couch lying
down as she was rubbing her forehead.
"Ouch.." the leader of Momusu stated.
"ahh! Tanaka-senpai! daijoubu?!" the little Yuuka
kneeled and tried to comfort her Senpai.
"hey! wat happened?.." The tallest of them all, Maimi
walked in the scene.
"Whats with the screaming?" Saki followed Maimi.
"uh..nothing really.." Ai smiled as she glanced at
Reina who was being comforted by her Kouhai.
"ah.ok then we'll get going.." the both went out of
the room as they were laughing about a joke.
Ai walked towards Reina and Yuuka.
"So..you okay now?.." Ai sat on the couchs arm.
"Uhh...yea.." Reina sat up and was now arms lenght
near Ai.
"Im sorry for waking you up.." Ai fixed Reina bangs.
The Kouhai was there watching every move of her
Senpais.
She was speechless as she saw the way Ai looked at
Reina and how Reina blushed as she was being cared by
Ai.
She didnt exactly know what was happenening between
them. But she was sure that her little crush on Reina
had no space in the scene right now.
"Uh,...i think i'll have to go now.." Yuuka stood and
ran to the door.
As soon as the door closed Reina wrapped her arms
around Ais neck and pulled her closer.
Ai almost fell over Reina, but was able to stop as
she held on the amrs of the couch.
Reina smiled, "So..wat did you wake me up for?"
"oh yea..Yuuka-chan was asking you something about
how her dance was...and you were there ignoring
her.." Ai flicked Reinas still hurtin forehead.
"what?! i was tired!.." Reina took her arms off Ais
neck as she touch her forehead.
"well..you know that girl has a little crush on you
did you not?" Ai was there standing.
"well..i do..but you perfectly know that.." Reina now
pulled Ai into the couch.
"That..?" Ai was now half lying down on the couch.
"That you're the only one i want.." Reina skimmed her
lips on Ais.
Ai shudder at the light contact.
"I have no time for little crushes..." Reina fondled
with Ais belt.
Ai started to sweat even more.
She couldnt take it anymore.
She pushed her Kouhai off her.
Reina just smirked and stood.
"Like i said..you're the only one i want.." Reina
whispered to Ais ear and left.
Ai was left there smiling as she packed up and headed
to Reinas place.
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#45
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 07:00 AM
AHAHAH....nice "naughty" story. I love how Reina said "I have no time for little crushes." I totally could imagine little Yuuka just standing there and being all "um..okay?" Btw, Imaretard. 4th station fanfiction is deleted cus it's over 200 pages but a new one is formed. I will be posting my fanfics there when I'm done writing.
Reina=Queen(spanish)+Reina=Perfect(japanese)=Reina is a perfect queen.
喜欢是淡淡的爱。爱是深深的喜欢。
#46
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 07:19 AM
^ haha. yea. and hmm. when u finish? Pm me the link m'kay? 
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#47
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 10:18 AM
@imaretard
nice story.
Reina with Ai 
nice story.
Reina with Ai
I like how Reina said she likes Ai-chan"Like i said..you're the only one i want.." Reina
#48
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 11:19 AM
Thanks for post the 3rd chapter 
I like the way you described the kiss, so cute!
TanaKame x]
Thanks a lot, and I'm waiting for the 4th, in two weeks >.<
imaretard, odori => Thanks a lot, and GANBARE~~
I like the way you described the kiss, so cute!
TanaKame x] Thanks a lot, and I'm waiting for the 4th, in two weeks >.<
imaretard, odori => Thanks a lot, and GANBARE~~
#49
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Posted 11 July 2008 - 01:49 PM
^ oh thanks. thnk goodness you liked the TanaKame part. kinda had a hard time with it http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/c20.gif
yes 4th chap in 2 weeks. damn. the 4th chap was kind of postponed cause of my laziness. http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/sad.gif
lets all wish Odori a happy vacation~ http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/c13.gif
he said he'll be writing a bit if he had the chance. >:]
and to keep this thread alive, i'll be posting some of my fics. http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/c33.gif
yes 4th chap in 2 weeks. damn. the 4th chap was kind of postponed cause of my laziness. http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/sad.gif
lets all wish Odori a happy vacation~ http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/c13.gif
he said he'll be writing a bit if he had the chance. >:]
and to keep this thread alive, i'll be posting some of my fics. http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/c33.gif
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#50
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Posted 14 July 2008 - 01:41 AM
Ooo
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And I wonder what Ai is going to do at Reina's place...
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is in it too! I wonder what kind of goofy things she's going to do -
And I wonder what Ai is going to do at Reina's place...
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#51
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Posted 14 July 2008 - 05:50 AM
^ agreeable. Is there another chapter of that RenAi thing Imaretard? ahahaha
Reina=Queen(spanish)+Reina=Perfect(japanese)=Reina is a perfect queen.
喜欢是淡淡的爱。爱是深深的喜欢。
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Posted 14 July 2008 - 11:16 AM
@ Xeqcme & maiha4ever >evil! 
haha. wnder where it will lead to.. but i promised Odori that i'll behave like a little cute girl.
but i do have a TanaKame ^^v
maybe i'll post it in later. or sth.
haha. wnder where it will lead to.. but i promised Odori that i'll behave like a little cute girl.
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but i do have a TanaKame ^^v
maybe i'll post it in later. or sth.
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#53
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Peace, Peace!
Posted 15 July 2008 - 03:23 AM
It's been a while since I checked this
thread .lol. & wtfudge? How come no one
informed me of the RenAi fanfic?
That was awesome imaretard
Don't you guys get it? Aichan's going to
Reina's home to help her put songs&stuff in
her iPod
thread .lol. & wtfudge? How come no one
informed me of the RenAi fanfic?
That was awesome imaretard
Don't you guys get it? Aichan's going to
Reina's home to help her put songs&stuff in
her iPod
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Posted 15 July 2008 - 03:54 AM
Hm...a little cute girl neh? I don't think that's how Imaretard behaves now is it?@ Xeqcme & maiha4ever >evil!
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but i do have a TanaKame ^^v
Yes, we totally knew thatIt's been a while since I checked this
thread .lol. & wtfudge? How come no one
informed me of the RenAi fanfic?
That was awesome imaretard
Don't you guys get it? Aichan's going to
Reina's home to help her put songs&stuff in
her iPod
Reina=Queen(spanish)+Reina=Perfect(japanese)=Reina is a perfect queen.
喜欢是淡淡的爱。爱是深深的喜欢。
#55
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Posted 15 July 2008 - 10:48 AM
@ :t m: > mwahaha. thnks. now thats something. just wait till i write that down!!! 
@ maiha4ever > mehehe. yer right. mwahaha.
so for now, TanaKame fic~ ^^v
And She Came By
Here i am in my room, alone.
This rarely happens.
Usually, i hangout with Sayumi or Gaki-san.
But, im here having a movie marathon.
On a Sunday night, eating ice.
I dont know why i rejected Junjun's invitation for dinner.
Gosh , im such a loser.
Anyway, i'll go on with my movie.
After a few minutes of munching on ice, i heard my door opened and got shut with such great force.
It's Her.
Imediately standing up and picking her phone from the floor.
"Hai..Moshi Moshi?" she answered.
I couldnt see her face cause she was facing the other side.
"Ai-chan...Ok,,Im coming." She firmly said.
She turned to face me.
"Im sorry i have to go.." she gave me a quick kiss fixing her hair and clothes.
And just like that she's gone,
Not that i didnt know this was coming....
But, i expected this to be the last.
That she'll be mine forever this time.
that she'll stay with me tonight.
But,no.
You still have her heart.
Even how much you hurt her,
She still loves you.
Im here still alone, heartbroken and naked.
The only difference is,
I've had too much and now...
i've given up.
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hope uhm, you guys liked it.
right and watch out for the sequel of Crush!!!
@ maiha4ever > mehehe. yer right.
mwahaha.
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so for now, TanaKame fic~ ^^v
And She Came By
Here i am in my room, alone.
This rarely happens.
Usually, i hangout with Sayumi or Gaki-san.
But, im here having a movie marathon.
On a Sunday night, eating ice.
I dont know why i rejected Junjun's invitation for dinner.
Gosh , im such a loser.
Anyway, i'll go on with my movie.
After a few minutes of munching on ice, i heard my door opened and got shut with such great force.
It's Her.
Spoiler
Imediately standing up and picking her phone from the floor.
"Hai..Moshi Moshi?" she answered.
I couldnt see her face cause she was facing the other side.
"Ai-chan...Ok,,Im coming." She firmly said.
She turned to face me.
"Im sorry i have to go.." she gave me a quick kiss fixing her hair and clothes.
And just like that she's gone,
Not that i didnt know this was coming....
But, i expected this to be the last.
That she'll be mine forever this time.
that she'll stay with me tonight.
But,no.
You still have her heart.
Even how much you hurt her,
She still loves you.
Im here still alone, heartbroken and naked.
The only difference is,
I've had too much and now...
i've given up.
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hope uhm, you guys liked it.
right and watch out for the sequel of Crush!!!
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#56
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Posted 15 July 2008 - 11:12 AM
SUGOIIIIIIIIIIII
I want to read more and more >_<
Really great job
I want to read more and more >_<
Really great job
"I'm never gonna say goodbye....when you taste it....you gonna be addicted =] "
#57
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Posted 15 July 2008 - 11:14 AM
^ oh thanks. hope you didnt mind those things i wrote.
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#58
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Posted 15 July 2008 - 11:18 AM
^
No. It's really great.
When I said I like something = I really it ^^
and my mind is always open
No. It's really great.
When I said I like something = I really
it ^^and my mind is always open
"I'm never gonna say goodbye....when you taste it....you gonna be addicted =] "
#59
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Posted 15 July 2008 - 11:53 AM
Sugoii~~~~ Let's wait for new TanaKame
I read this in you blog x]
But it's good to read one more time, and other, and other, I read it some many times xDDD
I really your fanfics
Really good Continueee~~
Ganbare! Good work 
I read this in you blog x]
But it's good to read one more time, and other, and other, I read it some many times xDDD
I really
your fanfics Really good
Continueee~~Ganbare! Good work
#60
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Posted 15 July 2008 - 12:02 PM
@ Yume ^__^ Pouk > thank goodness
@ anuskyna > nver really thought someone reads my blog. its so desolate. >____<
and i will try my best to write a new one when i have time . sorry for the inconvenience
@ anuskyna > nver really thought someone reads my blog. its so desolate. >____<
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and i will try my best to write a new one when i have time . sorry for the inconvenience
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