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[Fickle Monkey]

(Oh damn. I read the chapter days ago, but I totally forgot to post a "review" about it! Gah, I'm getting old ~ )

Ok, so it was all intense; with the well written, very imaginative fighting scenes - then this part made me chuckle...

The loud sound of a carhorn burst through the night closely followed by a rumbling 4x4 breaking through the undergrowth.
“Get out of the way damn dead things!” Reina shouted pounding on the horn.

Oh Reina, you're too badass.

[Odori]

YAY FOR THE PERV~

LOL it's funny cuz u get away with saying stuff like that
and you should know I'm a terrible lier

Yes Happy 22 to Ai-chan ^^
Ai ★ Ai: thanks for the imput, look forward to read more.. and thank, ur ava remined me what shirt I should wear today ^^

[sweeety]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TAKAHASHI AI SAMA!~

now onto the story.... you do realise I will hound you untill you upload perv now that you have put the evil thoughts in my mind and with the kicking and the scratching and the aighjsdfkj!!~ (Quote from Mort, Family Guy)

btw, you shouldn't have said surprise me... I wouldn't be surprised if something like this happens:

:ima's chapter:

Ai: Oh RIsa I am madly in love with you.... that's why I want you to stay away. I don't want you to get hurt.. and besides, now that you know this you will be disgusted and leave anyway
Risa: Oh but Ai, how can I when I am madly in love with you? I love you so much it hurts... literally and a lot!
Ai: You mean it?
Risa: Yes! Now let's make this thing official!
Ai: Yo, ERI! REEINA!~
Re: What? Can't you see we're making out?
Er: Yeah! anyway, what is it miss budinski?
Ai: It's um... your turn to sleep outside
Re; What the ######? You have got to be joking.
Ai: What I mean was... can you drop us off at the cave and like circle around a few times then pick us up again?
Eri: JEESUS CHRIST!! WHY DON'T YOU GET A LUV HOTEL LIKE NORMAL PPL?
Ai: ....... ok, drop us off at a love hotel for a few hours then like, be back and get us later.. heaps later..l
Re: And what about us?
Ai: YOU KNOW WHAT? I'LL DRIVE! I DON'T CARE, I CAN BOTH HAVE SEX AND DRIVE QUITE EASILY SO JUST GET OUTA THE CAR AND LET US HAVE SEX OK?
Risa: You mean make love right?
Ai: I MEAN MAKE LOVE!
Eri: Why don't we all just stay at the love hotel in different rooms and meet up in the morning?

*Room goes quiet. Tumbleweed rolls through the scene*

Ai: Or we can do like she said
Re: Ok
Risa: Suits me

*LUV HOTEL ROOM*

As Ai takes off her shirt she sees Risa's eyes glisten with lust. She slowly and erotically strip teases her and then crawls in bed over her, straddling her hips. Ai begins taking Risa's shirt off, then spots her breasts and nearly visibly drools. As she starts unzipping her pants however Risa stops her.
R:Wait!
A:What?
R: I have to tell you something
A: What?
R: I AM A MAN!
XDXDXDXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

sHould I finIsh this chapTer? sHould I lEave it theRE? Did you notice the hidden message?
First person to decode the secret message in the above sentences gets to decide

[ミ☆ Ｍｕｓｈｒｏｏｍ ☆]

R:Wait!
A:What?
R: I have to tell you something
A: What?
R: I AM A MAN!

lmao!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahaha cant stop laughing, nee nee, twiin~~ dont put it inside your perv scene~~ xDDD

[Odori]

sweeety: well if she did write that.. I would be a bit angry with her... (acually I'm a bit angry with for writing that in our thread. Might be the exesive use of bad lanuage but, donno it's simply too disrespectful)

[kamegoo]

@ Odori. waai, argh your shirt. T.T
@ sweety

Ai: What I mean was... can you drop us off at the cave and like circle around a few times then pick us up again?
Eri: JEESUS CHRIST!! WHY DON'T YOU GET A LUV HOTEL LIKE NORMAL PPL?
Ai: ....... ok, drop us off at a love hotel for a few hours then like, be back and get us later.. heaps later..l
Re: And what about us?
Ai: YOU KNOW WHAT? I'LL DRIVE! I DON'T CARE, I CAN BOTH HAVE SEX AND DRIVE QUITE EASILY SO JUST GET OUTA THE CAR AND LET US HAVE SEX OK?
Risa: You mean make love right?
Ai: I MEAN MAKE LOVE!
Eri: Why don't we all just stay at the love hotel in different rooms and meet up in the morning?
*Room goes quiet. Tumbleweed rolls through the scene*

Ai: Or we can do like she said
Re: Ok
Risa: Suits me

this part is just hilarious.. nice thinking Kamei

well anyway.. >_< i dnt want any uhmm misunderstandings here..or sth. or yea.. >____<
peace~

hmmmmm.
right. im drained right now. dnt know if i'll be able to write things.
yay for the exams.
i just shaded randomly

[Xeqcme]

@sweeety "Hi there"
-
This thread keeps staying on top and I keep thinking there's a new chapter up...

[kamegoo]

^ well, sorry for the disappointment..T.T

and i dnt think i made sense on my last post before this.. >________<

[ミ☆ Ｍｕｓｈｒｏｏｍ ☆]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! just write the perv~~ mwehhee TWIIIN~~~

[kamegoo]

OK MINNA-SAN~
let's all sing a good song to Odori~

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wootweew~ PARTY TAYM~

[KaPouk]

Hein!!!! it's Odori Birthday today???
Well happy birthday to you

Yeah for the party time
I always OK for a party *Champagne, Wine, Drink........*

[Jingkoto]

yay~ Happy Birthday to Odori-san
Hope you will have a happy times, more ideas to write the fic and have a dream come true

[ミ☆ Ｍｕｓｈｒｏｏｍ ☆]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ODORI~~~~~~~~

YAY YAY~~

[Odori]

Aww.. I'm getting all tear eyed
thank you all ^^

[Director_Maiha]

Can I say HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY?!!!

[WinterAir]

^lol count me in too director maiha

Happy Birthday Odori!~

wishing you a great birthday and forever filled with great ideas/stories for us readers ^^

[sSlayer]

^Count me in also! Happy late bday Odori!

[Xeqcme]

Merry birthday, writer-man!

[Odori]

and a happy birthday it was ^^ thanks guys

Now we really need to update as soon as Ima sends her stuff I can but... oh I just feel like writing something random to throw up on the thread but... DAMN it's busy at the moment. Thinking someone hates me giving me so much to do till monday Gonna try and not let that stop me

[sSlayer]

^No prob. I know exactly how you feel. School is definately hard!~ Like ppl said, it's the curse for writers.