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[Mieko]

lol...since I've never written something like this, and I'm just folllowing the request, the next chapter is kind of mild for me...as in like bad? >.< I'm only 12 turning 13, so I tried to put as little of these kind of scenes in it, so I hope you guys don't mind the next chapter >.<

[kurosawa87]

well you don't have to make it that far into it, just romantically playful lol

well you know where mines comes into play at this level

[Mieko]

Yeah, I just feel kind of weitrd writing that kind of stuff, but maybe that's just because It's my first time >.<

[kurosawa87]

I feel that you should take it a step at a time and you should imagine how you want each other to feel

[deukkae]

Oh my god, what is Reina going to do? http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/blink.gif

[Mieko]

***Chapter 11***

"R-reina?"

Her expression was cold and indifferent.

It seemed as though her thought were so far away.
Too far away for me to read them.

I could feel my plams sweating.

What's her problem?
Is she going to try to grope me again, because it's not going to happen!

"Ai, you don't know a thing."

What the hell?

I knew more than she thinks I know!
She has no right to just say that I don't know anything!

"You're wrong! I already know your motives!"

She smirked.

"Yeah? Then why don't you tell me what they are?"

"You're trying to get me to leave this house, because you're jealous."

"Well done. Most people wouldn't have been able to figure that out."

"I didn't. Risa told me."

"She knows too much. Smart ass..."

I tried to think of something else to say.

Anything that keeps her talking enough so I can escape is fine.

How is cornering me supposed to get me to leave anyways?

"I-I never knew that Risa liked fencing!" I stated quickly, changing the subject.

She gave me an evil smirk.

"Enough of the small talk. I'm going to break you, so be prepared."

I gulped.

Tanaka Reina.
She was pure evil.

And just when I got started thinking she was actually a good person at heart.

She slid her hands under my shirt.

I squirmed out of her grasp, but it was useless.
She already had too strong of a hold on me.

"What's wrong, Ai? Ready to leave yet?"

I gulped.

This is wrong!
I couldn't let my fear get over me.

"Never! I refuse to lose to you!"

"You'll regret saying that!"

Her hands slid up and grasped my breasts.

I gasped and squirmed even more, until she finally let go.

She glared at me, and once more, climbed on top of me.

She pulled my shirt above my head, and easily slid my skirt off.

She just doesn't want to stop does she.

Before she could lay another finger on me, I slapped her across the face.

"Stay away from me!" I screamed.
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Reina POV

I held my cheek and blinked.

Wow. I didn't expect that.
Although I do think I went a little too far.

After all, I didn't follow my original plan at all.

I planned to keep hurting her and telling her lies, until she'd give in, but I guess I just couldn't help my myself.

Don't get me wrong, I absolutely hate Ai.
She's the worst person yet, because she just can't learn to get her nosy nose out of my business.

Who can stand a person who can't not care about someone who doesn't want to be cared about?

I watched as tears started streaming from her face.

"Why? Why are you doing this? Do you have to take it so far?"

"Because I hate you." I replied.

She stared down at her feet.

I think I already did break her.

"Why do you have to hate me? What did I ever do to you?"

I gulped.

That was a stupid question to ask.

If she was smart, she would've just said nothing, gotten dressed, left, and never come back.

That idiot.
Now she was going to get herself into something...

And I don't want to stop her.

[kurosawa87]

good job on it, very simple not too graphic

i like it very much hope you can write more soon

[Badsaints]

Mieko-chan! You updated!

Reina turning into rapist Now what's gonna happen?

[Ereiriyu]

Finally! ^^ Wow. R-reina?

[Ereiriyu]

I adore Your Fanfic Very much! Since May! i have read all the 10 chapters its really gooD!

Please Do MORE!

[Mieko]

Yeah, I felt really bad writing this chapter...I had this strange pit in my stomach and my face was really red...I think I'm way to yoiung to write something like this, but it turned out fine! I tried to keep it as simple as I could.

Yay! I'm back! >.< Yes! I had my first week of school, so i couldn't update ^.^ I think I'll updat every Friday night or Saturday...

[Shinx]

I have read all eleven chapters, wow you have a clean picture in your fics, good job

[Mieko]

Thanks ^.^

[Razoru]

Pretty good chapter, and like Kuro-san said: simple and not to graphic