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[chiichii]

i just finished reading, i loved both stories
you made me cry, thinkin my chii was gonna die

where can i read more berryz koubou stories?

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

@Hotaru: lol! good to know that! cause I'm a slow reader...

@Miyachii: lol sorry... more Berryz fics? well if only berryz, there are a few that I know. But I read in JPH!P... if your interested in only Berryz, Berry Beautiful is one I'll recommend... There is olso a new one but it has only the prologue but If your also interested on it, its Running up that Road.

[chiichii]

thank you for the links

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

^ your welcome... I myself haven't seen all Berryz fics so that two are the only ones I can tell for now since those are the ones I have read...

[ErikaUmedaFan]

Ahhhhh!!! *sniff* Maimi died! *sniff* ! Great Writing !!!

Poor Airi..and Mai... and All of C-ute

[FaqU]

Great one-shot

Glad to see more Berryz and C-ute fics around.

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

^ thanks! yeah, I was wondering why there are few fics about H!P kids than Morning Musume....

@EUF: Thank you.. I was not going to do a death fic until my sister keep asking one... well... it turns out I have to do one...
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Here is my 4th fic and last for C-ute's batch for now. While I was doing this fic, I was bothered by so many things I need to do for my mom and now that I continued it, I have a different feeling on this fic. Different than my other fics, so now, I don't know what to expect when you guys read it. It maybe boring but I don't know. If this is not as good as my former ones, I am sorry. :sweatdrop: And I'm sorry for having lack of knowledge on C-ute. I'll make sure I make a comeback on my Berryz Fics.
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Misunderstanding

Saki was staring at space with a smirk on her face as Chisato stares at her with one of her eyebrows slightly up. "Saki..." Chisato called as she went closer to Saki. "Saki-chan..." She called once again while taking a small chair to stand up on. When standing on the small chair made her as tall as Saki, she stares at Saki's eyes while leaning forward. "Saki!" Chisato said again but this time, Saki snapped out from her little world, where ever it was and as she came back, she stares at the eyes that are just a few millimeters from her. Saki quickly jumped back as she realizes how close the both of them were.

"Chisato! Don't surprise me like that." Saki spatted as she looks at Chisato while holding her phone near her chest.

Chisato giggles as she balances herself on the small chair before jumping down. "You were staring at nothing again Saki-chan."

Saki inhales and exhales, calming herself before explaining to Chisato. "Ne, Chisa-chan, she said yes!" Nakajima Saki whispered to Chisato's ear before giving out a smirk to her little companion.

"What? I don't get it... Who is she? And why would she say yes?" Chisato asks before tilting her head sidewards, trying to study her friends aura.

Saki shrugs and gives out a sigh before looking back to her friend that is looking at her in a weird way. "I told you before right? I've been thinking about it for almost a month, you know, Kanna and I are closer than ever before." Chisato nodded as she agrees with Saki.

"So? What about it?" Chisato asks with her other eye brow up.

Saki stares at her unknowing companion then lets out a sigh. "You really don't remember Chisa-chan? I told you this before...my-" Saki paused as she looks at her sides just to make sure that no one is near to hear. "My confession." Saki uttered as softly as Chisato can hear.

Chisato's eyes grew wide as she remembered about that. About Saki-chan's plan of confessing to the one she loves most. "So, Kanna-chan-" Saki hissed at her to make the point of making the tone of her voice lower as to no one could hear. "Kanna-chan said yes to your date?" Chisato continued uttering each word slowly and softly as she can as Saki nodded as a yes.

"Our little date would be two days from now but I have to get prepared." Saki told Chisato as she walks slowly away towards the door and after a few seconds, vanished through the darkness of the corridor.

...the next day

Chisato went to Saki's house just to tell her something she had heard from Maimi and Erika. As Saki closed her bedroom door behind her, Chisato started to tell her but as surprised with the news, Chisato spoke the language she only knows when she is in a surprised mode.

"Chisa-chan, stop and calm yourself for a while. I can't understand what your saying." Saki explained as she holds Chisato and escorts her to her bed to take a seat and she sat beside her. When Chisato finally calmed herself, Saki asked her what she was trying to tell earlier.

"Saki-chan! Bad news!" Chisato started and made Saki back away for a little since she doesn't like bad news. "W-what is it?" Saki asks, nervous of what Chisato will say. Chisato stares at her for a while before gulping to clear her throat. She slowly opens her mouth that made Saki back away a little more. "She...She..." Unable to continue, Chisato looks at Saki with a nervous expression. Chisato quickly leaned forward pressing her lips on the girl beside her.

As Chisato backs away, she could see Saki's face that she feared what her expression was. Saki was surprised on what her friend had done, well to her, she was only a friend but to the other... Saki cleared that thought but it kept bothering her until she realizes Chisato was still there, looking down at her shoes, feeling more nervous on what Saki would say.

Silence echoes inside the room until Saki finally speaks. "Chisa-chan-" Saki started but was stopped when Chisato stood up holding her school bag and said, "I forgot, my mother told me to buy things from the super market." It was a lame excuse but that is all she could think of at that moment since she was frightened on what the other girl will say. She didn't wait for Saki's reply as she walks out of her room and took her leave. Saki stares at the door where Chisato left but the thought of what happened earlier made her blush.

Wait! What is this? Why am I blushing? Saki suddenly asks herself as she covers her mouth trying to figure out. Did I...

...the next day

"Saki-chan! I heard you were going to go to a date today!" Maimi teased as she walks around Saki with Umeda behind her.

"How did you guys know?" Saki asks as she looks at Chisato's way and gives her a glare that made Chisato look down in embarassment.

"Now, now... No need to glare at Chisato, she is not the one who told us. It was Kanna." Erika said since she saw Chisato's reaction.

"Yeah, it was Kanna," Maimi started as she takes a chair and sits beside Saki. "But, didn't Chisato tell you yesterday?" Erika added making Saki turn to her with a confused look.

Before she could ask what it was, the memory of yesterday took over her. Her cheeks started to get red but tried to hide it from the two older girls, but failed.

"Saki-chan!" Erika gasped. "Why are you turning red?" Maimi added in an interested tone.

Saki's cheeks turned more red as the two got more interested on why she was blushing. "Its nothing..." Saki answered trying to hide the trembling on her voice.

Maimi and Erika huddled up and started debating with their guesses while Saki was still trying to control herself. Stop it Saki. There is no reason for you to blush like this. She told herself but the touch of Chisato's lips from yesterday made her blush more.

When Maimi and Erika finally finished their conversation, they turned to Saki once again. "If this is correct, we'll officially announce it to all other members of C-ute and to our fellow Berryz Koubou." Maimi teased as Saki couldn't get any redder. "Something happened to you and Chisato yesterday, right?" Erika asked as she stares at Saki's face, trying to catch her gaze.

"You could say that..." Saki finally answered flushing as she spoke.

Maimi and Erika put their hands together before telling Saki all their guesses and to her surprise, they were right on everything. "You know what this means Saki-chan..." Maimi started turning her back from her and skipping to the door. "We're gonna tell the others, so get ready for their surprises when they see you." Erika added with a smirk as she followed Maimi out the door.

Trying her best to calm herself down, Chisato finally came up to her. "You should be leaving now Saki-chan." Chisato greeted. "Only 5 minutes left before your date with Kanna-chan." Chisato whispered not wanting to say that but she should. Saki looks at the girl in front of her but before she could say anything, Chisato uttered two words before leaving.

"Good luck."

Saki's gaze followed Chisato out the door but found it disturbing since she thought she saw tears falling from Chisato's eyes. Leaving that thought, she started to get down to the entrance to meet up with Kanna.

Do I think of her as that way? Saki asked herself while going down the stairs. If I do, I should have known about it before since we are best friends and we are always together... Saki added as she walks to the entrance of the building where Kanna was waiting.

"You're late." Kanna greeted with a pout on her face. "Sorry, got caught up with Maimi-chan and Erika-chan's attention." Saki explained as she led Kanna out.

After spending an hour out with Kanna, Saki was again bothered by her feelings for Chisato, when Kanna finally started a conversation. "Don't you think you shouldn't be here?" Kanna asked, snapping Saki out of her blank gaze from afar. "W-what?" Saki replied not understanding what the other girl meant.

Kanna looks at her kind of disappointed on Saki for not responding as she thought she would.

"Aren't you supposed to be with Chisato?" Kanna finally blurted out not wanting to go around the bush anymore. Saki looks at Kanna, surprised on what she heared. "You should be with Chisato right?" Kanna said again, trying to convince Saki to leave and go to Chisato. Knowing Saki won't go immediately, she stands up and pulls Saki to stand up. "Chisato likes you Saki. She likes you more than I do. I'm sorry." Kanna explained as she was still pulling Saki to the direction they were from. "And you like her also more than me." Kanna ended as she stopped and looks at Saki.

Saki, finally realizing what the girl was saying, excused herself and ran towards Chisato's house. Why didn't I realize it before? Kanna wasn't the one that kept my heart beating fast... Saki took a right turn before stopping in front of Chisato's house. She waited for someone to answer the door after she pressed the doorbell. With a warm greeting, Chisato's mother let Saki in and escorted her to Chisato's room which Chisato opened and shut after Saki went in the room.

"Why are you here?" Chisato asks, turning herself to wipe her tears without Saki finding out.

"I'm here because I realized something..." Saki started, walking slowly towards Chisato whose back was turned to her.

"What is it?" Chisato asks before closing her eyes, getting ready for what the other girl would say.

Saki stopped just a few centimeters away from her before saying, "I'm not inlove with Kanna." There came a long pause that Chisato's heart keep racing faster.

"I'm in love with you, Chisato." Saki whispered and as soon as it sipped in Chisato's head, she turned to face Saki but was surprised when Saki leaned forward and kissed her intimately. It didn't take long that Chisato closed her eyes and enjoyed the afternoon with the one she loved that she almost lost.
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Chapter Fic (I'm working on it and I've only finished with the Prologue)
Torn in Two

[deukkae]

You're doing good Panick-chan.

[deukkae]

Like I said before Panick-chan, you're doing a good job on those one-shots!

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

^ lol... sorry about that... I need to get this negative part of me out...

[hekomirukii]

Nice one shots ._.! They are so awesome especially the YajiSuzu one because I like em more than GEM!
Dont kill me! But yeah Im starting to like ChNatsu

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

^ no worries.. I won't kill you..
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Here is my 5th One-shot! And a Berryz One!
When I write Berryz One-Shot, it doesn't take long to think and to write. But when I write C-ute one-shots... I get lost... So I really need to pay more attention to C-ute from now on... (but not as big of attention on Berryz.. )
Enjoy! I hope this makes you smile, giggle or even laugh...

Unspoken Feelings

Maasa and Kumai came out of the cinema, Kumai clenched tightly on Maasa's arm. "You were the one who asked for a scary movie, telling me your not going to get scared, and now look." Maasa complained as Kumai held her arm tightly.

"I don't want to die!" Kumai whispered that only Maasa could hear.

Maasa rolls her eyes and leads Kumai in a sushi resto. Making Yurina sit down came hard since Kumai still won't let her go.

"Okay! Look, I'll sit beside you, okay? Just stop holding my arm. I can't feel it anymore." At last, Kumai let go of her arm and at the same time, snapping out of her dark-horror-scary-movie world.

"I'm sorry." Kumai apologized as she looks down at the table, embarassed to look at the older girl.

Giving out a smile, Maasa pats the younger girls back before sitting down beside her. "Its okay Kumai-chan..."

Their sushi arrived and placed in the middle of the table. Maasa was already going to get one when she realizes Kumai hasn't moved nor did she say anything after her apology. Maasa puts down her chopsticks and waits for Kumai to take one.

"Kumai-chan, the food is already here." She says as she looks at Kumai who was getting redder as Maasa kept leaning forward to look at her face.

Not noticing what the younger girl is feeling, Maasa still keeps on moving her head closer to Kumai to look at her face when suddenly, Kumai looks her direction. Frozen on their position, realizing what has just happened, Kumai was the first one who broke out of it and looks more farther away as she can feel her heart beat faster.

Maasa on the other hand, sit still and surveys the area only to find out that almost everyone in the store was looking their way. What an embarassing thing to see... Maasa tolds herself as the people around them goes back to their own matters.

Maasa looks at Kumai once again, finally noticing her red cheeks that made Maasa's redder. Maasa takes her chopsticks, lifting one sushi from the plate then calls Kumai. Kumai responded as she looked at the older girl and saw her holding her chopsticks with a sushi between each stick. Kumai looks at the sushi then to Maasa.

"Ah..." Maasa said as she demonstrates how to open her mouth. Getting what the older girl was saying, she opens her mouth wide enough for the sushi to fit in. As she chews on the sushi the older girl gave her, her cheeks started to get red again but as she looks at the girl beside her, she could see that her cheeks are much more red than hers. Trying not to giggle, she took her chopsticks and also gave one to her senpai.

It didn't take long that they started to get comfortable and they started to chat that seemed not to end but as the last sushi was gone, they fixed themselves before leaving. Outside, they walked by an ice cream store which they didn't intend to just pass by without buying. Kumai got herself strawberry flavored ice cream while Maasa bought plain and simple vanilla.

They once again fell into deep conversations that almost made Kumai leap for joy. I should take this chance... Maasa told herself, now knowing that Kumai is interested on her.

"Kumai-chan..." Maasa started with a serious look that Kumai made fun of but stopped when she realized that Maasa was really serious.

"What is it Maa-chan?" Kumai asks in tilting her head to the side and awaits for the older girl to respond.

Maasa gulped down a little from her cup of water before turning to Kumai. "I was saying earlier that...I have this dream that I want to be true..." Maasa started, trying hard not to panic away.

Kumai, still confused, waits patiently while scooping a teaspoon full of ice cream. "That the one I love would be mine." Maasa still being serious as she plays with the melted vanilla ice cream inside her cup.

"The one I want to be wiith..." Maasa lets go of her spoon and stares at Kumai trying to pass signals to her brain, You Kumai! You! I want you to be mine! but it seems that Kumai couldn't get the message.

"Nevermind... forget about it..." Maasa suddenly said and Kumai looks at her trying to give her the sign to continue but she didn't.

After finishing their sweet treat which Maasa found a little bland since she was still dissapointed that Kumai couldn't tell what she was trying to point out. They ended their little date as soon as they arrived at Kumai's house. They said their goodbye's as Kumai thanked Maasa for the great day.

While walking alone to go home, Maasa wanted to kick herself but can't. "Why can't I still tell her?!" She asked herself in an irritated voice. "Until when should I keep this to myself?" She asked once again and the questions came one after another making herself drowned in her own questions.

"I love you... Is that so hard to say?!" Maasa's last question to herself as she stopped walking and sits down on a bench in front of a wonderful fountain. It's beautiful... I wish Kumai was here to see this...

As she was staring at the falling water on the fountain, she finally jumped up from her sitting position and tells herself, Tomorrow! I'll tell her tomorrow!

Telling herself didn't stop her excitement that she stands on the bench, raising both her hands up. "TOMORROW! TOMORROW I'll TELL KUMAI YURINA THAT I LIKE HER!"

After realizing that she was not alone, she looks around seeing the people staring at her. She smiles at the people and gets down the bench, making her cheeks turn red because of embarrassment. What an embarassing thing to see...

As she started to walk away, a tall girl was giggling at the other side of the fountain. So I know what to expect tomorrow... Kumai uttered as she giggled again as she walks home with the funny Maasa in her head.

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

What happened before I write the next chapter
When I was out to buy coke, I finally got the motivation I needed to do the next chapter and maybe finish it tonight and post it tomorrow. When I came home, I checked out some forum threads until I saw this one news that made me lose the motivation. I was really shocked and the news made me uneasy and wondered how Chinami was doing now. Chinami collapsed in their concert just before they were going to sing Sono Subete no Ai ni. (GOSH! My Chinami! :cry:) I felt like crying but I need to believe that she is fine and will recover. I don't want to jump into cconclusions so I'll leave my thoughts until there. So maybe, if I get over Chinami's incident, well, at least until I finish writing the first chapter. So please wait for it. I'll do my best while Chinami is also doing her best. Ganbare, Chii-chan! :twothumbs

P/S: I'll post the fic a little later, I'm just going to start writing.
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Chapter 1 - Unexpected News

Not taking her eyes of the girl in front, Saki tugged Miyabi's hand, telling her that they will take their leave. "Miya-chan, let's go." Saki whispered as Miyabi got closer to her. Miyabi looked at the person that made Saki feel uncomfortable at just a simple encounter. Miyabi wanted to greet the other girl when Saki pulled her and led her away from the scene.

Arriving finally in Miyabi's house, Saki tiptoed as she leans in to press her lips unto the taller girl. "I hope you had a great time today." Saki asks with a smile that made Miyabi smile back. "I know I did." Miyabi replied before placing the keys on the lock, opening the door. A click was heard as Miyabi opens the door then looks at Saki.

"Well, see you again next week." Saki carefully said as her smile faded when the other girl showed a pout.

"So we can't see each other this week?" Miyabi asked in a pleading tone.

"I'm sorry Miya but school is busy and you also have things to settle." Saki explained, but seeing Miyabi looking down, Saki tried to cheer her up. "Hey, don't think of it as a bad thing." She started, "Think of it as a week that I'll miss you so much."

Miyabi looks at the smaller girl, letting her know she's already okay with the idea but made her promise that she will come by next week. Saki didn't turn her down but pressed her lips on Miyabi as her response. So this means yes... Miyabi told herself as she joins the pleasure by kissing her girlfriend back.

...a week has passed

"Aren't you going to come in?" Miyabi asks and waits for the other girl to respond.

Why can't I forget about that incident? Saki kept thinking, until Miyabi poked her hard on her side.

"Ow..." Saki cried as she holds the place in pain and looks at Miyabi.

"Is there someone else in your mind than me?" Miyabi asks with a jealous stare.

"No! I just recalled a homework I need to do over later." Saki said in defense and tried not to stumble on any word that might led Miyabi to what she was really thinking.

"Oh. Well, then, do you want to come in or do your homework?" Miyabi asks with a smirk on her face, taunting Saki to try and make a mistake on choosing.

Yokatta... That was close... Saki thought as she followed Miyabi inside and closes the door behind.

Miyabi introduced Saki to her mother once again since it has been a long time since Saki came to her house for a visit. "Just tell me if you girls need anything." Was the last thing Saki heard from Miyabi's mother as Miyabi closes the door of her room.

"I'm glad that was over. Mom could get so hyped up when we have visitors." Miyabi explains while Saki giggles on how she was acting.

Miyabi kept silent as her cheeks grew red. She was trying to put her attention on her shoes as she bumps the soles of each shoe together but it didn't take long when two shoes came to view and when she looked up, Saki was just a few centimeters away from her. Miyabi couldn't take her eyes of Saki's as her heart beat fast and before she knew it, her lips were locked with her girlfriend. She slowly closed her eyes, as she enjoys the thrill happening to her at the moment. Saki slid her arms around Miyabi's waist as she pulls her closer. No one could explain how they were feeling at that moment, even Saki who was more mature than Miyabi couldn't find the words to explain it all but all she could think of is that it was indescribable.

Breaking their passionate encounter, Miyabi grinned at the Saki before walking to the bed, sliding herself under the covers. Saki smirked as she knew what the other was trying to say. She followed the younger girl and slid under the covers, cuddling the one beside her. There they continued their unbreakable desire for each other, until Miyabi's phone vibrated in her pocket. She didn't want to break the moment so she ignored it. Seconds has passed but the vibration on Miyabi's pocket didn't cease. Miyabi nudge Saki gently away as she sits up to answer the call that disturbed them.

"Wh-at is - it Ri-sa-ko?" Miyabi asked still breathing heavily, trying to catch her breathe.

"Miya-chan! Is something wrong? You sound like your gasping for air..." The voice of the younger girl echoed from the other line.

Miyabi holds her hair up as she closes her eyes and breathes in for more oxygen before looking at Saki, but the older girl was laying down still, looking at the ceiling. "Nothing's wrong Risako... I-I was just doing my afternoon exercise." Miyabi lied as she lays down, snuggling beside the other girl that hugged her as soon as she is in a comfortable position.

"So Miya-chan, are you free tomorrow?" Risako suddenly asks while sitting down on the edge of her bed moving her feet up and down, waiting for the other girls response.

"uhmmm..." Miyabi stopped to think and looks at Saki pressing her phone on her chest so that Risako won't hear. "Risako's asking me if I'm free tomorrow." Saki looked at her, confused but agreed to let her go with the younger girl tomorrow.

Miyabi agreed to go with Risako to the clothing store tomorrow to help her pick new clothes for the upcoming party Risako was attending. With that settled, Miyabi put her phone back in her pocket and snuggled more closer to Saki and the other wrapped her arms around the snuggling tiger.

"I'm letting you go with her tomorrow, but don't let anything happen between the two of you. I'm a jealous person." Saki warned as she held Miyabi tighter. Miyabi could sense the seriousness on the older girls tone that she just nodded before feeling a slight warm peck on her forehead.

Silence entered the room as they stayed closer together not wanting to let go of the other. Miyabi took a peek at her girlfriends face and still couldn't believe that she is now having Saki-chan, their captain as her girlfriend, HER girlfriend.

As she finally sees Saki's face, she could tell that the older girl was not with her, yes she is with her now, physically but mentally and emotionally, she wasn't. Saki's gaze made Miyabi pout but she was curious on what the other was thinking. She was about to say something when Saki first spoken.

"Miya-chan..." She started, "When you are looking for something important but couldn't find it..." Miyabi looks curiously at Saki as she waits for her to continue. "You start to ignore everything that wants to take its place."

Not moving, Miyabi tries to understand what the other was saying.

"Are you still with me Miya?" Saki asks looking down at the still form of Miyabi. "Yes, I'm still here." She heard her say before continuing.

"You reject everything, until this one time, this one coincidence, you let something in and it appears you grow fond of this new thing before realizing you have moved on from the one you lost." Saki paused as she tries to come up with the next appropriate words while playing with the younger girls hair.

"Years have passed and you were having the greatest time with the new one when suddenly, the one you lost came back and you realize you really haven't moved on." Feeling dizzy from what the other girl was trying to say, Miyabi sits up straight looking at Saki as she also sits up.

Miyabi studied the girl’s face, which held the feelings of worry and sadness. "I don't understand what you were saying. Did something happen?"

Saki looks at he edge of the bed where her hand was tugging the end of the blanket. "Remember last week, we were walking until I froze on the spot?"

Miyabi looks at the girl, trying to recall what happened next. Ah! Yes, I remember. That time, Saki-chan froze when she saw- Her eyes widened when the idea popped in her head.

"So..." Miyabi started, looking at Saki with her eyes of defeat. "You still didn't get over Megu..." Miyabi's voice faded as the older girl looks at her with the eyes that couldn't hide the truth.

Slowly getting out of the bed and walking a few steps farther, Saki finally explains her side. "You're right. I haven't gotten over Megu...but not until you came in and replaced that lost feeling." Miyabi couldn't control herself as her cheeks turn red.

Why am I blushing in this serious conversation... Miyabi asks herself covering her face for Saki not to notice.

"But seeing Megu-chan a week ago made me feel I want her again..." Miyabi's blush fades as she heard what Saki said. Stepping out of her bed, Miyabi walked towards Saki whose back was still turned to her.

"I have been thinking about it the past week and came to a conclusion..." Miyabi could feel her heart beat fast as she was frightened to learn what this conclusion is. Could it be bad for her? For them? or For both Saki and her?

Before Saki could continue, she felt a warm feeling behind her and the arms that held her tighter. It feels warm when the one you love holds you. She thought while enjoying it for the time being. "I..." Miyabi could only close her eyes tighter not wanting to think that Kami-sama was punishing her. She couldn't think of anything she had done to get that kind of punishment until Saki continued.

"I, I was just obsessed. Obsessed to talk to her again. Obsessed to get to spend time with her again but..." Miyabi felt sudden warmth on her hands when she realized Saki took them both and held onto them, releasing herself from Miyabi's hug.

Saki turns to look at Miyabi's face that held an expression she wouldn't want to give her again. "I'm not in love with her anymore." Saki whispered as she walks closer to the other girl and gives her the only thing that would let her know she was the one Saki loves.

[deukkae]

Okay...how I felt about this...

I loved Maasa & Yurina!!!

That pair is awesome!

Keep going!

[Miss Behave]

a really heart-felt chapter
i loved it, good job ^^

[Glasseyelashes]

ooo! a jealous saki! that's scary!

chinami collapsed? i hadn't heard anything about that. has anyone said anything about what could've caused it?

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

@Inspectah Glasses: Well, Momo said Chinami just used too much energy but she is fine. That's all. Thank you for reading!

@Miss Behave: Its great to know that you loved it. Thank you!

It gives me more reason to continue fics when people respond to them... even if the comment is just a smiley.

[FaqU]

WHEN DID CHINAMI COLLAPSE?????!!!!!!

Where did you hear this??????

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

^ She collapsed in their concert, it just happened recently, I think it was just yesterday or a day ago... She collapsed before they sing Sono Subete no Ai ni. You can check it out in the Berryz Koubou thread or the Tokunaga Chinami Thread.
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Because I was sooo eager to post this... here it is... Chapter 2...
I don't know why they keep coming in.. they won't let me rest.. these ideas...
anyway... about this chapter... all I can say is... ENJOY!
oh yeah... I'm sorry if Miyabi's attitude here is a little different... well I can't really say a little, can I?
So once again.. I don't know what to expect from you guys...
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Chapter 2 - Desire

Arriving in Shibuya, the very well known shopping district in Japan, Miyabi stops over every store they pass by, browsing on every cute things she sees. "Ah!" She gasps as she pulls Saki towards a very famous shoe shop, Nike.

Saki's eyes widened as she surveys the shop, didn't want to look at the price tags until Miyabi shoves a pair of pink colored rubber shoes laced with white colored stripes on the sides, has a check logo at the rear and white shoelace. "Don't they look cute?" Miyabi asks excitedly as she keeps skipping around Saki holding both shoes tightly.

Saki laughs as she watches Miyabi skipping around like how a kid would do when she finds something she really likes. "Miya-chan, would you please stop skipping around? The store manager is already looking at us." Saki warned as she looks at the store manager and bows a little in apology.

Stopping as she saw the older girl bowing down, she felt a little ashamed on how she acted as she also bows down. "I'm sorry." Miyabi apologizes as she puts her hands down walking back to the place where she saw the shoes she wanted to buy.

Saki walks behind her as Miyabi places the shoes back to its proper place. "How much is that?" Saki asks before reaching out for the price tag. Saki's eyes widened as she reads the tag. 100,000 yen... In shock on how much that cute pink colored shoes cost, as she stares at the tag, she could see three, slowly circling around. She releases the tag as she closes her eyes to take out the dizziness she feels.

"Well..." Miyabi asks, her hands clasped together, placed a little under her chin in a form of praying. As she pleads Kami-sama to let her buy the shoes even if its so expensive for walking shoes.

The older girl looks at Miyabi, staring at her eyes, those eyes that seem to tell she really wanted those shoes. Saki looks at the shoes again before giving a sigh. "Do you really want this?"

Miyabi nodded her head continually as Saki takes the shoe, examining it from all sides. "Miya-chan..." Saki calls as she puts back the shoe. Seeing Saki putting back the shoe, she finally accepted the fact that it was impossible for her to buy that. Well, yeah, they get lots of money from work but they keep it for savings and help their parents for household bills. So it’s really impossible... She tells herself as she looks at Saki who was still staring at the shoes. Maybe next time. For sure, the price will drop down in a few months.

Holding Saki's hand, she led her out the store. "You don't want to buy those shoes?" The older girl asks as she stops and pulls Miyabi to a stop.

"I will." Miyabi answered as she slid both her hands to each back pocket of her pants, trying not to get caught on Saki's stare.

"Then why are we leaving?" Saki asks, confused on why the taller girl walk out the store, not buying the thing she wanted, the shoes that she held tightly before not wanting to let go.

"I don't have the money now to buy it." Miyabi explains as her cheeks turn slightly red.

Saki looks down as she finally realized the situation. I should have brought more extra money. If only I knew she wants a shoe that expensive... And as her girlfriend... I should have bought it for her... Looking at Miyabi who was still looking down as she sways her body sideways.

"I'm sorry..." Saki finally said finally catching Miyabi's eyes. "I should have known this was coming and I should have brought extra money and-" Saki stops as Miyabi placed her finger on her lips to cease her from saying nonsense.

She shakes her head, "You don't need to say anything about not buying it for me." Smiling to her worried looking girlfriend. Seeing her still not cheering up, Miyabi gently pressed her lips unto the smaller girls lips. Surprised on what the other had done in a public place, Saki's face turned red.

"It's okay. I can buy that when the price goes down. It will take several months but I still have many outdoor shoes to use." Miyabi explains as she holds the other girls hand, trying to let Saki forgive herself.

Still looking down, Saki still couldn't forgive herself but as she looks at the taller girls eyes, she let her know that she finally forgives herself by giving out a heart-melting smile.

That finally over, a voice came calling over from behind. Saki leans over to the right to see who was calling and finds out that it was Risako. "It's Risako..." Saki warned staying calm and cool as usual while Miyabi lets go of her hand before looking back, seeing Risako pulling to a stop beside her.

Catching some air, Risako looks at Miyabi looking a little white as she overdo herself on running. "Sorry I'm late Miya."

"Its okay. Your not late at all." She smiles at the younger girl that made Risako's cheek go red. Noticing the sudden change in color, Saki looks at Miyabi then to Risako. I'm not jealous....

Finally gaining back her composure, Risako finally noticed their Captain standing in front of them. "Captain. I didn't notice you were there. Sorry."

"That's okay Risako." Saki replied and gave out a smile.

"Well then, let's go." Miyabi says to Risako before smiling to Saki. "We're going." She wanted to kiss Saki but she can't as the youngest was here and they haven't talked about spreading the news about them.

"Okay then. Take care you two, and I hope you get the clothes you like Risako." Captain reminded the both of them and waited for them first to take their leave.

"You're not coming with us Captain?" Risako asks, also a form of invitation.

Saki shook her head. "Sorry, I love too but I have a practicum I need to finish."

"What practicum?" Miyabi asks not believing that her girlfriend didn't tell her before.

"A practicum for Community Service. I'll tell you about it later, for now, the two of you enjoy the rest of the day." Saki didn't wait for them to leave as she intended to but she was the first to leave. Leaving Miyabi still confused and disappointed.

Miyabi's gaze followed Saki as she enters a store a few meters away. I don't understand...What is this practicum all about?

Feeling a tug on her shirt, she snapped out of her thoughts as she looks at Risako. "Hmm?"

"Let's go!" Risako replied while tugging Miyabi's arm to the nearest clothing store.


...an hour has passed


"How about here?" Miyabi asks while pointing at the store in front of them.

Risako looks at the clothes that were being shown at the other side of the glass. Please let this be the store... Miyabi pleaded as she waits for the younger to respond. Since they've been gone to every clothing store they passed by but nothing was bought. Finally moving her head away from the glass, she held Miyabi's hand and leads her inside. Yes! Thank you!

Inside, they browsed on every rack they saw until they took out some shirts, dresses, skirts and blouses for Risako to try on. Walking to the changing room, Miyabi waits for Risako in the waiting room, just outside the changing rooms. Scanning the room, she found a beanbag to sit on while she waits. I wonder if what we pick will suit her. Miyabi wondered as she stares at the door where Risako went in.

Minutes has passed and Risako went in and out of the changing room to change into each clothes they picked. Going back in as she started to try the last clothing that hangs beside the mirror.

After a few minutes, the door opens, revealing Risako in a blue-green dress with traces of little white and pink colors around bottom. Miyabi froze as she looks at the girl as she twirls, showing off the dress that seems she likes very much. Her cheeks grew red, liking...no, loving what she was seeing. Can't control herself, she sat there, still frozen with her cheeks red, her mouth, dropping as she looks at the other girl who was still showing off the great looking dress.

Finally contented in showing it off, she now turns to Miyabi. She find it kind of odd that Miyabi was sitting in front of her, not moving and her mouth a little open, but it made her blush when the thought that Miyabi was checking her out came popping in her mind.

"So... How is it?" Risako finally asks, snapping back the frozen girl into reality.

"You look great - I mean beautiful." Miyabi corrected as she was getting sucked into the other girls appeal.

Risako turned red after hearing the other girl’s response, feeling a little bit of change in the room temperature.

Still haven't said a word after her last comment, Risako walks closer to her since she will show off the cute little white and pink colors at the bottom when she lost her balance and fell. As the impact occurred, Risako thought she was going to hurt herself much more but the impact that occurred seemed not right. Opening her eyes, a familiar face was just a few centimeters away from hers. Staring at the older girl in surprise, she thought of standing up but her legs won't move.

Looking down at the face of the fallen angel, Miyabi can't lift her arms and legs as if held in place by an invisible rope. As they stare at each other, each feeling the warmth the other gives. Risako started to slowly leaning forward staring at Miyabi's eyes then to her lips then to her eyes again, trying to tell the other girl what she wants. Miyabi could feel her heart beat faster than before as Risako started to lean forward. Is this a good idea? I have a girlfriend... i shouldn't... but... Risako's face kept getting closer. but...her lips... looks so soft... I... I want to.. Miyabi leaned forward as she pressed her lips unto Risako's. Miyabi wrapped her arms around the younger girl as she pulls her closer.

Is this how it feels when you cheat on your girlfriend? Miyabi asks herself as she enjoys the time her lips were locked unto Risako's. Its wrong... but it feels great... When Risako breaks their kiss, Miyabi wanted more and leaned in again. Not getting a push back, it seems the younger girl still wants to continue. They kept their lips locked in a passionate encounter when the door swings open. The two was startled to a stop and looks at the doorway.

"I... I-I'm sorry for disturbing you..." The voice from the figure on the doorway said. Panic and embarrassment echoing from her voice. The person quickly grabbed the doorknob and closed it behind her.

They couldn't see the face of the person who just ruined the great time they were having because of the lights behind, that made them a little blind. The only thing they know is that it was only an employee because of the color of the clothes the person was wearing.

"That's what we get when we don't lock the door." Risako giggles as she looks at Miyabi.
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Can't believe I wrote something like that...
Comments please! :heart:

[Miss Behave]

NNNNOOOO!!!!
WHY MIYABI...WHY?!?!
Oh maaannn, poor captain!

P.S. Keep those ideas flowin' i'm loving these updates