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[ミ☆ Ｍｕｓｈｒｏｏｍ ☆]

ah~~poor Eri~~
probably ex-boyfriend of Eri? keep it up~~^^

[KaPouk]

Great
Poor Eri, when she's logg On the other members logg Off >__<
it's Eri's Ex-boyfriend???
Can't wait to read more >.<

[sSlayer]

OK, I have to say..I'm lost. Sorry. Anyways here are a few questions of mine.

1.Ok, so how did Eri betray Reina? (cus u started saying how Reina asked Yuko what to do if someone betrayed u, but where does it state that Eri betrayed Reina?)
2. Wat's with the ex-bf thing? (unless it has something to do w/ Eri betrayal)

[WinterAir]

OK, I have to say..I'm lost. Sorry. Anyways here are a few questions of mine.

1.Ok, so how did Eri betray Reina? (cus u started saying how Reina asked Yuko what to do if someone betrayed u, but where does it state that Eri betrayed Reina?)
2. Wat's with the ex-bf thing? (unless it has something to do w/ Eri betrayal)

@1:hmm... I guess as they are really good friend, eri had developed feelings of more than friendship towards reina... and reina unable to accept it...(yet lol maybe) thinks that eri shudn't be doing something like that? thats my thought...

@2: I think they're referring to Eri's scandal?(can't really call it a scandal... but I think it was in friday magazine) with her ex, supposedly this guy took out pics stating that he was eri's ex. no idea... about if it is real or not... but eri denied, and I take her word for it. and its kinda the past... so nobody really cares...? ... so in this story... I guess its being used as a photoshoped item.

[sSlayer]

^Oh, then that's kinda weird. I know about the scandal at all. So it appears that Reina is using that as a photoshopped picture to get Eri to not like her. That's so weird cus Eri suddenly developing feelings for Reina other than friendship isn't really like a betray. Oh wells, waiting for the next chapter. Hopefull it'll make more sense.

[WinterAir]

^Oh, then that's kinda weird. I know about the scandal at all. So it appears that Reina is using that as a photoshopped picture to get Eri to not like her. That's so weird cus Eri suddenly developing feelings for Reina other than friendship isn't really like a betray. Oh wells, waiting for the next chapter. Hopefull it'll make more sense.

>.< those were just my thoughts trying to clear things up, but of course we won't know what happens until the next chap thats out >.< hopefully its soon lol. and sorry about my explanations... I kind of feel like they added to the confusion sryz >.<

[sweeety]

chip shop salt and vinegar.

[Ishikawaluvr]

Well, right now I've got some writer's block ;;

But as to clarify a few things...

@WinterAir: It's not reffering to Eri's scandal, Reina photoshopped a pic of Eri in with a man, and sent it out as a red herring.

@sweeety: No one else was really giving them the cold shoulder (or at least I think ) but I did that more for comedic effect. Reina, at this point is more scared than anything, and through her understanding she's attempting to get Eri away from her, by doing things to make sure Eri doesn;t cross her path.


Oh, and as an FYI, I just danced a KILLER medley (if anyone else wants to give it a shot, the 2nd Medley from Single Daizenshuu is insane Especially towards the end!)

[sSlayer]

^So Reina is just trying to stop Eri from falling in love with her by doing what Eri doesn't like. Well then, I wonder what's with the betrayal things. Maybe Eri did something bad before and Reina was having a little conversation with Koharu about it at the beginning; that's why she acted cold towards Eri and slapped her. I wonder what Eri did? Go out with Gaki-san?

[Ishikawaluvr]

Well, the reason Reina said "betrayed" she figured Yuko would be able to get good revenge advice that way ;;

[WinterAir]

so... when is the next chapter? >.< I won't be able to hold off my craving for long.... I'm gonna need an update soon please ^^ lol

[kamegoo]

pfttt. the last part made me crack up. poor Kamei..hahah. "hey guys!" everyone logged off.
ahah
this is brilliant.
hmmm/.
now..maybe i could do some stalking here too.
mehehe..
>:]

[sweeety]

gruel

[yupshezeducated]

okay so here's my take:
Eri likes Reina

Reina slapped her and feels betrayed because she feels Eri betrayed therir friendship in a sorta relationships with friends sometimes complicate things
for the worse and you lose the closeness you once shoud... did that make sense i hope it did??? anywho the slap i felt was a "TAD" bit unnecessary lol
but I could imagine Reina to be a little drama queen she seems like the type lol

HAHA Chicken Breast!!!

TAKAGAKI LOVE!!! I kinda lol at there directness and openess esp with very good relationship advice from Ai though... btw I love how you incorprated
the clip (at least I think you did) where gaki said she's doesn't like being late because she disapoints her members and yossie but esp. Ai who gets
really upset, and made it slightly perverted YAY!

LOVED THE IRC CHAT!!!!!!!!!!! sooo... Reina photoshopped Eri in a compromising postion with a boy??? which is mean and taking it a "LITTLE" bit too far
(drama-queen haha i soo called it)... poor Eri everyone exiting as soon as she signed on where is the love yo

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In short... I LOVED IT!!! and need MOORE!! ... moore in a more with emphasis by adding more o type of way and not in a roger moore/ james bond short of way... nevermind BASICALLY you need to update or I'll go crazy but uh no pressure

[Lawrence]

cant stop laughing at the IRC names lol, anyway.... so you have writters block? lol, good luck on that! i was gonna post my own fic but yeah, dont want to till i've made at least 5 chapters.