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[XxShadowYankiixX]

Hello and welcome to my storybook from hell. Let's get started with the 1st story from the fire pit.



It Snows In Hell
Chapter 1


You did the trick
I didn't see it coming
I did not hear a sound

Though you were quick
I will not be forgiving

You won't be waiting for my return
I promise baby - You'll burn

Now it snows in hell
This is the day foretold till death do us apart
Now it snows in hell
I've gone away but I've got you in my heart
All frozen and scarred


I ran and ran as fast as I could. I had no regrets. Nobody will know. Nobody is going to catch me. Not even the Devil himself. I ran to my house and closed the door and locked it. "Momo-chan! Where have you been?!" An angry familiar voice asked. "Chill out Chisa! I was out for a walk." I responded coolly. She looked at me suspiciously and just ended the conversation by walking away. I went in the kitchen and cooked some ramen noodles. "Chisa, do you want some ramen?" I shouted. I heard no response. "Chisa!!" I shouted. Again no response. Suddenly, I heard a scream coming from Chisa's room. I rushed to her room to see what’s wrong and I couldn't believe my eyes. On her wall it was written "CONFESS WHAT YOU DID OR YOUR GIRLFRIEND LOSES HER HEAD" in blood. “Momo! What is this?" Chisa asked bewildered. "I don't know, but they got the wrong person." I responded. "Momoko. If there anything you need to tell me just spit it out!" Chisa shouted. I didn't say anything. Now isn't the time for confrontation. I just left the room and on my way out of the house. "Where are you going?" Chisa asked. “Out." I bluntly said and left. I couldn’t risk telling her and now she’s in danger. I went to the park, laid down on the grass and stared at the stars. She deserved to be killed. She was a nuisance, a bitch, and a good for nothing whore. “I bet you think you’re gonna get with this don’t you, ya little bitch?” A mysterious voice asked. I look up to see some chick that reminds of those damn bunnies. “And who the ###### is you?” I asked, getting up. “Sayumi. Now, are you gonna confess or things gonna get bloody.” She said getting straight to the point. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” I said, and then left the park in a swift movement. What I did was none of her damn business. I killed Sugaya Risako and nobody is gonna do anything about it and I’ll make sure of it.
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Sorry for the short chapter I'll try to make it longer next time

[kagaki]

This is amazing so far
Can't wait for more

[XxShadowYankiixX]

@ Kagaki: thanx for the support
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Chapter 2
Part 1/2

To make sure this murder can stay on the low, I need to tie up some loose ends. First, I need to kill that damn bunny. Second, I need to get rid of any witnesses. Thirdly, I need to get Chisa and get to the nearest plane out of Japan. I hear my phone ring, snapping me out of my thoughts. "Hello?" I answered. "Hey Momo, its Maasa. I've found some witnesses when you were taking care of business." Maasa said. Ah, we can't let them squeal now can't we? "Who are they?" I asked with a pen and notebook ready to take down names. "Lucky for you, there's only three witnesses. The first one is Natsuyaki Miyabi. Apparently, she goes to some private boarding school in Hiroshima. The second one is Fukumura Mizuki. Rumors say that after she got expelled from school, she came here to Tokyo to live with her grandma. And the last one is.....Niigaki Risa. She has been recently divorced and is now a single mother of 2 girls. One is name Riho, she is 13 years old. The other is name Airi, this one is 17 years old. Momo, are you sure you want to kill the last one?" Maasa said, with an uneasy tone on her voice. "Well, the brats can always live with their dad. I'll call you later Maa-chan, I got killin to do." I replied. "Okay Momoko. Don't draw attention to yourself. Goodbye." Maasa said, and then I hung up. I went in my car, pull out my AK47, and started the car. Before I forget, I need to kill little miss Sayumi. As I drive by, I see her. Then, I pull out my pistol and shot her in the head. "Thank God there weren't any witnesses." I thought and smirked as I drove away from the crime scene.

Little did she know that a creature was watching her.
"Hey,Lordi. I think I've found our little assasin."
"Good. Bring her to me ASAP"
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I've decided to split the chapters to make it more interesting.
And this band will be in the story

Don't worry the video will tell you the name of the awesome monsters

[kagaki]

Ooh Sayu got shot
How was watching? lol
Cliff hangers alway leave me jumpy

[Dran]

What the...

[XxShadowYankiixX]

Announcement

I have tests this week and color guard, so the 2nd part to chapter 2 will be this weekend

[Sora-chan]

ehh the SUSPENSE is so high lol ^.^ continue continue continueee! Momo-chan? as a killer? I wouldve never seen it coming.
Shes gonna kill my Mame-chan! *sniff sniff* RUN AND HIDE Gaki-san!!!

[XxShadowYankiixX]

It Snows in Hell

Chapter 2 part 2/2

Sayumi's POV


Ugh, my head. I wake up to a familiar place. The sky is red, fire is everywhere, and the wrong doers are being tortured by the hounds of hell. I might look like a human, but I’m really not. I'm actually the daughter of Lordi aka the new improved devil. My father has lived for a million years and proved to be the most powerful being alive. Satan was threatened by his power, so he declared war on him. My father alone defeated the army of hell and destroyed the devil. A thousand years later, he married my mother Enary. Unfortunately, she was killed in the famous fallen angel rebellion. "Sayu, your dad is going to be really upset when he finds out what you've been up too." Maimi, soldier of hell said. "I’m trying to help with the mission, that’s all." I responded. The mission was to get that girl to confess her biggest crime to hell and heaven itself, and then we wouldn’t have to take her soul and damn her to the fire pit for eternity. “Oh,really? Or you just want attention from your daddy since he married Awa.” Reina, another soldier said with a smirk. I smacked her and stormed off. How dare she talk to me that way?! I should sick the hounds after her! “Hey baby.” A seductive voice said, and then wrapped their hands around my waist. I turned my head to see my lover, Kalma.”Hey.” I responded then gave him a kiss. Kalma is in charge of the Kalmageddon order, which is in charge of limbo. “I heard about your little adventure in Earth. Are you okay?” He asked with a concern look on his face. “Yeah I’m fine.” I responded. We both went to my room and I think you know what happened

Momoko’s POV

Before I started my rampage, I went over to Maasa’s house to collect more information. “Okay, so here is all the information you need to track ‘em down.” She said, giving me multiple files. Okay, the very first one to go is Miyabi. Apparently, she used to be friends with Risako. I went in my car and started to drive down to club 13/18. I guess it’s some kind of an amateur teen club. After I showed the bouncer my school id I went in the club to see her on the dance floor. I just blend in with the party animals just to make sure I don't get any suspicious looks. This is going to be a piece of cake.
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[XxShadowYankiixX]

Chapter 3

Miyabi 's POV

The club is really packed tonight. Unfortunately, my friend Risako couldn't make it. May God bless her soul . As I checked out the new people I've never seen before, I see a short pale girl looking for someone.Maybe I could be of assistance. I walked up to her and I'm somewhat surprised that she's shorter than I anticipated. "Excuse me? are you looking for someone?" I asked her. Hmmm, she looks familiar . "Yeah, I was looking for my sister Risako." She said in a somewhat high-pitched voice. Wait, I didnt know Risako had a sister! "Well, I'm a friend of Risako. I thought you would've known that she was dead." I replied. "Well, I was living in America for a while and no one told me that she died" She replied with tears coming down her eyes. "I'm really sorry for your loss. Unfortunately, she was murdered. If you want, I can buy you a drink." I said. "Thank you, that would be nice." She replied. We walked over to the bar asking for whiskey. This club is famous for selling alcohol to underage kids, but they never got caught. A few hours later, I was drunk and I didn't give a f*ck. Even though my mom is a stuck-up idiot and my dad.......let's not talk about him. Ugh, I feel like I'm gonna puke. "Do you need to go to the bathroom?" She asked. I nodded and we were off to the bathroom. For some reason, the restroom had a creepy atmosphere. Maybe it was because we were the only ones here. As I went to the stall to throw up, I felt a knife in my back. I was paralyzed in shock. I weakly turned around to see that girl with a bloody knife. "I'm sorry, but you've seen too much." She said and delivered the last blow. All I saw was black at the moment. Now, I remembered. She was the one who killed my friend.....my sister......the only one I cared about and now I'm gone too

[assassin4hire]

Whoa interesting story so far I like the different point of view aspects

[XxShadowYankiixX]

Chapter 4a



Momoko's POV


After finishing the job, I crawled out of the bathroom window and I cleaned up the place a bit to confuse the cops. After that was over, I ran into Sayumi in the parking lot. " Wait! I thought I killed you!" I shouted, freaking out. "What can I say? It's hard to kill demons." She replied and something even stranger happened. Her hair got darker, her skin got paler, and her eyes turned from brown to a crimson red. Also the wind started blowing violently, making my hair blow in different directions. "You confess your sin or so help me I will rip your soul out and feed it to my hell hounds!" Sayumi said in a demonic voice. I screamed to the point that it was deafening and I ran into my car and started the ignition. She was still standing there, glaring at me from afar. I drove off as fast as fricking possible. 30 minutes later, I parked in my driveway and ran inside my house. I slammed the door and I ran into a pissed off Chisato. "Where were you?! You know how worried I was? Some girl got killed in a night club and here I am wondering If that psychopath killed you too!" Chisato shouted. Hmmmm.....who knew the news would get around so quickly. " I'm sorry chisa. It's just that I had to work really late. I didn't know I worried you so much." I replied and gave her a hug. I can't tell her...not yet. Now, to kill the others.

Sorry about updating so late. I've been busy a lot and now I'm free to update as much as you guys want me too

[XxShadowYankiixX]

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