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[kelsey]

what kind of story should i do?

[♥アメーバー !♥]

maybe you should do something with puncutation.no offense lol.and you should make like a stpry about....hmm....oh i have an idea!
JunJun and LinLin work in a spa.They meet Ai-chan there because she went to the hot spring for a relaxing weekend.. and both sort of fall for her.Then they find out she has a girlfriend who just happens to be Risa.You can write about how JunJun and LinLin are eager to get to Ai-chan!!!

[DarkRai]

^LOL you sound eager to write it yourself

Um... just write whatever type of inspiration hits you, cuz really, if people tell you to write something it usually doesn't go well.

[writerjunkie]

maybe you should do something with puncutation.no offense lol.and you should make like a stpry about....hmm....oh i have an idea!
JunJun and LinLin work in a spa.They meet Ai-chan there because she went to the hot spring for a relaxing weekend.. and both sort of fall for her.Then they find out she has a girlfriend who just happens to be Risa.You can write about how JunJun and LinLin are eager to get to Ai-chan!!!

Lmao I LOVE that idea! haha that's pretty good for something to just come out so suddenly. lol I would read that fic! lol ha and a naked Ai! *dies* yep...

[maxemerg]

I see really good ideas here, but what you call your story looks a lot like what I call my scene notes. I think if you took a little more time to get into the scenes and let your characters speak for themselves, you could have a really great story.

Also.. don't go telling us what's gonna happen in your story before you even start writing it. I understand how exciting ideas can be, but save them for your notes and don't disservice your readers by revealing everything that would be best as a surprise. It kinda spoils it, you know?

Anyway, you seem very creative, Kelsey, and I hope to read something by you that makes me think, "OMG! heck yeah!" some day ^^

(why do i feel like i've written that last line before??)

[kelsey]

well i'm sorta being inspired by a french film i saw called pierrot le fou there was a little part of the script i loved and wnated to use it in my next story

[♥アメーバー !♥]

^yay glad you have an idea
gambare!