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[kawaii beam!]

OK! here's what i guess atleast a few people's been waiting for my fanfic~!

Teach me about the meaning of love

Chapter 1- the confession

I sighed as I took a deep breath and clung on to my light green letter.
'C'mon Risa,you can do this!'
I took another deep breath as I looked behind me. Eri,Sayu,and Reina were giving me the thumbs up. I looked back to my target. She had just finished talking to her other friends and was packing up.
'C'mon! All you have to do is take 10 steps and you'll be able to tell Ai-chan how you feel!'
The next thing I knew, I was infront of her.
"A-Ai-c-chan..."
"Yeah Risa,what is it?"
She stood up and looked up at me,since she was a tad bit shorter.
"I-I wanted to give this t-to you bef-fore you g-go."
I quickly handed her the letter.
"Don't open it untill you get home ok?"
She looked at me with a bit of worry.
"Ok...Well I'll seeyou tomorrow,ok?"
She picked up her bags and walked out of the room. As soon as her foot-steps were scilenced,Sayu,Eri,and Reina came into view.
"You did it Gaki-san!"
Eri huged me.
"Now all we have to do is wait for Ai-chan's reply!"
"But what if she say's no?"
I turned and looked at the three of them.
"Then all of my work would be for nohing....."
Sayu smiled and put her hands on my shoulders.
"You won't know until she awnsers,so think about it too much ok?"
'That's easy for you to say Sayu.'"Okay Sayu, I'll try."
I lied.
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By the time I got home all I could think about was Ai. How would she reply to it? Would she even read it? Would she even say yes,or ever talk to me again? I sighed,droped my bags on the brow wooden floor, and floped myself on my bed. Sleep slowly started to grab on to me,and before I knew it,sleep had captured me.



sorry if it was short!>.< i take a long time to ype so i didnt want to write too much i'll try to write more in the next chap. k?

[Director_Maiha]

A very cute chapter! I love how the entire group seem to support Gaki and her decisions. I wonder how Ai-chan will respond so gambatte ne~

[KaPouk]

Good job Kawaii-chan
It's really a sweet chapter
I wonder what can be the answer??
but I have my litle idea about what Aichan will answer
Ganbatte kudasai ~~

[Glasseyelashes]

ai-chan better give risa the answer she's been wanting, or else i'll never forgive her.

[kawaii beam!]

ok! here's chap.2!(sorry that it's short again^^;

Chapter2-no reply


Silence. It was somewhat soothing,yet lonesome at the same time. Then,all of a sudden I heard a loud and all to familiar ringtone. I quickly shot up and grabed my green cell phone that was thankfuly right next to me. After flipping it open and quickly pressing the 'New Message!' sign. The message had only 8 words.
'I won't be comming to school today. ai'
I blinked twice and read teh message over,and over again. Something told me to intstantly message back,which I pretty much did.
'Why? What's wrong are you ok??'
I quickly pressed send.
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Eventualy,I had no choice but to go school. The whole entire day was pretty much boring and Ai wasnt there, just like she said in her text. From moring till lunch,I was constantly sending her textes,but there was never a reply back.
"Gaki-san, stop worrying about it. What if she's just sick?"
"But what if she's not Eri? What if she's just avoiding me?Or doesn't want to be my friend at all?"
"If she didn't wanna be your friend,would Ai've sent you that text?"
I looked to my right and saw Reina walking up to us.
"That's true Gaki,now that you think about it....knowing Ai-chan,if she was upset,she'd just let you have it. You know that out of all of us."
Eri was pretty much right; out of all of us I'd knowing Ai the longest,and she would let me have it if she didn't care anymore. So I desided to myself that I'd visit her when I left school,and ask her if she cares for me like I do for her,so my heart can finaly be at ease.

sorry that it was short again! >.< school makes kawaii-chan lazy

[KaPouk]

Ah.. awesome chaper
I hope Ai-chan is well???!!! And Damn Ai u can try to answer at Risa text >__<
Reina and Eri are really good friends ^^
I ask for more, more and more

[kawaii beam!]

ok~! i'm currently writing up the 4th chap. right now but since i'm so lazy at the moment i think i'll stop soooo here's chap.3~!

Chapter3-warm

'Knock knock'.
My heart was racing as I waited for a reply.
'Click'
'Ok Risa,there's no running away now.'
As the door slowly opened, my face went from "trying to act normal" to "compleatly worried" in 2 seconds flat. Ai was compleatly covered in blankets. Her eyes were puffy,and her nose was slightly red. Plus her long brown hair was all over the place.
'Darn you for being right Eri!'
She looked at me and noticed the bag I was holding.
"What's that?"
"Oh!"
I smiled and handed it to her.
"It's the homework and classwork we did today."
"Thanks."
She took the bags out of my hands. I looked up at her and took a deep breath.
"Ai,can I talk to you about something?"
"Sure."
She widedned the door and let me in.

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After walking in and having something do drink we went up to her room. Luckly her parents were out so I felt a bit more relaxed.
"Why didn't you awnser any of my messages today?"
Ai phloped on her bed and rapped herself up in the covers.
"Well I was sick."
She sniffled a bit and looked at me.
"I turned my phone off after I sent you mine so I could sleep. I knew you'd flood me with a thousand messages back so that's why."
I looked at her in amazement. She knew that I'd ask why more than once.
"And plus, I know you didn't come here just to give me my school work and ask why I didn't reply to your texts. You came cus of this letter, right?"
She took the letter I had given her the day before. I blinked in dissbalief and let my jaw drop. She'a the only person next to Eri who would get that so quickly.
"Risa, close your mouth."
I quickly snapped back into reality and closed my now trembling lips. Ai took another sniffle and read my confession silently to herself. After reading it,she looked at me directly in the eyes and asked,
"This isn't a joke right?"
My body began to shake,but I tried to fight it and nodded. The silence was killing me, so I spoke up.
"Ai-chan, if you don't feel the same way just-"
All of a sudden I felt something warm on my lips.


lol it's so short when I type it but whe i wrote it on paper it was wayyy longer

[Director_Maiha]

WOOT! A quick kissing scene allllready~ I love this little mini story of ur's. Not too descriptive yet still very amusing to read. Gambatte!

[YukixNatsu]

Yeah a TaKaGaki sweet kiss scene
I want more

[ErikaUmedaFan]

Uh oh Ai's so nice to potentially share her sickness with gaki

[Director_Maiha]

^ LMAO! That comment is so frilarous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(frikin hilarious)

[WinterAir]

^ haha I know... its so short on computer text... thats what I always complain about my english essays haha its ok cuz size doesn't matter for good things ^^. omg yay~~ risa got accepted haha... but now risa will get a cold/sick from ai's kiss ^^ oh well haha~ can't wait till chapter 4~

[Glasseyelashes]

man, i wouldn't care if i got sick from kissing ai-chan.

[kawaii beam!]

lol ai's sickness! you guys are too funny^^ here's chap.4

Chapter4-Conclusion

I blinked in confusment(yes confusement ) on to what was going on. Ai slowly took her warm fingers off my lips,and smiled a warm smile.
"You didn't let me finish Risa."
I blinked a few more times and nodded like an obidient child for Ai to continue what she was going to say.She bushed her bangs out of her eys to look at me directly.
"Why me?"
"What do you mean?"
I asked looking at her in confusion.
"You know what I mean. Why do you like me?"
My body froze. How could I describe it? Hell,where do I even begin?
"Umm.."
She watched me paitiently,waiting for and awnser.
"Well..."
I looked around her room aimlessly,trying to find the right words to start. This looking around and thinking continued for about 5 more min.
"Risa."
"Yeah?!"
I jumped back to a now impatient Ai.
"Well?"
I looked at her. Her somewhat impatient pout calmed me down.
"Well it cerantly wasn't "love at first sight."
She nodded.
"So when did you start to like me?"
Before she even finished her question,I felt my face get hot and emberassment was comming through.
"Ummm... well,to tell you the truth I don't remember. I think it was about 6 years ago..."
"EH??!!"
Her eyes widened.
"6 years?! That's a pretty long time Risa!"
I looked away in more emberassment and mumbled.
"Well I did tell you that it wasn't love at first sight. It just took some time for me to be sure."
I felt her arms rap around my neck.
"I understand."
"Realy?"
"Yes,and because I understand, I've come to a conclusion."
She let go of me and, I faced myself to her in a bit of confusion.
"What do you mean?"
"I mean this."
With that, I felt her soft lips meet mine.



lol i know sucky and short >.> GOMEN! >.< should i add more to it or no?? u be the judge

[ErikaUmedaFan]

Just letting you know your 5 minutes is a % sign right now

Also... NOW Ai's sharing it.. It was just her fingers before, seems like I jumped to conclusions!

Sweet chapter, it feels realistic

I really like this line too:
"6 years?! That's a pretty long time Risa!"

I dont know why

[WinterAir]

I blinked in confusment(yes confusement )

nahahaha haha I read without confusement through this great conclusion chapter!

wait... conclusion... does that mean? this isn't the last of the story is it? >.<

It's a nice story, 4th chapter is nice ^^ even though not much was spoken between ai and risa... and especially ai, ^^ but the actions says it all ^^. kinda takes out the awkwardness in words when you can form a picture in your head ^^ good job~

EDIT:
omg... I just realized... so it was only fingers? >.> wahaha we all jumped to conclusions lol... our naughty lil minds haha... nice way to lead us on kawaii-chan~

[lonewind]

GJ Kawaii!! lol nice comment about ai spreading her sickness.
anyways! cute chapter!! i like it!! are you just going to focus on takagaki??? or are you going to add more??

[KaPouk]

Geat chapter Kawaii-chan


Will there be another chapter or the last?
Or there will be another oneshot?

Keep it up and Ganbare ^^

[YukixNatsu]

it was a finger
I though it was a kiss

but nice chapter and the kissing scena at the end is sweet.
I hope u will write another chapter

[ミ☆ Ｍｕｓｈｒｏｏｍ ☆]

wooooooooooaaah,,, 6 years~~

Spoiler

me 2 years T_T xddd

WAAAOH

Really good, the chapters are short, but i really like theeem __________

keep it up~~ PLEASE~! *bows*