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[Ambenya]

OMG!

I love this!

Poor Kuduu trying to confess and Maachan not understanding.

But at least she understood in the end!

Duu really has gotten herself into something.

[cornyflakes]

@JuulChii Thank you! No plans for any BerryKyuu fanart yet, I might do some after I complete the MM one I'm currently working on. 

You got it right, it is from the TokiSora!   Kudos!

@Ambenya I'm glad you liked it! 

[cornyflakes]

This is my last manga before I go on a hiatus for a few months.

 

Inspired by this video.

THANK YOU

 

Sayashi Riho "plays it cool" despite having difficulties coping with her work, Suzuki Kanon figures it out and lends a hand.

 

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Kudos to anyone who can guess the person in the first panel of page one is  (Answer in Today's Trivia spoilers)

 

Today's Trivia

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Sayashi Riho: 9th gen member of flagship group, Morning Musume '14.

Is the Ace.

She is a cute Sumo-Meido.

 

Suzuki Kanon: 9th gen member of flagship group, Morning Musume '14.

Is appearing in a show with Arashi, I want to watch that lol

Also she doesn't care for rules. What, you're explaining the rules? Nope! I'm gonna do a somersault.

 

(Answer)

YOSHIKO-sensei (It's supposed to look like her anyways ): She is the current choreographer for MM '14's dances. 

That's it from me, I'll be back in a few months.

[ParuYui]

Cuuute

[cornyflakes]

This is my last manga before I go on a hiatus for a few months.

That's it from me, I'll be back in a few months.

It's been a year...
To those who actually looked forward to my comics... SORRY!

I worked on a comic which featured Aari and Yuka from J=J but the drawings got deleted from my phone... I'm kinda bummed about that since I worked on it for 3 months...

[cornyflakes]

Here's a Triangle fancomic!
 

WARNING: Non-canon!

Sayashi Riho as Kiri.

Kudo Haruka as Asada.

DUEL

Kiri challenges Asada to a duel for Princess Sakura's affections.

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Afterword

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I'm just leaving my thoughts and random stuff here.

This comic has no story whatsoever I just wanted to draw the "boys" duking it out. Something like a battle between a high attack low defense warrior against a long range wizard or something.

Had to bug Estrea to give me details about the characters.

This piece took forever haha I started on it in Mid July lol

The quality of the each page is so inconsistent! It's like a gamble everytime I draw a page, like only 20% of the time it turns out good lol

Drawn on my phone using the app Adobe Sketchbook Express.

I made the Kiri in this comic to be confident, kinda haughty and easily irritable while Asada is sly and very perceptive. I probably got their personalities wrong

So a suwa-suwa or two can electrocute a person?? I made Kiri get shocked by 8?!1!! Lol

No trivia from me today!

I'll probably stick to drawing shorter comics on my phone next time

[JuulChii]

THIS IS SO COOL!

So glad you're back with this!! 

[cornyflakes]

@JuulChii Hi! Sorry I took a year to reply you (Haha get it? New year joke)... I'm not too sure about being back, I'm just gonna post whenever I can (or feel like it )

Anyways Happy New Year guys! Kinda late but here's a quick something for the girl who graduated T-T
But she'll be back!

[cornyflakes]

First comic of the year! Woo! 10 months into the year lol  Request by Parasol stars.

 

Read from right to left.

Inspired by this blog post.

SCARED

 

After a day of hardwork, Ogawa Rena suggests they unwind at a haunted mansion attraction. 

"Won't that just get us more worked up!" retorts Taguchi Natsumi, her remark falling on deaf ears.

 

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Today's Trivia:

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Ogawa Rena: Member of Kobushi Factory, her nickname is Renako. Always seem to have her head in the clouds, she's the girl with the best laugh(imo).  

 

Taguchi Natsumi: Member of Kobushi Factory, her nickname is Tagucchi. She is the imouto of the group because of her small size. Btw have you seen her in a hanbok?

 

Oh yeah they're also going out. As in they're a couple, really I'm not kidding! 

https://youtu.be/Hv4FDpTwfvo?t=8m45s

After Ayapan(Hirose Ayaka) says they look like lovers, Renako says that they're dating and then Tagucchi confirms it. Of course they did a double take and said it was a lie but still... I'm ignoring that last part lol

 

Punchline ideas:

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My punchline was kinda weak, if you have a better one let me know!

[cornyflakes]

I made some fanart for Duu and Honey's birthdays and passed it to akarinxxx, as she has been collecting messages for their birthdays. Thanks akarin for collecting!

 

Here's what they look like.

 

Duu:

http://www.pixiv.net...illust/59722119

 

Honey:

http://www.pixiv.net...illust/59722129

[Chibishi]

Are you still active on H!O? I love your artwork and style!

[cornyflakes]

@Chibishi Hello and thank you! Yea I'm still around in the forums, just that it's kinda quiet here because I have no ideas/requests and/or just plain lazy  If you have something you'd like to see, just throw your ideas/requests my way!

[Ambenya]

Hello again, so I have a new request.

This time do you think you could do a cute romantic Suberizu/Eripon and Ayumi one?

I love your stories and artwork so much!

[cornyflakes]

@Ambenya Hey!  Ooh Suberizu, that's a pairing I'm not too knowledgeable about  Hmm... Give me some time, I'll think up of something!

[Chibishi]

I've always loved the Rokkies - maybe something with them?    I don't have any specific ideas...

[cornyflakes]

@Chibishi Thank you for the request!  I'll work on it after I'm done with Ambenya's request! BTW When you say Rokkies, do you mean with or without Mikitty?

[Chibishi]

@Chibishi Thank you for the request!  I'll work on it after I'm done with Ambenya's request! BTW When you say Rokkies, do you mean with or without Mikitty?

Well.... without Miki in all honesty Looking forward to seeing your work!

[cornyflakes]

@Chibishi No Mikitty, gotcha! Just don't hold your breathe, your comic WILL happen just not so soon okay

Finally I'm done with Ambenya's request. I am thoroughly reminded how tiring and time consuming making comics/manga/art are! I salute you artists!

 

Inspired by this video.

BOGEY

Their first stop for filming is at a golf course and Ikuta Erina who is famous for her drive(tee shot), shows off her stuff while Ishida Ayumi stares in astonishment from afar. Winni notices and gives them a little push!

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I made a mistake from the start of the comic till the end, if you've watched the video you'll notice the girls are missing a certain something. Do you guys know what it is? Answer at the end.

In the video Winni and Ayumi became "friends"/"tomodachi" when they told each other they didn't know how to golf, so that's how I got the idea for this short manga.
Also at the end of their course, Winni and Ayumi hugged it out. I'd like to think it was because Ayumi is thankful to Winni for getting her closer(literally^^; ) with Eripon

The punchline is inspired by Ayumi's scream lol
Some examples, Eg1,Eg2. I can't find it now but the one that gave me the idea is the one where Ayumi drinks something bad and she lliterally "Kyaahs" lol it's from their latest DVD mag or something  (DVD Mag 95)

To differentiate speech and thought "bubbles", I used different fonts to tell them apart. Thought speech in curvy fonts and spoken speech in straighter fonts.

I didn't shade for this comic, I wanted to see what it would like with minimal shading and it turned out okay but a little flat for my taste.

I noticed in my other comics I didn't have much backgrounds so that's why I tried to draw more of those in this one but...
Backgrounds are hard lol and unless it's really needed to tell the story, I'd never draw them lol

Still don't know what's the best method to do the speeches, I guess speech bubbles would be the best way to go? But since I color code their words, I find those taking up unnecessary space.... Hmm...

Also I need to learn on how to make some parts more impactful! Needs research!

Haven't got a clue on what to do for Chibishi's request but I'm excited! Maybe I'll make it into a sci-fi, or make them into pirates or something... LOL

Answer:

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The fuzzy mics!
Probably there's no boom-guy too when they were filming but I already drew him and didn't want to erase it so that's why he's still on the first page
Kudo(&Maria)s to anyone who got it right!

[Chibishi]

I just love your art! The comic was really funny And don't worry about the request, just do whatever you're feeling - no pressure!

[Ambenya]

I love it!

I keep re-reading it since it is so perfect!

Thank you so much! 

Also can't wait for the rokkies one either.

It's not very often someone does something about them anymore.