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[ShikyoxYaiba]

Intro the thread: I enjoy writing one-shots, or a series of one-shots (that would result in a two/three-shot...you get the idea) but I absolutely stink at writing chaptered things. I can never seem to keep those updated. Anyway, I decided to make myself one thread for myself rather than making a lot of topics for my one shots. I figured that it would do the forum much better. :) Enjoy the reads~ (I also linked my previous two fics because I hadn't thought of making a thread for myself here just yet.) *NOTE: Some parts share the same post as others. Just scroll down to find it. Up to three may be in one post...I think. :blink:
NOTE #2: Since my threads have now been merged, please use this post to find what you are looking for. Things are very much out of order (don't ask why) so just click on what you wanna read - it'll take you to that specific post. Thank you!


Table of Contents Post

#1. Answers (Series Complete)
Centers around IBL trio. (Or is it NKT?) Warning: Character death. Pairing:

Spoiler

TanaKamei

[1.1] Answers
[1.2] Answers - Niigaki POV
[1.3] Epilogue

#2. Habits (One-shot)
What happens when someone decides to have a little fun... Pairing:

Spoiler

FujiKame

#3. Stress and Relief (Series Complete - Same Post)
For every bit of stress, there is a little relief at the end... Pairing:

Spoiler

TakaGaki

[3.1] Stress
[3.1] Relief

#4. Beneficial Disaster
Good can come out of the bad after all... Pairing:

Spoiler

KameShige

#5. Lights, Camera, Action!! (Series Complete)
Ai-chan's POV of Stress and Relief. Pairing:

Spoiler

TakaGaki + TanaKamei

[5.1] Lights
[5.2] Action
[5.3] Camera

#6. 20 Dreams
Eri's Birthday Fic~ Pairing:

Spoiler

GakiKame

#7. Reminiscence [My Destiny]
Moonlight high above the trees... Pairing:

Spoiler

GakiKame

#8. Come Back
If you come back to me, I'll be all that you need. Pairing:

Spoiler

TakaGakiKame

#9. Let Go [Kataomoi no Owari ni] (Series Complete)
I'm going to let go of what I once held so dear. I'm going to look at what I have now - you. Pairing:

Spoiler

ReinAiGakiKame?

[9.1] Dawn
[9.2] Awakening
[9.3] Reflection

#10. Limit [Tokaikko Junjou]
I love everything about you... Pairing:

Spoiler

GakiKame

#11. PIN
I said not to say anything else about your PIN!! Humor~ Pairing:

Spoiler

AiEri

#12. Poolside Happenings (Series Complete)
Physical instruction by a turtle and bean = mayhem. (No definite pairings.)
[12.1] Watery Confusion
[12.2] Advantageous Inconvenience
[12.3] Steady Instruction
[12.4] Conference

#13. Letters [Koko ni Iru yo]
I'm too late, so let me write you a letter instead. Pairing:

Spoiler

TakaGaki

Response: Soba ni Iru ne - By GoodMorningXD
True love knows no distance, we'll find a way...

Entangled Memories: A Night Through Hell
One night. One hotel. One past. (Miki-centered; non-romance. SAY WHAT??)

[Prologue]

[Ruhe]

Ooo...

Your descriptions were lovely in this. I particularly liked how you wrote out the desk scene, where Reina unlocks the drawer. I could easily visualize everything, and you added some nice suspense to it. I could also feel Reina's profound feeling of loss through your words. Heck, even I was feeling sad Eri had died. When you can bring out emotions from your readers, you know you've done a good job. I was a little confused though until I read your spoilers at the bottom. At first I thought Eri was the one to have saved her, but then her cold reaction towards Reina waking up didn't make any sense. Then when Reina saw the letter from Gaki, I was still a bit dense and didn't connect the pieces that that meant it was Gaki who had saved her. I thought Reina and Eri had some falling out, so Gaki was trying to nudge 'em back together by having her read some love note Eri stashed. It wasn't until I read further into Eri's letter that I realized when she said she was gone, she meant as in dead, and not packed up and moved. I think this was mainly due to me not putting the piece together, but anyway, as I said already, this was very enjoyable to read.

Side note: I love that picture of the two of them that you added. They both have radiant smiles, and they genuinely look happy together. It made me even more sad looking at it though.

[sSlayer]

Yes, you can all shoot me now for killing someone. *gets ready for death*

(P.S. Anyone know how to thumbnail pics? I have a feeling that pic might be a bit too large... )

Don't worry....this will go real quick.....*pulls trigger* Jkay. Very nice story, loved it lots! Btw, if you wanna make the pic a thumbnail, on the bottom, just click "browse" and add ur file. Then click upload. ^^

[WinterAir]

^^ this was a very nice oneshot! nice, short, simple and very good story. got me wondering a lot who was who during the cliff part, and its a interesting way how you write the story.

[Glasseyelashes]

i didn't want to see who the story was about til the end. in my mind, i imagined it was risa on the cliff, thinking of ai-chan.

really good story, but ever so sad.

[Kina15]

Ah stories of when people die (especially people that you know) really make me sad.... great story I loved it from start to finish!!! ^^

[kawaii beam!]

very, very,very great story! i loved evry word! i was almost crying! (i_i) i first thought it was aixgaki, but after the cold voice and such, i understood it! you're a realy awesome writer! i envy your descriptions! X3 please continuse writing ne~? i hope you can write a looonnnggg one soon! X3

[shiro_reina]

wowww...... great....great...great.... what a great fanfic, a dramatic story....
i love it so much.... great idea

[Director_Maiha]

Love it so much! You can describe things really well, ShikyoxYaiba. You should seriously start writing some chapters!

[shiro_reina]

and become next director after director maiha, hahaha....

wow... its so many new fanfic out there, today i have read maybe about 4 new fanfic and the update

[ShikyoxYaiba]

^I'll be sub-director.


Actually, I'm considering writing a "Niigaki Risa" version (POV) of this fic...kinda of like a little add on? What does everyone think?

[Glasseyelashes]

YES!! please do.

[Director_Maiha]

^
^Write what you want to write~ We'll be supporting ya here, sub-director.

[Ishikawaluvr]

Oooh, definitely~

[shiro_reina]

if you say that good, so why don't you try it, after all it is your fanfic, do your best

GANBARE YO!!!

[ShikyoxYaiba]

Erm...yeah, after having a dream about writing a Risa POV...I think I'm gonna go through with it. Probably after I finish all of my AP summer work first - I've only got this week left to finish it. D: Then I'll start writing again.

[shiro_reina]

ooo... no update for today
maybe next time

[ShikyoxYaiba]

#1. Answers

[1.2]Answers – The Past (Niigaki POV)


[STORY HERE]

[WinterAir]

YAY~ Sub-Director updated! lol after such a long time, but was really worth the w8... how sad... eri... well... thats how the story went, but it was a good story. Somehow I felt a lot of sadness and grief in the story, while experiencing how close the bond between eri and risa is and how much they trust each other. Good Job on Risa's POV! so... is this the end?... finished?... >.< I wish there was so much more.

@EDIT: are you gonna carry on Risa's POV till she saves Reina?

“I’m doing fine, how’re you?”

“Glad to hear it’s going well.”

“Actually, no I think I’m gonna stay over at Gaki-san’s place tonight…if you don’t mind.”

“Mmhm. Don’t worry about it. Hey Reina…I love you – a lot…forever.”

“What do you mean getting all mushy on you?! Can’t a turtle express her love? Hahaha…no, no. Just having some fun.”

“Yeah, I love you, too. Always.”

this part was so cute and sweet~... haha be so nice if someone said such sweet words to you on the phone ne? haha but reina... thought it was too mushy lol. eri's so cute ^^

@ShikyoxYaiba: whats a wedge?(I know the literal definition) but what do you mean by you need a wedge?

[ShikyoxYaiba]

#1. Answers

[1.3] Answers – Short Epilogue

[STORY HERE]