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[GoodMorningXD]

Edit: I'm inserting my table of contents with a sentence summary for each.

Table Of Contents
Chapter Stories

Prisoner of Love: We were chasing the shadows of love, until we found each other.
Pairings:

Spoiler

TanaKame, TakaGaki, ???

Trailer: Page 13
Chapter 1 (Chains)- Page 3
Chapter 2 (Old Friends, New Enemies)- Page 3
Chapter 3 (Only Human)- Page 4 (Part 1 & 2)
Chapter 4 (Misunderstood Rain)- Page 5 (Part 1), Page 6 (Part 2)
Chapter 5 (Say Goodbye)- Page 6
Chapter 6 (Flavor of Love)- Page 7
Chapter 7 (Contradictions)- Page 8 (Part 1: The Nightmare), Page 9 (Part 2: The Reality)
Chapter 8 (Nukumori)- Page 10 (Part 1 & 2)
Chapter 9 (The Deadly Sins)- Page 12 (Part 1), Page 14 (Part 2)
Chapter 10 (Konayuki)- Page 15 (Part 1), Page 16 (Part 2)
Chapter 11 (Afterglow)- Page 16 (upon PM request)
Chapter 12 (Nakimushi)-Page 18 (Part 1 & 2)
Chapter 13 (Eye of the Storm)- Page 19
Chapter 14 (Last Friends)- Page 20 (Part 1 & 2)
Chapter 15 (Why The Caged Bird Sings)- Page 22

Across the Universe: How far will you go for the love of your life? (Quite literally.)
Pairing:

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GakiKame

Prologue: Page 8

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Short Stories

Love's Sonata: Sometimes music can express the feelings that words simply cannot.
Pairing:

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TanaKame

Part I & Part II- Page 1
Part III- Page 22

Alcoholics Anonymous: Some people function better after 5 pints of beer...
Pairing:

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TakaGaki

Page 2

The Claps of Thunder: The rain can bring back the memories but the only the thunder can reunite the people…
Pairing:

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TakaGaki

Page 17

What Are You Waiting For?: Waiting for your life to end, to begin again? No, you get back up and you try again…
Pairing:

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TanaKamei with GakiKame

Page 19

Vanilla Twilight: What sleep deprived people think about...
Pairing:

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GakiKame

Page 21

What Just Happened?: When skits become reality...
Pairing:

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IshiYoshi (Hint of YoMiki)

Page 21

For Hamzies: Hamcuffs: When clumsy cops decide to have a little fun~ ;]
Pairing:

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GakiKame, TanaShige

Page 23

Soba ni Iru ne: True love knows no distance, we'll find a way...
Pairing:

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TakaGaki

Page 23

WRITTEN BY ANONYMOUS:
Koe wo Kikasete
Page 24

I Do: Are your vows our end?
Pairing:

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GAM

Page 24

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Guess what? I write! ...but I'm usually too lazy and drop 90% of the fics that I start and because I usually can't stand my own writing, I constantly end up not posting.
So why the sudden change of heart?~ It's called inspiration~
I pulled this one out of thin air, it's a one-shot that may evolve into a two-shot, depending on if people like it or not. And my apologies for whatever spelling/grammar mistakes I may make.
So, without further ado,

(Special thanks to kawaii! beam for the banner!)

[STORY HERE]

 

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So how was it?
Yes, Eri's mute. The other girl should be pretty obvious. I hope...
I realized that not much actually HAPPENS in this story, lol.
Edit: How on earth do you make a normal indent at the beginning of a paragraph? @.@
Oh, and source of my inspiration: DBSK's "You're my melody", watching Amadeus (and listening to lots of sonatas), and Eri's picture featured in the banner.

[ShikyoxYaiba]

EGADS, NO COMMENTS YET!? MORNING-CHAN SINCE WHEN DID YOU WRITE SO WELL!?!?! *sniffles* TanaKame... it's where I found my beginnings too! (A sequel would be nice... Why'd Eri turn her down? Or is it because she didn't think it'd last with her voice gone...?)

Your writing is good; I'd like to see more of it! Don't give up on your fics, I'm sure they'll turn out fine. Just let things roll naturally; that's what I do anyway. (Too busy studying, but I took a break to read...) You've got a really cute thread title, too. ^___^

And for intending, try using

[indent][/indent]

although I don't know if you just indent the first word... I don't normally use this, so yeah.

[Miss Behave]

Beautiful writing

[LexLyp]

I didn't know you write.
You should do it more often.
That was beautifully written.
That last line was the BEST.
A sequel sounds good, maybe a different POV?

[writerjunkie]

psh you don't like your writing? psssh that dumb! I think it's VERY good! And it shows well in this one-shot, which is great by the way. You should write some more instead of trying to hide it! lol Man everyone's coming up with one-shots and I still can't think of nothing. *pouts* Oh and no need to be shy when posting the people here will read it and some will even post a reply. lol

[GoodMorningXD]

@Shiichan: Clearly your TanaKame beginnings have moved on to GakiKame love huh? Thanks for the advice, I'll see if letting things roll will do the trick.
@Miss: Thank yoou.
@LexLyp: Yea, I think I'll do the Eri POV, twist things up a bit.
@writer: I guess its not so much I don't like the writing, I just have a bad work ethic and drop things fairly easily. I'll work on that. Don't worry, something will pop up into your head eventually~ I'll be rooting for you~

Thank you guys! I really appreciate it! Nice comments make my day.
I'm pretty sure I'll do Love's Sonata, Eri-style. After I finish all the homework that I've been putting off. (See, bad work ethic.)

[ShikyoxYaiba]

I discovered GakiKame after watching a few more of the (then) recent H!Ms. Things just lacked TanaKamei... Not to say I don't like the pairing; I very much do. In fact... *look at her notebook* ... *snickers and scurries away* So much to write, so little to do... My first AP exam is this Tuesday. And I have a 4 page (minimum) paper due tomorrow; luckily I'm at the tail end of it... You're not the only one with bad work ethic.

You know, I forgot to say in my other post... Both of us started with tragic TanaKamei where poor Eririn was the victim! o-o (Well, no, my first fic was a KameiShige, but I never finished it. It's still rotting somewhere in jphip... Maybe I'll finish that if the thoughts ever come back to me...)

[KonaKaga]

TanaKame.... and I love it
If a writer can make me love TanaKame in their stories then they are a great writer. LOL
I was surprised by the intensity of this story. It was beautiful
*looks in menu*
Yes, I'd like to order another round of GoodMorningXD....with fries and GakiKame

[lonewind]

well written GoodMorning! ^^

Tanakame ^^

[YukixNatsu]

good job on it
aww poor Eri T_T.
but I wonder why it's her who have to suffer
aww Reina T-T, I think she pushed u away coz she though you have pity of her >.<

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gomen ne if I trouble you but I notice,
your story concept it's a bit similar to the fic "Love's Blind" by @OneWingedWolf.
The piano and she lost one of her senses >.<
Maybe it's me or my mind at this time after work&study, tired

keep it up and Ganbatte ne

[GoodMorningXD]

Alright, first thing first.
I was just notified by both OneWingedWolf and Yuki&Natsu about the similarities of my one-shot (which will become a two-shot), with the story Love is Blind. I had never intended for the two stories to be so similiar, in fact, I didn't even realize until it was pointed out to me. I didn't really think about it when I wrote the story because I was simply writing from the songs I listened to and the movie that inspired me, but looking back at Love is Blind, it seems as if I took the plot out of someone else's story and put it in my own. For that, I apologize. I'm sorry for what happened especially with respect to OneWingedWolf. I should have been more careful before I posted Love's Sonata and I ask for forgiveness and your support. Thank you~
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@Shiichan: Lmao. You better start writing those TanaKamei stories after your APs you know!~ >
And good luck. Everyone in my school is freaking out about them, I hope you do well.
@KonaKaga: I set up a menu somewhere?! No way! Stop trying to drag me into becoming a GakiKame fan! (Actually, I already am, I'm just more of a TanaKamei person. ;D)
@lonewind and Yuki&Natsu: Thank you~

[ShikyoxYaiba]

^It's kind of like what happened to me. My first fic (Answers) strongly resembled KonaKaga's "Her Final Wish" and another fic as though I mixed them together and used it for myself; I had never intended for such a thing to happen. (The only difference was the pairing, I think.) I say it's because great minds think alike. Forgive and forget, I say. :3 It happens. (Edit: Whoa, deja vu, I said "I say" in two successive sentences. )

[writerjunkie]

I don't think it's that much of a big deal. You're is still different. For one this is a one-shot Love Is Blind is a chapter story. Eri's blind in there Eri in here is mute. It's both different. I don't mind at all. I still enjoyed the story and it did not distract me in anyway.

[OneWingedWolf]

Alright, first thing first.
I was just notified by both OneWingedWolf and Yuki&Natsu about the similarities of my one-shot (which will become a two-shot), with the story Love is Blind. I had never intended for the two stories to be so similiar, in fact, I didn't even realize until it was pointed out to me. I didn't really think about it when I wrote the story because I was simply writing from the songs I listened to and the movie that inspired me, but looking back at Love is Blind, it seems as if I took the plot out of someone else's story and put it in my own. For that, I apologize. I'm really, really sorry for what happened especially with respect to OneWingedWolf. I should have been more careful before I posted Love's Sonata and I ask for forgiveness and your support. Thank you~
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@Shiichan: Lmao. You better start writing those TanaKamei stories after your APs you know!~ >
And good luck. Everyone in my school is freaking out about them, I hope you do well.
@KonaKaga: I set up a menu somewhere?! No way! Stop trying to drag me into becoming a GakiKame fan! (Actually, I already am, I'm just more of a TanaKamei person. ;D)
@lonewind and Yuki&Natsu: Thank you~

I don't blame you GoodMorningXD-san and I also never thought that you did that intentionally!! It was just confusing me somehow and I hope you (and also the readers) can understand me a little bit. So please... don't hate me for that and I hope you keep on supporting me too

But I really need apologize too! I'm sorry for troubling you >< As writerjunkie said... don't make a big deal out of it, okay? It's already forgotten~ Just promise me one thing: Keep the TanaKame love alive!!! Sadly the fics including the Reina/Eri couple are getting less and less ><

Of course I will support you (writers need to stick together, especially the TanaKame writers!! TANAKAME FTW!! *coughs* Uhm... I'm okay ) and I'm looking forward to read the second part of your two-shot. Because as I already told you in my message... your story was very well written and totally touching!

Thank you~

[Haru.Mc]

The Hell... so.. she reject Reina http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/c20.gif

Very amazing story and sadness too u.u

[AiTakahashiFan_21]

omgosh your writting is beautiful, i love how descriptive you tell stuff. you have a gift! keep it up. The story is sad though i kindof wanted to cry

[GoodMorningXD]

@Shiichan: I loved Answers and Her Final Wish! *still has reader/lurker tendencies* I still go back to those pieces from time to time because they're so beautiful. *sniffles*
@writer: Thanks for your input, its nice to know what other people are thinking in such situations.
@OneWingedWolf: Are you kidding? I would never hate you. *Hugs* I didn't plan on making a big deal out of it, but I wanted to acknowledge/address the situation since people were confused. Just wanted to clear some things up. And without a doubt, we TanaKamei writers will stick togther! So no worries.
@Haru.Mc: Eri has her reasons. We'll see...
@AiTakahashiFan_21: Thank you so much! Now if only you were my English teacher. Lmao.

So, here we go!

[STORY HERE]

[Haru.Mc]

Beautiful...

I TanaKame too...

[writerjunkie]

aww it was so cute and so sad! You did another amazing job! I wish I can write like that. *pouts* I really like this one. You did just a great job!! Keep on writing. I always find it interesting to write a story about a person who's mute, blind, deaf, etc. It's something that isn't written about all the time so that's why I like it. That and I love the bittersweet feel to this fic. Keep them coming.

[ShikyoxYaiba]

I wish they'd be selfish sometimes... broken romances stink.

...But this was beautiful. Great job!