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'Mixed Emotions'
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Right, finaly here comes the first two chapters of my first fanfic, as i'm a newbie any comments or tips or constructive criticism would be very welcome!
also I would like to thank Faq-u who brought me a ladder to get me out of a massive plothole and so give me the final peice of the puzzle for this fanfic from a discission we had on the Colour of Truth fanfic thread so thanks for that
(If you read it you may figure out what it is!)The Last Place You Look
Chapter 1
Miyabi Matsuyaki wanted to sleep, her room-mated already done so and as such was blissfully unaware of Miya's problem for however much she wanted to Miya could not go to sleep. Lying on her bed Miya summarised that the main problem was that she was cold, perhaps she was coming down with something?, and this was making her feel uncomfortable and so unable to go to sleep.
They had all been in Chii and Maa's room earlier celebrating the end of the final concert of the current Berryz Kobo tour, most of Berryz had time off starting tomorrow but unfortunately Buono had a meeting the next day so Momo had excused herself early, Miya had excused herself a little while after, as she was not feeling great it seemed like a good idea, Risako and Yurina had left with Miya, the two youngest member going back to the room they shared with Saki.
Miya stared up at the ceiling, her thoughts turning to the girl who was sharing with Rii and Yurina. Saki Shimizu, Captain off Berryz Kobo, one of the best dancers in all of H!P, always kind and caring to everyone and a girl she was very close too.
Miya's feelings for her Captain were confusing to her, she had all ways been close to Saki since they had first met and they all ways spent a lot of time together,as they had got older Miya started to have thoughts about weather or not she had romantic feelings towards Saki or if she was just a close friend ,the Berryz members often teased Miya and Saki about how they acted like a couple around each other, but the only member Miya had told about her truly confused feelings for Saki and that she might actually like her was Chii her best friend, Miya also has a suspicion that Momo new what Miya was thinking, her fellow Buono member and friend had a way of knowing what was going on in her mind. Miya was interrupted by her thoughts by a quiet knock at the door.
“Captain, what are you doing here?” Miya asked quietly, going back into her bed.
“Well, I came to see if you were all right” Saki whispered entering the room and sitting on the end of Miya's bed “You seemed unwell earlier so I was worried about you” Miya's heart lept at that, her Captain was worried about her, but knowing how much Saki could worry she decided not to go into too much detail.
“It's O.K. Captain, I just feel a bit cold, don't worry about it” Saki didn't respond too what Miya said straight away as if she was having an argument in her own head, eventually she looked at Miya and smiled 'Well then, I will just have to warm you up then wont I?”
Before Miya could say anything Saki had jumped into Miya's bed and had snuggled up next to her “Better?” Saki asked, Miya, who had suddenly lost the ability to speak muttered something unintelligible in response. Saki giggled quietly at Miya's response “Well goodnight then”
Y-You're saying here?” Miya said regaining her ability to speak, blushing madly at the girl now pressed up against her hoping that the darkness could hide how red she had gone.
“Well I'm settled now besides...I-I'm comfortable here” Saki replied a slight nervousness in her voice as if she was surprised at what she had just said. Miya's heart was pounding so fast now she was surprised that Saki couldn't hear it, too Miya it felt as though there was a loud drum where her heart had once been “O-Okay then..Goodnight, Captain” she managed to stutter out as she and Saki settled down.
Miya soon felt totally relaxed to Saki, there was a warmth now in Miya's body which was not just to do with the heat she and Saki now shared, it was as if Saki had also warmed her soul as well as her body as if Saki, by just being there, had taken all of Miya's troubles away.
“Thanks... Saki” Miya said quietly kissing the sleeping girl gently on the forehead before gently falling asleep.
chapter 2 coming, well, Now!
