Edit: The video was hit for copyright, its down. Sorry for those who clicked in this thread.
Edit2: I got a partial recording of the presentation. So I uploaded it here, just so I could get feedback. I got a lot of feedback from the person who recorded this and I know how I will change somethings in the future. But she was no idol fan, I would like feedback from idol fans.
Hey guys I made a video to present at my local anime convention. I am trying to help people more familiar with anime to understand and appreciate idol culture. I also hoped that for those who know nothing about idols could observe a lot of the visual and audio tropes for idols. I set out to make a video that a person could watch and walk away knowing mainstream idols, hear idol performance, and hear fan calls.
I am not sure how well I conveyed my points. I know its lacks character, but I want to make sure the information is good before I start making it more "exciting." I want feedback, any feedback, feel free to be brutally honest. But please only offer constructive criticism. If you dislike something in my video, please tell me how to fix it. Is the video interesting at all? Is it too long? Did I miss any major parts of "idol culture?"