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Behind the Smiles of an Idol
#21
Posted 09 October 2017 - 07:32 AM
Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#22
Posted 09 October 2017 - 09:12 AM
Sorry I haven't been commenting but I have still been reading this!
I love how you wrote each member.
Maimi is so cruel in this but I understand that's just how she's potrayed and not how you really think of her.
I feel bad for Saki and it's sad to see her more or less becoming an alcoholic from what has happened.
Poor Airi accidently causing a misunderstanding and not meaning to confuse poor MaiMai.
I wish Chisa would just get up the courage to tell Mai how she really feels and not just avoid things.
And MaiMai the poor baby is just super confused and doesn't know what to even think I hope things get better for her.
I hope that Daisuke doesn't making things even worse than what he already has.
And I wonder about Riho in this too since she always seems to be there early.
Also love the inclusion of Kawaei since I loved her when she was in AKB and feel so bad for everything that happened with her.
This fanfic is really interesting and I can't wait to see how the story pans out from here onwards.
I'm a loyal reader no matter what but I hope everything ends happy.
~Eripon Fan Since January 2011~
Set made by: aira慶一郎~ My blog: Cherry Blossom Wonderland My fanfic thread: Ambenya's Fanfic Wonderland
~Ikuta Erina~Okamura Homare~Ishida Ayumi~Oda Sakura~Nonaka Miki~Yokoyama Reina~Sakurai Rio~Tamenaga Shion~Kawana Rin~Sasaki Rikako~Goto Hana~Matsumoto Wakana~Kudo Yume~Kawashima Mifu~Ebata Kisaki~Arisawa Ichika~Irie Risa~Yofu Runo~Yagi Shiori~Ono Mizuho~Onoda Saori~Tanimoto Ami~Yamazaki Yuhane~Okamura Minami~Eguchi Saya~Kiyono Momohime~Satoyoshi Utano~Nishida Shiori~Yonemura Kirara~Nishizaki Miku~Kubota Nanami~Tsutsui Roko~Ishiguri Kanami~Hashida Honoka~Uemura Hasumi~Matsubara Yulia~Makino Toa~Hayashi Niina~Kawano Soara~
#23
Posted 09 October 2017 - 04:49 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#24
Posted 10 October 2017 - 08:25 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#25
Posted 16 October 2017 - 04:23 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#26
Posted 20 October 2017 - 03:23 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#27
Posted 21 October 2017 - 12:49 AM
I just read all of the chapters the last couple of hours and I have to say, this is my very first H!P fanfiction I've ever read (usually fanfiction in general isn't something I'm into, but the status updates you posted made me really curious!) and you've done an excellent job at balancing the drama, comedy, and personality of everyone!
I love evil!Maimi, it's such a plot twist from "real life", so it's a great juxtaposition in my head.
I think you're doing a wonderful job, and look forward to the next updates.
#28
Posted 21 October 2017 - 01:19 AM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#29
Posted 30 October 2017 - 09:55 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#30
Posted 04 November 2017 - 08:46 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#31
Posted 20 November 2017 - 01:50 AM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#32
Posted 24 November 2017 - 01:16 PM
Now Im reading chapter 11 and I have to say that this fanfic is very interesting, unusual and funny. Great job and please don't stop!
p.s. Sorry me for the humble expression of my thoughts.
#33
Posted 24 November 2017 - 02:19 PM
^ Yep, i love this fanfic too.
#34
Posted 25 November 2017 - 02:30 AM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#35
Posted 04 December 2017 - 07:16 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#36
Posted 30 December 2017 - 11:55 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#37
Posted 08 January 2018 - 06:27 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#38
Posted 29 January 2018 - 10:37 AM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
#39
Posted 30 January 2018 - 11:29 PM
^had to do a double take when i saw ricchan's name there lol, nice to see her appearance!
i don't read idol fanfics so i don't venture to this part of the forums, but i saw your tweets and, you write really well! keep it up!
#40
Posted 30 January 2018 - 11:32 PM
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Current Ultras: ♥♥♥Yokoyama Reina ♥♥♥Sasaki Rikako♥♥♥ Asakura Kiki, Akiyama Mao ♥♥♥Yamazaki Yuhane♥♥♥Maeda Kokoro♥♥♥
, ♥TSUBAKI FACTORY♥
Current Casual: ♥♥♥ Oda Sakura, Nonaka Miki, Haga Akane, Tanimoto Ami, Ise Layla, Kawamura Ayano, ♥♥♥
OG : ♥♥♥Turtle ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Airi, Maimai ♥♥♥
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