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#1 ADRNEL

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Posted 27 January 2015 - 01:18 PM

CHAPTER I

 

"Great concert as always girls!" exclaimed Mizuki to the group. It was Morning Musume '15's spring tour concert in Hokkaidou and all the members were in high spirits from the show. 

 

"The crowd really showed their Momusu pride today!" chimed Erina. 

 

All the girls went off to their respective dressing rooms to rest up and change into street clothes; except one member.

 

"HEY GIRLS~!" yelled a squeaky voice. Everyone knew what that sound meant; Satou Masaki had an announcement to make. Most of them viewed this with dread, others with disinterest. 

 

Now this did not meant that they hated her or disliked her (apart from Erina or maybe Ayumi) but it is because most of them just do not understand her as well, to most she's the groups biggest enigma. Someone needed to respond to her before she started to repeat herself and Mizuki, following in the footsteps of the great Gaki-san and Sayu, decided to play along with her. "What is it Maa-chan?" everyone stood at attention before her as they waited to hear what she had to say. Most prayed that whatever it is, it does not involve trees...or kancho.

 

"Well..." she began. "I just realized that my house is right outside of town...so I was thinking~~~, that maybe we should hold one big Morning Musume '15 sleepover at my place!" excitedly announced Maa-chan. "If there's not enough room we can sleep at the nearby temple instead, daddy won't mind."

 

"Okay..." Mizuki turned to the rest of the girls. "What do the rest of you think?" she tried to be diplomatic as possible. "Who wants to go?"

 

"Oh, I'm sorry Maa-chan, but I can't make it, I'm taking the 12ki's out for dinner." announced Eripon, an excuse she made to avoid Maa-chan whenever possible. "Isn't that right 12ki's?" she turned to the four new members.

 

"I never knew we where-OUCH!" Ogata was interrupted by a jab in the ribs from Eripon. "Oh right, now I remember." that was her cue to play along to prevent an awkward situation between her two senpai. 

 

Naturally, both Kudo and Oda wholeheartedly agreed. "Okay, that's two, anyone else?" asked Mizuki to the group.

 

"I think I'll go." announced 12ki member Miki. "It's something different."

 

Eripon was shocked. Traitor! she yelled in her mind. 

 

"Anyone else?" continued Mizuki.

 

"Me and Riho will be off on a dinner 'date' tonight, sorry." Suzuki sadly broke the news. She was more worried about keeping Riho company than some sleepover; Riho is too much of a lone wolf as is.

 

"And I might as well take Miki's place at the dinner with Ponpon." said Ayumi, who also was not a big fan of Maa-chan, not because she hates her, but because they have nothing in common, Maa-chan also finds her strange for some reason.

 

"Iikubo?" asked their leader.

 

"I'll be celebrating at the clubs as usual, no kids allowed." Iikubo answered.

 

"Well, Maa-chan, I would also love to go, but I'm taking an early plane ride to Tokyo since I have a variety show appearance, sorry Maa-chan." that was a fact. "Okay everyone is free to go, night everyone."

 

"Night!" the group of girls dispersed, it left only Maa-chan, Oda, Kudo and Miki behind.

 

"I'll go ask Manager-san if he wants to drive us there!" Maa-chan excitedly ran off. "MANAGER-SAN~~~!"

 

"Wait...isn't her home a short train ride and walk from here?" realized Oda.

 

"Don't worry, Manager-san is already telling her that." assured Kudo.

 

"Is Maa-chan always like this?" asked Miki to her two senpai.

 

"Depends on the time of day and weather." answered Kudo. "On some days, she's really mature and calm, a model idol, but on others, she can make everyone pull their hair out, Gaki-san learned that the hard way."

 

"Oh...wow..."

 

Maa-chan ran back to them. "Manager-san told me it's just a short train ride and walk from here...silly me." she giggled. "Come on girls!" she happily lead the group out. 

 

"But we need to change first and so do you!" reminded Kudo.

 

Maa-chan looked down to see she still wore her concert outfit. "Oh right..."

 

Oda whispers to Miki. "The more excited she is, the more forgetful she becomes."

 

"Oh...I get it now..." nodded Miki.

 

The girls went off to their respective dressing rooms to get ready for a long night ahead.

 

To be continued...

 

A short random story I wrote. It has been a while since I did a fic and I wanted to bring some life to this thread. Maybe I'll add more.

Thank you


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#2 Dalvron'20

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Posted 05 February 2015 - 11:21 PM

I like it! Great start! I'm glad someone is breathing life to this forum, and I'm also glad you chose M15. :good: Interesting quartet, putting Miki along with MaDuSaku. I for one would love to read more. ^_^



#3 Mizura

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Posted 06 February 2015 - 02:29 AM

This is interesting! I want you to add more.



#4 Sinicharuccha

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Posted 06 February 2015 - 10:50 PM

I rarely read fanfictions these days but this got my attention :lol: So I clicked this and read it. And I liked! I'm looking forward to read more ^_^ 


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#5 洋hiromi水

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Posted 16 February 2015 - 07:51 PM

I really like the combination of Oda, MaaDuu and Miki. I'm curious about how this will go on. ^_^ I hope you write more!


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#6 millie12

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Posted 17 February 2015 - 03:07 PM

i hope you continue to write for this fanfic, i'm also interested about the combination... :good:


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