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[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

To ANYONE who is currently reading/browsing this topic:
I am currently letting this fic be criticized by my friend and as a hint, she caught many mistakes. To correct these mistakes, I'll be changing some parts, but not entirely the whole fic. I'm just going to rephrase somee parts, add "comma's", and change some parts tense. Its because the tense in my fic isn't constant.

Being a science girl, in a science course, makes it hard to make fics, one-shots or even stories, because science people writes in a different manner than those who are CA people (Communication Arts). I'm trying my best to make fics that wouldn't be near the descriptions science people use.

So I apologize on how my fics are right now. I still need to pay attention to my writing skills, which needs improvement. As I was saying earlier, I will just redo the mistakes, I won't totally rewrite all the chapters.

My friend told me, my fic is okay, "pero for a science girl, ok ka magsulat," was her distinct words. [Tranlation: but, for a science girl, you're good in writing]

So these days, I'll be busy finishing what my friend told me over at YM last night, and that means, no updates until I fiinish redoing the mistakes. sorry... next update is soon!

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

I tried something new on this chapter. I actually haven’t written anything since I last updated this fic. Why? I didn’t have any motivation and focus to do it. I don’t know, maybe I was just distracted by so many things.

Btw, if you know faraithi, thank him for having this chapter out. He helped me believe in myself to continue this fic, since I was soon to break down last night.
Nothing to worry about, I will continue this fic until I can’t think of anything more to add.
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Chapter 3 – Past

Running out of the dimly lit corridor, Saki stopped on her tracks as Nakai-san, the store manager called her, “Shimizu-san, did you found the shirt the woman was looking for?“ She kept silent for a while, trying to get her voice back, as she looked down, not wanting to meet her manager’s gaze.

“I’m sorry, sir. I-I couldn’t,” she fidgeted as she squeezed her left arm tightly, making the store manager look at her worriedly.

“Are you okay, Shimizu-san?” he asked, trying his best not to hit a nerve, as she looked near to cry. He put her hand on the girls shoulder, trying to make her know he was concerned.

Saki can hear heart crying, as she remembers what happened earlier. She wanted to cry, but the time and place made it difficult, “I-I’m okay, sir. I just can’t find it.” She lied and it seems he didn’t buy it.

A girl came out of the same corridor, holding the shirt Saki was assigned to get. She walked to the woman who was done waiting, and was about to complain, until she handed it to her. The woman smiled at the girl, thanking her before paying at the cashier. The girl was about to attend the needs of another customer when, she was called by their manager.

“Murakami-san!” he called and the girl came forward.

“Hai?” she asked, her gaze falling on Saki, who was beside her. Did something happen?

“Murakami-san, please escort Shimizu-san to the back and let her rest for a while,” she nodded and held Saki’s hand, leading her to the back room, where they were allowed to rest.

Closing the door behind her, Megumi walked towards the girl she escorted. She was about to speak when, she heard soft weeping sounds from the girl in front of her. “Saki-chan,” she called, but it looked like the other girl didn’t hear her.

“Saki-chan,” she called once again, but the other didn’t move. She only knew one thing that can at least help Saki for now. She started to reach out for her but pulls away after hesitating.
She didn’t want to hear Saki cry, she made this promise to herself that when she and Saki meet again, she didn’t want to hear her cry, or rather, she didn’t want her to cry. Maybe its because of what she did to her before, I made her wait… I made her trust me… I let her take care of me… I agreed to love her as she loved me… she started balling up her fists, trying to shake off the past memory, she took long to forget. But in the end… I wasted all her efforts… I… I let her fall… I chose this guy over her… She cried… for so long, she cried because of me…

She looked at the crying girl, still trying not to go deeper on her past memory, she tried to reach for Saki again, as she finally touched her, holding her close. The other girl didn’t resist, but buried her face on the others arms and continued to cry.

Megumi’s heart kept beating fast, as she held the vulnerable girl in her arms, holding her tighter. What could have made her cry like this again? she wanted to ask, but was scared to, knowing that she once made her cry like this. How nostalgic…

The weeping didn’t stop, but she felt the other girl move and gave her space, still wrapping her arms around her. “Megu…” the girl looked up to her, her eyes looking like it was beaten up by Maimi, but the feelings of sadness and pain revealing in those hollow eyes.

The girl finally opened up, revealing what she was keeping inside, as she let Megumi hold her, like old times.

***

Their work for the day is finished. They walked out the door, as they finished saying their thanks.

”It’s great we finally finished the practicum this early,” Megumi said, breaking the silence between the two of them.

The other girl slowly nodded, “I didn’t expect we would finish the assigned time in just a day. I’m gonna miss working in that store.”

Megumi couldn’t help but smile when she Saki finally let out a smile, “I wonder if I can still help out tomorrow,” Saki turned to Megumi, seeing her smiling genuinely at her, she pulled back her gaze in front, as her face turned slightly red.

“Nakai-san told me, in the next three days, he needed someone to help him with the store. He was going to give a sale and there won’t be a doubt that many people would come and fill up the store.” Megumi looked up, wondering what Nakai-san’s store would look like when people come barging in and fight for the clothes. She smiled at the thought but Saki stopped a few meters back, staring at a paper, glued to the wall.

“You go ahead Megu, I need to go talk to Nakai-san again.” Saki explained, before running off to the clothing store again.

She thought of running after her but instead, she looked at the piece of paper she was looking at before.

“In need of help for my 3 day sale. Only ages 17-25 can apply. 35,000 Yen a day.” Megumi read, letting her lower jaw fall a little, “35,000 Yen a day? That’s way too much, wait…” She looked at the bottom of the paper and found out why the pay is that huge, “So that’s why, he’ll only be hiring two people.”

So, Saki’s still wants to buy the shoes Miyabi wanted… Even if she saw what happened earlier… She’ll even work for three days just to get the money to buy it. What a great girlfriend… Megumi thought as she gave out a smirk.

***

Letting herself fall on her bed, Saki stared at the ceiling, thinking that after three days, she’ll be able to buy Miyabi the shoes she want. Why does she need shoes that expensive? She let out a sigh, As long as she’s happy with it, and that’s fine with me.

She kept silent until she felt her side ache. She sat up, and jumped off of bed as she saw who poked her.

“What are you doing here?” She asked, while still trying to overcome the shock she just got.

“Why? Is it forbidden for me to visit my girlfriend?” Miyabi asked back, giving out a pout.

Seeing her girlfriend pouting, she composed herself and took hold of her hand, pulling Miyabi into a deep, passionate kiss. She held her lips locked with hers for a while until Miyabi pulled herself away.

“Have you eaten dinner?” Saki asked, while fixing the bed and slid herself under the covers.

“Yes, you’re mom really knows how to cook.” She answered, as she followed Saki under the covers.

As she was already comfortable, snuggling beside the small figure of her girlfriend, Saki leaned in to kiss her, but pulled away after a while. As they both stared at each other, Miyabi wraps her arms around Saki’s neck and pulled her down, resulting on another making out session.

Saki tried to pull away again, but Miyabi held her still, making her kiss deeper, as she slid her tongue inside the others mouth.

Saki froze for a second, wondering what made Miyabi kiss her like this. She didn’t mind having this but it was just new, they haven’t done this before.

Not holding back any longer, she started to return Miyabi’s intense kiss, as she started to kiss her deeper, more passionately but torrid. She started to go down, kissing Miyabi’s neck, as Miyabi whispered her name. She took hold of Miyabi’s thigh and strokes it as she returned to Miyabi’s lips, burning themselves from their own heat for the rest of the night.

[Miss Behave]

Saki is just....way too good T-T
Even after seeing her girlfriend cheat on her, she still wants to make her happy...
urg, Miya better feel guilty >_<

[Glasseyelashes]

man, saki better speak up, or else miya'll cheat again.

[deukkae]

Miyabi did what?!?

And Saki's still going to buy those shoes....

Keep going Panick-chan!

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

Thank you eveyone for still reading my fic.

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Chapter 4 – I Don't Deserve Her

Five minutes had passed since Saki turned off her phone’s alarm, telling her it was already 5:30 in the morning. She tried to sit up, but a hand pulled her down and wraps itself around her waist. I guess I won’t be going out for a jog today. She told herself, stroking the younger girls hair, as the girl snuggled close to her.

“Must… tell… Saki…” whispered the girl beside her.

“What do you need to tell me? Miya? Are you awake?” Saki asked while trying to take a peek on the girls face.

She waited for a few minutes but the girl didn’t answer, I guess she’s still asleep, she concluded as she carefully moves Miyabi’s hands off of her, and slowly moves out of the bed. She looked out of the window, couldn’t find the sun anywhere. She stretched her hands upward, giving out a yawn before putting them down, and then looks at Miyabi who was still sleeping peacefully on her bed.

She leaned over to kiss her but a voice made her stop, “Must… tell… about… kiss…” It was just Miyabi, talking in her sleep, realizing it was about the kiss yesterday, Tell me about the kiss… She looks at the sleep-talking girl as she smiled, carefully brushing off some hair that were covering the other girls face.

“About that kiss, Miya-chan…” She continued stroking the girls’ hair, “I told you before that I don’t want anything going on between you and Risako,” She stopped playing with the girls’ hair and turns to her face.

“I haven’t told you, I saw the whole thing…” She gently placed her hand on the girls face, caressing the quiet girl’s face, “I… can understand when Risako leaned in…” she pauses for a moment, trying to clear her throat for the next words she’ll be saying, “But…when you were the one who kissed her, I… felt my heart beat faster…” Saki tried to hold back her tears as she held the other girls hand, squeezing it tightly, but the girl didn’t move.

“Feeling anger rushing through my veins… I keep telling myself, please stop… please stop it Miyabi… please…” She can’t hold it anymore, she looked down, letting her tears fell, “That’s when I opened the door… cause I wanted you to stop…”

She lets go of the other girl’s hand, as she tries to wipe her tears. She then leaned to the girl she loved, and whispered to her ears, “Please Miya… don’t do it again… I… I don’t know what I’ll do when I see you do that again…” Crying made it hard for her to continue, but she still wanted to say one thing, “Please remember, Miya… I love you.”

With that, she fled out of the room, ran towards the front door, quickly slid her feet in her running shoes and runs out of the house, running as fast as she can, as she let her tears come, she can’t stop crying, Miya… why do you have to do that… am I not enough?

Miyabi’s POV

She’s gone… I wanted to stand up and follow her but my legs won’t move. I wanted to cry, as she told me she saw me kissing Risako yesterday, but I can’t, I can’t let her know I was awake the whole time she was talking. Why am I so selfish? She was crying and I didn’t even hold her. Is it because I cheated on her? Am I feeling guilty for yesterday?

Miyabi’s eyes started to get wet, as she realized how much she hurt Saki in just that one time she let herself be controlled by temptation. She buried her face on the covers and there she cried.

Why am I so stupid? I let myself get carried away, and now I hurt Saki. I… I need to apologize…

Why didn’t I tell her last night? I was scared, scared that she’ll get hurt, since she warned me not to have anything with Risako…

She stopped thinking and just cried. Saki might come back soon, I should stop crying, she tried to hold back her tears but she failed, she curled herself as she keeps on crying. I don’t deserve to be her girlfriend…

***

Finally back in the house, Saki takes off her shoes before walking to her room. She froze in front of the door with her right hand holding the doorknob, when she heard crying inside. She quickly opens the door, seeing Miyabi curled up on her bed, crying.

“Miya, what happened?” She quickened her pace and as she reached the bed, Miyabi threw herself on her chest. Saki wrapped her arms around her as the girl buried her face on her chest.

“I’m sorry Saki… I let myself get carried away… I… I let my desire control me… I…” She couldn’t find the words to continue as Saki held her tightly.

Saki gave her a tender kiss on her head, as she realized Miyabi heard everything she said earlier, “Don’t worry about it anymore Miya. Its finished. We can forget about it.”

Saki let her cry until her tears were near to dry. Miyabi moved back a little, and looked at her near to be ex-girlfriend, as the other smiled softly, I don’t deserve to be her girlfriend, not after what I had done… Miyabi opens her mouth, but the other girl stopped her from saying anything.

“You were thinking way too much again, Miya,” the girl started as she leaned closer, closing the gap between them, as she kissed Miyabi.

She held it there for a while, waiting for the other to return the kiss. She waited another few seconds and was about to let go, when the other returned it. They locked themselves into a passionate kiss, not letting each other go.

***

Lying down on the bed, holding each other close, when a voice from downstairs startled them, “Saki! Miya, dear! Breakfast is ready!”

“Why are you the only one she calls dear?” Saki turned to Miyabi, laughing.

“Because she likes me.” Miyabi answered, accompanying the other girl in laughter.

“Because she likes you as my girlfriend.” Saki corrected, as she gently pushes Miyabi’s nose.

Still not getting out of bed, a knock came from the door, “Saki! Miyabi, dear, breakfast is ready. You don’t want to miss breakfast, Saki, or else you’re going to tire yourself quickly.” Her mother called on them once again, but this time, they got off the bed.

“We’re coming mom.” Saki replied as she looked at the mirror, not wanting her mother to know that she cried. Another face came up on the mirror, as she felt sudden warmth behind her.

“Do I look awful?” Miyabi asked while checking her face on the mirror.

“Yes, you do.” Saki let out another laugh, teasing Miyabi is fun for her.

Miyabi pouts a little but it faded when she recalled what Saki’s mother said earlier.

“Saki, you’re going to work today? I didn’t get any message from H!P.” Miyabi asked while searching her phone for maybe an unread message.

“Not that work.” Saki replied as she was combing her hair, “I told you yesterday I have a practicum to finish.”

“About that, what is this practicum?” Miyabi countered as she glared at Saki for not making it clear yesterday.

“It’s a project for a class of mine, we need to finish 40 hours of community service, you know, helping out a community.” Saki smiled as she turned to her girlfriend who was glaring at her.

“Oh… Then, until when are you going to do this project?” Sounding a bit curious and disappointed as she knows she won’t be able to be with Saki for the next few days.

“I still need to work for three days.” Saki answered as she pulled Miyabi closer to her, “Don’t worry, I’ll be visiting you when I get out of work early.”

“But… three days is long…” Seeing the older girl smiling gently at her, the only thing she could say is, “Okay, fine… But you better visit me or else I’ll cheat on you again.”

Hearing what the other girl said, Saki didn’t mind as she knows, no, believes that Miyabi won’t cheat on her again.

“Saki! -” “We’re coming!”

Saki held Miyabi’s hand and led her to the kitchen for breakfast.

[SweetHoney]

Wow~

Very nicely done chapter Panpan!

Can't wait to read more

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

woah! Its been a long time since I've updated! :grin:
Well, here I am again!

Just to let everyone know... I was kind of in a different feeling when writing this. I don't know..
Maybe because I started it different, the point of view is different...

I tell you, this is different from my previous ones...
Speaking of point of view, please tell me what you guys think about this and about my previous fics.

btw, you guys might want to join this forum... just for fun... HPmegaForum

Kidnapped

“WTH?” Maimi shouted as she entered the room, what could be inside? Maimi only shouts that word when she sees two people kissing.

“Ewww…” Momoko exclaimed, as she was the second one to enter. Okay, there must be something in there that is not appropriate for our age.

“What? What?” Chisato asked, entering the door after Momo, “AAAHHHHH! MY EYES!”

I fidgeted as I get nearer and nearer to that girl-eating room, which has something bad inside. One…two… three… four… five… There are still five persons before me.

I froze as I felt a tug on my shirt from behind. It couldn’t be, right? The one who is behind me is not a ghost, zombie, or any other being that will lead me to death, right?
I slowly turned my head but before I could see the beings face, it grabbed my hand and it made me jump, “AAAHHHH!!!! No! Don’t take me to hell! Please! I’m too young to die!”

I curled myself on a corner, near a desk just a few meters away from where I was standing. Please make it go away! I’m still too young to die! I can’t die! Who will take care of Risako?

I heard footsteps getting nearer, as I curled up more, Please Kami-sama! If you want to take someone, please take Maimi! She’s mean, a bad influence and a perv; please take her instead of me!

I awaited for the unknown being to hold me when I heard a familiar voice, “Miya, are you going to stay there and scare your wits out, or do you want to comfort Risako?”

When the voice said Risako, I opened my eyes, revealing a small figure with its hands placed on her hips. “Well?” the girl asked again.


“What?” I asked as a reply, my vision starting to clear and it was only Captain.

“You scared Risako when you shouted loudly as she tried to cling to you.” Saki answered as she raised one of her brows and gives out a smirk.

I didn’t wait for her to tell me again for the third time, cause when I do, I’ll get my butt kicked. I walked back to the line as Captain followed. Risako was now clinging to Chinami, which I think was a bad idea, since Chinami is holding Maasa.

I took both her hands and pulled her close, letting her hug me tightly as we looked at the door in front. The door opened, revealing the butler, “Next please.”

I stepped backward and Risako followed, leaving Captain, Maasa and Chinami in front. Maasa can’t go in yet since Chinami is still holding her, I can’t since Risako is holding me. I turned to Captain and she looked back, “Fine, I’ll go.”
She went in, letting the butler close the door. I waited for a reaction, but it appears Captain is okay.

“Ahhh!” Okay, I guess not.

“Maimi! Don’t do that again!” I heard Captain shouting at someone who appears to be Maimi. Man, what could have Maimi done to make Captain shout.

The door opened again, revealing the butler who signaled Maasa and Chinami to come inside. When the door closed, we heard continuous banging on the door, “Let me out! Please! Let me out! I can’t take the view! Let me out!”

“Chi-chan! Stop it! Just close your eyes and I’ll take you to your seat.” A low voice uttered, then the banging stopped. I guess Maasa took care of Chinami.

Realizing it was already going to be our turn, Risako held my hand tightly, “Miya, I’m scared,” I placed my hand under her chin, tilted it upward, before giving her a kiss. I held it there for a while, enjoying the tender feeling when someone cleared his throat. We both looked at the direction of the sound and found the butler standing in front of the door.

“Please enter, we can’t let the masters wait.” He explained before opening the door for the both of us.

I turned to Risako again, “Don’t worry, I’ll protect you from anything.” I tried to sound brave but inside, I really don’t know what to do.

We finally entered the room, and truthfully, what we first saw wasn’t appropriate for our age. I sighed as I led Risako to the vacant seats beside Chinami.

***Earlier that day***

“Where do you want to eat?” I asked Risako, while waiting for her to finish placing her things in her locker.

“Anywhere you want.” She answered, “It’s hard to find anywhere, Risako.” I sighed, leaning on the locker beside hers, I started to think where that anywhere eatery could be seen.

“What about the eatery of MaiMai’s parents?” I suggested, trying to remember where that place is.

She finally closed her locker and turned to look at me, “That is a great place! I haven’t been there for a long time now.”

“Then, that’s where we’ll go,” I held her hand, and our fingers intertwined.

As we turned right in an intersection, the school wasn’t visible anymore, and we were glad to be out that prison. We stopped in front of an orange colored shop, with a big sign saying, MaiMai’s Yummy Palace. I stood there, staring at the sign, still can’t figure out why it was named as MaiMai’s Yummy Palace.

“Let’s go inside,” Risako told me, as I nodded.

We were about to enter when three girls in black suits came out of the shop, one carrying MaiMai, and the other two grabbed both Risako and me. We tried to break free but before we could, we were already pushed inside the big limo.

We tried the doors but it was locked from outside, “Help! Help us!” I heard MaiMai screaming at the people outside but it seems they can’t hear her. Risako was about to cry, when I held her close, “It’s going to be alright, I’m here.”

I caressed Risako’s cheek and before I could do anything else, she leaned in, closing the gap between us. I can’t resist Risako’s kisses, I just can’t. I wrapped my arms around her waist, pulling her closer, as I stay lip locked with her. We forgot about what was happening and was enjoying kissing each other when a voice stopped us.

“What are you two doing at a time like this? And just to let both of you know, what you’re doing is inappropriate for my age.” MaiMai glared at the both of us, but she was right, we shouldn’t be making out when we are being kidnapped, and MaiMai is still not in the appropriate age to see what she just saw.

“We’re sorry MaiMai, we will focus from now on.” I smiled crookedly as I slowly scratched the back of my neck.

We tried to contact the other Berryz and C-ute, but no one is answering their phones. I was just about to dial Captain’s number when one of the girls in black suits looked at us, “We’re arriving at the HQ.”

HQ? What HQ? It didn’t take long when the car stopped and the three girls dragged us up to the hallway, where we saw the others.

The three women in black entered a huge door, what could be inside?

“Excuse me my masters, but all of the girls are already here. Will I send them in?”

***Present time***

I rolled my eyes while seeing the others reaction on what they were staring at.

“What is the real reason for us to be abducted here?” Kanna asked in an irritated tone.

“Are we kidnapped just to see this?” Yurina asked while covering Chinami’s eyes.

“Well, someone’s enjoying it!” Airi sighed as she looked at Maimi whose chin was resting on her hand.

Being beside Maimi, Saki hits Maimi’s arm, letting her come back to reality.

“Stop staring!” Saki started as she examines the taller girls face. Captain, why are you messing with Maimi? You don’t know what that girl is thinking.

Well, being one of the closest friends of Maimi, I know what goes on in that brain of hers. I just can’t tell Captain how that pervy Maimi imagines her.

“You’re imagining too much again!” Saki stated as she hits Maimi again.

Maimi gave out a grin and leans over to Captain, their lips near touching, “Yes, and I like how great you were doing it with me.”

Can’t control her blush, Saki pulled back and hits Maimi on the head, “S-stop including me in your imaginations!”

I gave out a sigh. I thought Captain would fall for that Maimi’s temptation.

I looked at Risako, who was holding the hem of her skirt. I took hold of both of her hands and smiled at her.

I was about to ask Risako how she was doing, when MaiMai shouted, “FINALLY!”

We both looked in front, seeing the two people finally finished their session.

“Why are you guys so noisy?” the shorter girl exclaimed, standing straight from sitting down at the others lap.

Both of them, the butler and the Women in black called Masters, finally turned their attention to us. As they stepped out of the dimmed part of the room and into the lighted part, the girls gasped as they saw who were the culprits on kidnapping them, and making them watch the most nerve wrecking scene.

The taller girl stepped forward, glaring at everyone, “Why? Haven’t seen me and Ai kiss?” Risa asked, laughing hysterically at us.
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well? how did it go? I was actually kind of laughing while I was writing this.
So, please tell me which point of view I write best, third person or first person..
Thank you!

and, oh yeah, before i forget, I'm currently doing a video for my new fic. It will be done soon and will post the link for the video as soon as I upload it.

[~*Sarah]

I just started reading this fic and it's great. I was so mad when Miyabi kissed Risako back and I was surprised that Saki still wanted to buy the shoes for her. I hope Miyabi doesn't do something stupid again. *sigh* Saki is so dreamy.

[Miss Behave]

HAHAHAAHHAHAH HILARIOUS!!
oh gawd, at first i thought it was going to be some kind of scandal lol
I love the little bit of TakaGaki in the end

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

@SweetHoney: yey!! Sweety-chan! Thank you for the comment and the new nickname! I also can't wait for chapter 14... lol
@indigo: waaiiii! It's great to know that you liked it!
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I've said earlier right? I got a new idea for a new fic and here it is!
I made a video for it, since I got inspired doing one when I saw indigo's vid for YajiUme...
So btw, here is the link for the video >> Hoping for Chance *I just uploaded it so maybe its not in a better quality*

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Chapter 1

“Saki,” the familiar voice echoed in my head, “Saki,” it called again. Where could it be coming from? I looked around, trying to find the person who was calling me. I looked, and looked, but the only thing I could see was darkness. I ran front, back, left and right, but no sign of light and the person who was calling me.

I stopped running, getting ready to feel the pain from my feet, but it didn’t come. “Saki...” It called again, to the right. I ran again, hoping that I would see the person calling me. Why do I keep on running after this unknown voice? Why isn’t there any light? A lot of questions came filling my head, “Saki,” the voice called again, and now it’s coming from where I came. I quickly changed my direction and ran back to where I came.

“Please! Let me see you!” I shouted, trying to beg the voice to stop in one place, “Saki,” to the left, so I ran to that direction, “Saki,” forward, “Saki,” right, “Saki,” left, “Saki… Saki… Saki…” My ears can’t figure out where it was coming from, it was too many at a time, “Saki…Saki… Saki…” The voice called again, I stopped, trying to identify where the real source is. I opened my eyes and ran forward, believing that this is where the voice was coming from.

I kept running and running, until my feet started to become heavy, I can’t hardly see, my world is spinning, I need to stop but my feet won’t let me. I started to gasp for air as my feet got harder to lift. My eyes kept closing on me as it tries to get the dizziness away.

“Saki,” the voice called again, I tried to look for the person, as the echoes faded.

“Where are you? Miyabi! Please let me see you!” I pleaded, as I get to realize who owns the voice. Why is Miyabi calling me? Did something happen between her and Risako?
A flash of blinding light spread across the darkness. Covering my eyes, I tripped on a rock, and fell forward. I let myself fall, not even trying to brace myself, Miya… please catch me… I know it would be impossible for her to come and catch me as I wished, but it’s worth a try.

I closed my eyes, waiting for the impact, I guess she isn’t coming… tears came falling down from my cheeks, have I been crying for sometime now? I asked myself, not knowing that I started to cry when I realized who owned the voice.

I waited a few more seconds, but the impact didn’t come, but I feel warmth on my whole body. Could it be? Could it be that Miyabi came and catch me? I opened my eyes, and there I saw an arm that I’m familiar with, I looked up quickly, telling myself that it's Miyabi, Miyabi came to catch me, she came to get me out of this.

I stared at the face of my catcher; more tears came falling down, as I hugged her. She held me tighter and whispered, “I kept calling you, but you didn’t respond. What if something happened to you? I’ll regret it for the rest of my life.”

I held her tighter, as I buried my face on her arms, “Please, stay with me forever. Don’t leave me anymore.”

That precious moment faded, as I woke up with sweat all over my body. I sat up, disappointed, disheartened and crying, as I realized it was only a dream, and me being with Miyabi, is still a dream I could never reach.

I kept crying, until my mom opened the door, as she heard me from the adjacent room. Without any questions, she held me in her arms and stayed beside me until it was already time for me to get ready for school and for her to cook breakfast.

I went to the bathroom and splashed my face with water, “I guess I should stop crying now, or else Momo will get worried,” I got myself ready and went down to eat breakfast.

I finished eating breakfast when the doorbell rang. It must be Momo. I quickly put on my shoes as my mom reminded me of things I should remember when I go out of the house, “Don’t talk to strangers. Watch where you are going. Take care in crossing the street. Be aware of the people around you, they might be bad guys…” She could go on and on and on, but I knew she is just worried about me, “Hai! I will. I’m leaving!” I yelled back, so she could hear it in the kitchen, “Take care!” I heard her as I was closing the door.

I was taking my keys off the lock when someone jumped on me into a hug, “Good morning!” I heard her say after kissing me on the cheek. “Good morning, Momo.”

She let go of me, and as I turned to look at her, her smile instantly faded, “Did you cry again Saki?” I was caught off guard and I kept silent, trying to find the words I should use to tell her.

Looking at her worried eyes, it became hard to think of ways not to tell her, “Yes, I did.” Crap! Why do I have to be so truthful when I see those eyes?

I can see she became more worried as she cupped my left cheek, “Don’t worry Momo, it was just a bad dream.”
She stared at me and I can’t stand those worried eyes. She looked at my lips as she leaned closer and kissed me. Not wanting her to worry anymore, I wrapped my arms around her waist, pulling her closer, as I kissed her back.

A knock from the window surprised us, “Saki! You’ll be late!” My mom shouted as she opened the window and waved at Momoko, “Good morning Momo-chan! You two better get going, and when Saki made you late for your class, just tell me and I’ll punish her.” My mom was so kind to Momo, maybe because of her undying charm to make people like her, the charm that also Risako has.

“Saki! Get going already!” I snapped out of my thoughts and was dragged by Momo to the streets.

We walked by our usual path to school, now that Momo also attends my school, it wouldn’t be hard for her to find me, and pounces on me every now and then. I giggled at the thought that made Momo curious.

“What’s so funny?” She asked, making her cute irresistible smile, “I was just thinking about you, pouncing on me every now and then, since we now go to the same school.”
Her face turned red as she squeezed my hand, and walked closer to me. Noticing her blush a few times before, I see this blush as something cuter than the former ones. I gave her a peck on her cheek, which made her face turn redder.

I leaned forward, my lips near her ears, as she can feel me breath, “You look so cute when you blush, Momo-chan.” I backed away, smiling at her, but she kept her head forward, still trying to stop herself from blushing, which I knew it wouldn’t stop until we get to school.

[Miss Behave]

The video was great, i loved it, Saki/Miya is one of my favorite pairings so I'm glad you're writing about them
aaahh This story is epic, but now I'm worried about Momo and Risako =[

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

^Thank you!
And thanks for commenting on the video too..
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Torn in Two

Chapter 5 – Special Day Part 1

After they ate breakfast, Saki and Miyabi took turns on using the bathroom, as they get ready to go. Saki’s mother bid them farewell, as they went out of the door and walked towards the train station. The older girl sat on one of the benches in the waiting area, while they wait for the train to come. Miyabi sat beside her, “Do you really need to work until later in the afternoon?”

Saki nodded as she flips to the next page of a textbook she brought with her, “Are there any exemptions?” Saki looked at her, closing the book.

“I’m sorry Miya, if I don’t need to do this, I’ll spend the whole three days with you.” Saki leaned in and kissed her cheek. She looked at the tracks to see if the train is already visible.

She couldn’t take her eyes away from the older girl, as she wanted to tell her what is going to happen at the day of her last practicum, “Saki…”

The older girl turned to her, smiling happily, “hmm?”

“Do you remember any special event that will be happening this week?” She asked, examining the other girls face.

Saki tilted her head sideways, thinking of a special event that Miyabi was asking, “Well?” Miyabi asked, getting a little bit worried, as she guessed the other girl forgot all about it.

Saki kept quiet until a loud honk came from the tracks, “Ah! The train is here,” Saki exclaimed, as she stands up, held Miyabi’s hand and drags her inside the train.

The train trip was quiet, no one even said a word, but the older girl held Miyabi's hand and their fingers intertwined. She didn’t forget, right? Miyabi asked herself, placing her head on Saki’s shoulder. She won’t forget right? She’s my girlfriend. She won’t forget. She continued telling herself, until Saki finally talks.

“Miya,” she started, as she stared at their hands, “hmm?” she answered, looking at the other girls face, “What do you want for your birthday?”

Miyabi’s eyes widened, I knew she wouldn’t forget, she hums a tune for a while, as she thinks of a thing she wants, “Can I have anything?” she asked slyly, as her hands held Saki’s hand in between.

Saki looked at her, smiling her usual, warm, loving, caring smile, as she caressed Miyabi’s face, “Of course, anything my princess would want.”

“Then, I want-” she stopped, remembering the shoe, but she knew it was impossible to buy that for now, “I want you come and stay in the party I’ll be having two days from now.”
Saki looked at her, confused, why didn’t she ask for those expensive shoes?

“That’s all?” Saki asked, tying to see if she will ask for it.

The younger girl nodded, “Yes, nothing else. I just want you to be in the party and maybe, we could announce about us…” her voice faded as she said the last word. Many doubts came popping in their heads as to what the others would think if they get to know about them.

The train pulled to a stop, Saki took the younger girls hand and led her out to the streets. When they arrived on Miyabi’s house, she wanted to let her girlfriend in but she remembered, the other had work to do, “So…see you later then.”

“Yeah, see you later. Oh yeah, I’ll be bringing snacks when I come by.” Saki smiled genuinely at the younger girl, she held her hand again, but this time, pulled her closer and planted a kiss on her lips. Miyabi didn’t want this to end, but the older pulled back, and bid her goodbye.

That afternoon, true to her word, Saki came by with snacks they just ended up finishing before they could give to Miyabi’s parents. The next day went by the same, nothing really special happened between the two of them, only a few hugs and kisses.

Finally, the third day came, and it was also Miyabi’s special day. Not wanting to get out of bed, she reached her phone and found 16 unread messages, What? 16 messages?

She opened the first one, which she received exactly midnight, she read it aloud, “HAPPY BIRTHDAY MIYA! As you want for your birthday, I’ll be going to your party later. I just need to finish my work and I promise, I’ll be there as soon as I can.”

She was so happy that the very first one who greeted her was Saki. She really stayed up until midnight as she promised me on the phone last night. She scrolls down, as continued reading, ”You must be asleep by now, so when you read this, just imagine that I’m beside you, holding your hand tightly, while I caress your cheek, and give you a kiss,” she did as she told her and after imagining it, she actually felt a warm peck on her cheek. She felt her ears burning, as her face turned red. Her face can’t contain her shade of red when she read the last sentence, “I love you. ”

Her heart, racing as she got thrilled on finally seeing Saki again later in her special day, she opened her other messages and found out all of H!P Kids has greeted her, and one unexpected greeting from Tanaka-san.

She replied all of them with a “Thank you,” and an invitation to her party later. She wanted the whole karaoke place to herself, but it was too big and she just invited 16 people, so that means its only going to be two rooms if they won’t fit in one.

She threw herself on the bed as thoughts of Saki came popping in her mind then she remembered Risako and the desire she felt, when she kissed her. It was…great. She can’t describe it anymore, and she fell into deep thought, When I kissed Risako that day, it felt wonderful, enjoyable, passionate, and I actually wanted more, that’s why I leaned in after. Now that she thinks of it again, why can’t I describe it as before? Is it really just for that time? She kept quiet, thinking she wanted to kiss Risako again, just to confirm if she really liked the kiss lustfully or it was just for that one time, that she thought Saki wouldn’t see. She shook her head, trying to get those thoughts out, she stared at the ceiling, trying to find something on it to grab her attention, but her thoughts lingered again, I’ll kiss her…

She jumped out of bed, hitting both her cheeks, “Miyabi! What are you thinking! You can’t do that! You have a girlfriend, a GREAT girlfriend!” She kept walking back and forth, organizing her thoughts, You can’t find any other girl like her Miyabi, and you LOVE her!

Her pace got faster, as a trail became visible, I’ll place some rules. First, cheating is a NO-NO! Upon saying this, she instantly remembered Tsuji-san. A smile formed on her face but she shook her head, making herself focus, Second! Making Saki cry is a sin! Now, I’m accused guilty for that rule. She continued walking, not feeling any pain on her feet, “Lastly, love her.” She finally stopped, smiling contentedly on her rules, but then, her smile faded as she lay down on the floor, wanting to do a tantrum, “What number is that rule? I can’t believe I forgot what number I was on.” She pouts, as she did do a tantrum, I feel stupid and need to go back to kindergarten…

***In Nakai-san’s clothing store that afternoon***

Saki cleaned up the mess as Nakai-san turned the sign around, showing CLOSED behind the glass. Nakai helped Saki finish cleaning, before letting her go.

“Thank you for helping me Shimizu-san. I’m disappointed on Cho for not coming today. If he comes tomorrow to collect his pay, I’ll just give him the amount for two days.” Saki giggled as Nakai-san looked furious as he thought of Cho, a boy about 5 years older than her. Nakai-san is really upset that Cho didn’t come.

“The one that really made me pissed of is that, he let you take care of it all. The sad thing there is that, you’re a girl. He’s a guy! You’re younger. He’s older!” Saki really felt bad for Nakai-san, even if Cho let her do everything today, Nakai-san helped her along the times, people keep on asking her for the shirts they were holding.

“That’s okay Nakai-san, we managed to sell everything today. Let Cho be, maybe he met an emergency and need to excuse himself for the day.” Saki tried to cheer him up, and he did, reaching a brown envelope on the counter and handed it to Saki.

“Here. I have put more than you’re expected pay. Thank you again Shimizu-san.” Saki wanted to give back the extra money, but Nakai insisted that she keep it.

“Thank you Nakai-san for letting me help you.” Saki bowed down, showing her thanks.

Nakai shook his head, “It’s okay Shimizu-san, and you’re a big help.” He smiled at her but got curious, “Well Shimizu-san, I’m sorry for asking but, why did you want to help work for me these three days?”

Saki smiled, playing with the envelope on her hands, “I was saving for a gift for a special someone.” She felt a slight blush came up but she tried hard to hide it.

Nakai-san smiled happily at her, “You worked hard just to buy a gift for a special someone?” he kept on smiling as Saki felt him staring at her, “That’s very thoughtful of you. He must really be lucky to have a girlfriend like you.”

Her face turning redder, she thanked Nakai-san again before leaving the store. She went straight to the Nike shop and looked for the shoes Miyabi wanted. She circled the whole shop but she couldn’t find it. She made her way to an employee of the store and asked about those shoes, “I’m sorry miss, but someone already bought it, and that is the only stock we got.” Seeing that Saki’s expression changed, failure and disheartened feeling came creeping to the employee’s back, “If you really want that shoes, the girl who bought it, just went out of the shop.”

With that, she thanked the man as she dashed out of the shop, trying to catch up with the girl, the employee pointed out.

“Sumimasen!” She called out as the girl stopped and looked her way.

“The cute pink colored shoes in the Nike shop, did you buy it?” Saki asked, gasping for air.

The girl nodded, “Yes, it’s cute isn’t it.”

Saki stood straight and made eye contact with the girl, “Please! Please let me buy it from you,” she bowed down, as a sign of sincerity, “Please, my friend really wanted that and I promised I’ll buy it for her birthday.”

Surprised as to what the younger girl just asked, she held the paper bag closer to her chest, “I’m sorry, but I can’t. I want these shoes.”

Saki looked at her again before bowing down as before, “Please! I’ll pay you more than the amount you bought it. Just let me buy it from you, please!” Saki pleaded, but the girl didn’t agree and walked away. I need to get those shoes.

She ran to the girl again and bowed down as before, still pleading for the girl to release it to her, she did this all over again as the girl tried to walk away three times.

“I said NO!” Saki was taken a back, “I don’t want to sell this to you. As I said, I like this shoe and I won’t sell it!” The girl walked away, leaving Saki feeling disappointed and frustrated, I guess I have to bring her to the shop tomorrow and as what she wanted besides that.

She walked to a well-known bakery near the place of Miyabi’s party. She was in charge of the cake as the others told her last night. She picked this simple white colored cake and let the baker design it the same as in the paper she just handed. I hope it turns out great, Momo and Chinami’s joint drawing of the cakes design made it look great, but I hope the baker understands what they put there.

She sat down at the table, just in front of the counter as she waits for the cake. She felt her phone vibrated, taking it out and reading the message, “How is the cake doing? Miyabi’s getting crazy waiting for it,” she let out a short giggle as she read Maasa’s mail.

“They are getting the decorations done. So what exactly is Miyabi doing?”

“She’s walking back and forth, while saying, Hurry up will yah! I’m getting anxious. Momo kept pulling her down to her seat but she gets up and starts to walk back and forth again. You should tell the pastry man to hurry up, Miyabi wants the cake right now.”

Saki almost laughed when she read about Miyabi and the last sentence in Maasa’s mail, Maasa doesn’t know that the cake is not what Miyabi wanted now, she told herself, giggling, she wanted me to go there now.

The man in the counter called her, handing out the cake in a lovely box. She payed for it and she went straight to the party.
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I don't know what to say...

[~*Sarah]

Awww she couldn't get the shoes. That makes me sad for her. (tho, after what happened, I wouldn't even be considering getting the shoes for her. Bad Miya.) Also kinda sucks that Miyabi is thinking about that kiss with Risako. She seems to have enjoyed it waaay too much. I wonder what Risako thinks of what happened. I hope nothing bad happens at the party, but I have a feeling something will happen.

Edit: Wooh, I started page 2! Yay!!

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

@indigo: Thank you for starting the second page!

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Chapter 6 - Special Day Part 2

Finally arriving at the party, Saki placed the cake at the center of the table, after Maimi and Nakky moved the food to make way for the cake. She was about to move away from the table when someone hugged her from behind, “You’re late!” the girl exclaimed while digging her chin on Saki’s shoulder.

“It hurts, Miyabi! Stop it!” she replied, trying to break free from Miyabi’s hold, “I’m sorry. I should have come earlier. I just had trouble-” she stopped, not wanting to tell on how she didn’t get to buy the shoes Miyabi wanted. Noticing the grip finally loosened, she sighed as she thought Miyabi forgave her for being late, She didn’t hear the last word I said…Did she?

As she stood straight, Miyabi pulled her hand, making Saki face her, “Captain! What trouble?” Chinami asked from across the room, “Are you hurt?” Megumi asked, holding Chisato’s hand. A lot of question came from each person in the room, except Miyabi. She looked at Saki with worried eyes. Saki couldn’t take it, “I’m okay. It’s nothing serious.” Miyabi shook her, “Nothing serious? What if you’re badly injured?”

Saki could understand Miyabi’s feelings; she’s her girlfriend, she’s much more worried than the others, “What if something happened to you?”

“Miya, nothing happened to me. See? I’m right in front of you. I just lost my way towards here.” Saki whispered as Miyabi hugged her, “You’re lying…” Miyabi tightened her hold, as Saki wrapped her arms around her waist.

The other members in the room were surprised on what they were seeing, “Am I missing something?” Chisato asked, looking lost, “What? What is it?” Chinami asked, bugging her, “but they are just hugging…” MaiMai answered, while jumping off Erika’s back. Maasa and Yurina, with their outdoor shades, held Miyabi and Saki by the arm, turning them sideways for everyone to see, “Please don’t move. We’ll just point out something to everyone.” Maasa told them, as she was fixing her shades.

Yurina and Maasa each took a stick from the balloons near them, using them as pointing sticks. Maasa cleared her throat, “As you can see how Captain and Miyabi are hugging, we can say this is not just a friendly hug.” Yurina nodded in agreement, “For you guys to know the difference of this hug from a friendly one, we need two volunteers.”

Silence responded to the two of them, “No one wants to volunteer?” Maasa asked as she glared at everyone, but they couldn’t see, since she was wearing shades, “Well, I think we’ll need to pick the volunteers by ourselves.” Yurina concluded as she looked at Maasa who nods at her.

“If both of you pick the volunteers, they can’t be called volunteers anymore.” Miyabi countered, “You guys, let themselves choose.” Saki said, supporting Miyabi’s statement, while burying her face on Miyabi’s chest, “You guys are actually enjoying this… right?” Yurina asked, trying not to stutter, as she saw what Captain did.

“Well then…are there any volunteers?” Maasa asked again, scanning each of the H!P kids, “Why not the two of you?” Kanna asked, with one of her eyebrows up, “How can we point out the difference if we were hugging?” Maasa said firmly, trying to point out that it was impossible.

Finally, Airi and Nakky stood and went to the front, beside Maasa., “Yosh! Now, can you two please hug.” Nakky tilted her head, “How?” Maasa looked at her, grinning, “Just hug. A friendly hug.” Yurina explained, while tapping Maasa’s shoulder with the stick.

Airi and Nakky followed, hugging each other, “Now, pay attention everyone.” Maasa called, pointing at Nakky and Airi’s hands, “First, a friendly hug has both hands at the upper part of the body.” The others nodded, as they listened. Yurina pointed at the hand of Captain, “While in Captain and Miya’s hug, Captain has her hands on Miya’s hips.” A soft ah could be heard from the audience, then Maasa points at the space between the body of Airi and Nakky, “Second, in a friendly hug, there is a space between the bodies…”

“While at Captain and Miya’s hug, there is none.” Kumai pointed at their bodies, circling the pointer at the place where there should be space, “Third!” Maasa said with great power, “In a friendly hug, either their cheeks are touching, or their heads are resting at each others shoulders.” Maasa once again pointed the stick at Airi and Nakky’s cheeks, which were touching, “While in Captain and Miya’s hug, you can see Captain’s face, buried deep on Miyabi’s chest, while Miyabi’s head rests beside Captain’s head.”

“That’s all we need to point out, which gave us a conclusion…” Maasa started, “the way Captain and Miya are hugging…” Yurina continued, “means another thing…” Maasa looked at Yurina, as Yurina nodded and both of them looked at the others, “Captain and Miya are not friends!” both of them said in sync.

“What do you guys mean not friends?” Momo asked with one of her fingers under her chin. Maasa slapped herself on the face while Yurina looked down, disappointed. Can’t stand it anymore, Megumi and Risako stood and both said the same thing, “They are lovers.” Silence once again took over the room, until Miya and Saki let go of each other.

How come Risako knows? Saki asked herself as she looked at Miyabi, Why does Megumi know? Looking at Saki the same time.

The after shock finally came, drowning both Miyabi and Saki with questions, teasing and congratulations. “It looks like they accept the fact that we’re lovers…” Saki whispered as they were being cornered.

After answering all of their questions, they decided to start the party. They celebrated Miyabi’s 17th birthday. They ate while watching the others singing in front, enjoying their time, nothing to think about, just the party, enjoying the time with each other, and the birthday girl.

They then turned to the cake, as they opened the box, MaiMai and Chinami took the cake out, while Momo took the box off the table., “Ah! They really did copy the design!” Momo squealed, “Even the little details we drew!” Chinami added as both of them stared at the cake.

“Now, you two make way. Let the birthday girl see.” Maimi said while pushing Miyabi to the table. Miyabi finally got to see the cake; Momo and Chinami had designed for her. In the middle of the circular cake, Miyabi’s chibi version could be seen. Drawn very well, and she realized it was Chinami’s drawing style. There were also hearts all over the cake, Momo… she knew Momo would put hearts since she loved it. Miya can’t help but to squeal, as she thanked Momo and Chinami for the wonderful design of the cake. She both gave them a hug, before turning to the others, saying her thanks, as she hugged each of them.

They sang Miyabi her Happy Birthday song, then right after, she blew the 17 candles scattered on the cake. Doing the honor of cutting the cake, Miyabi gave each one a piece and they ate together, happily, talking with each other like old times. When they were still one group, no Berryz Koubou, no C-ute.

After the cake, most of them decided to go, leaving only Miyabi, Saki, Maimi, and Erika. The room went quiet as the others left, leaving Miya and Saki finally got the time to cuddle each other without anyone bugging and teasing them. When they finally got comfortable, Saki looked at Maimi and Erika, which were also cuddling, “You guys haven’t told anyone yet? Other than us?” Erika nodded, “Yeah, we still can’t tell the others…Airi’s still recovering.” Maimi explained, after kissing Erika’s hand, “So, she decided to move on?” Miyabi asked while playing with the end of Saki’s shirt.

“Yeah. At first she can’t be in a room when I’m there, she can’t even sing right when I was there. Maybe that’s the reason why it took long before Bye Bye Bye was released.” Maimi answered, while Erika rest her head on Maimi’s shoulder, “How about now?” Saki asked, looking at Maimi and Erika, who were starting to get closer.

“Now…” Maimi started, getting distracted by Erika’s lips, “We’re fine… She’s talking with me again…” She can’t hold it anymore. Maimi leaned in.

As they were enjoying themselves, Miyabi and Saki were just quiet. Taking their time hugging each other, since Miyabi reserved this place until midnight, and it was just nine, “You still haven’t told me about that trouble earlier…” Miyabi whispered, as she played with Saki’s fingers, “It was nothing. I just got so many people to handle in the shop, since Cho didn’t come. Nakai-san was so angry.” Saki explained, trying hard not to bring up the shoe, “What? Cho is five years older than you, and he bailed out at the last day?” Saki nodded, now playing with the younger girls fingers.

“Maybe he had an emergency, that he needs to be excused for the day.” Saki reasoned out, trying to tell Miyabi to let it go. Another silence crept the room, well, not really silence, as Maimi and Erika were still kissing.

Looking at them, Miyabi wanted that too for her birthday, so she wished it, as she then looked at Saki. The older girl was still staring at their hands. She slowly squeezed the younger girls hand. Saki finally met Miyabi’s gaze, as she lets go of her hand, placing her hand under the other girls chin, holding it in place, as she leaned in, giving the other girl her final wish for her birthday.

A knock came from the door and it made both pairs stop their session. Being closer to the door, Maimi opened it, revealing the owner of the place, “Ah! Sumimasen, but can I speak to Natsuyaki-san?”

Miyabi bid goodbye to the three as she followed the owner to his office. Closing the door behind, Maimi looked at Erika, “Erika, I’ll just go to the bathroom, wanna come?” Erika shook her head, “I don’t feel like leaving the room. Sorry Maimi.” It was Maimi’s turn to shake her head as she turned to Saki, “What about you, Saki?”

“Yeah, I’ll go.” Saki stood up and walked out the door as Maimi closed it behind. They started to walk at the corridor, talking about their practices and new song release, Berryz Dakishimete Dakishimete and C-ute’s Bye Bye Bye, “So… how is it with Miyabi? I heard from Megumi that…”

“I don’t want to talk about that anymore Maimi. It’s the past, it already happened, and we sorted it.” Saki butted, as she knew what Maimi was going to say, “I’m sorry…” Maimi apologized for bringing that topic, as they both became quiet.

***In the Office***

“Well, I wanted to greet you happy 17th birthday!” Yamashiko, the owner of the karaoke shop congratulated, as he pulled something from the drawer of his desk and placed it in his pants pocket.

“Thank you, Yama-san.” Miyabi replied, with a big smile, “So, how did your party go?” Yama-san asked, walking to the front of his desk, sitting down on it, “It went great! My friends really help me plan this party.” Miyabi explained, sitting down on the chair beside the table, as Yama-san signaled her to.

“So, how is your dad? Is he going to play bowling with us?” Yama-san asked, leaving his place to stand in front of Miyabi. She was about to answer; when the man took out the thing he took from his table drawer, which made her stop. She stared at the sharp thing, wanting to scream, but the intention of the man, made her lose her voice.

***At the Karaoke Room***

“What’s taking her so long?” Saki asked, walking back and forth, “You keep doing that and you’ll be like Miyabi earlier, as she was waiting for you.” Saki glared at Maimi but the other just gave her a smile, turning her attention to Erika.

Saki walked to the door, “Where are you going?” Maimi asked curiously, “I’m going to get her. Who knows what the guy is doing to her now.” Saki answered as she left the room. She walked towards the office, placing both her hands in her jackets pocket. She walked another five steps when a scream came echoing through the halls. Realizing the voice and where it came from, Saki dashed to the slightly opened door, seeing what she didn’t want to see.

[~*Sarah]

Holy crap! Cliffhanger!!! NOOO!!!!! That guy better not do anything to Miya. Hurry Saki!!!! Update soon, I'm dying of anticipation. This story is so great. (so did Maimi and Airi have a relationship beforehand?)

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

^ I need to make it a cliffhanger or else I'll spoil the fun. well, maybe not fun, since the next chapter might be sad?dissappointing?scary ? just wait for it later or tomorrow.. I promise! If I don't, everyone who comes here, please throw me brick!

(well.....I think it can be called as a "relationship")

[Miss Behave]

I'll take you up on that brick offer
Oh dang....run Saki! RUN!
(I like detective Maasa and Yurina here!)

[jelly man]

thanks for reading my fansfic ~
I read the first chapter of yours , and will read the rest tomorrow when I wake up tomorrow.
Your writing is so strong ~ I can really visualize the movement ~

[℗ani©kof¶àίи]

@MissBehave: Thank you for taking the offer, but I seriously don't want to be bricked so here is chapter 7!
@jellyman: no worries. glad you like my fic too.

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btw... here is chappie 7!
I don't know when I'll be able to update again, since I'm going to record 5 songs for 5 dubbing groups...
So please wait for my next update.
(ohhh... its short?)
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Torn in Two
Chapter 7 - Poison

***Miyabi’s POV***

I sat down near the table of Yama-san, making myself comfortable, as he asked about my dad. He and my dad were childhood friends, they would always go bowling every Friday, just to check up on each other, and Yama-san had been a family friend ever since my dad married mom, “So, how is your dad? Is he going to play bowling with us?”

I looked at him for a bit, as he stood in front of me. All I know is that, Dad won’t go bowling with them this Friday, since he is needed at the company. I opened my mouth to answer, as Yama-san took something out of his pocket. I instantly froze as I saw it, reflecting some light; its sharp edge scared me as I tried to get up and run, but he held my hand, threw me back at the chair, and placed his hands on the chairs arms, blocking the way I could use to get out.

I was surprised. This man, who is known as my dad’s best friend, this man who my dad trusted, would be cornering his daughter, “Yama-san…what are you doing?” I tried to push his hands, but his strength was no match for me, “You can’t leave…” I heard him say, slowly waving the knife in front of me, as I backed away. Using the knife’s end, he gently placed it under my chin, using it to tilt my head upward, “Today is your birthday, and I feel bad for not being able to give you a present,” he whispered, “So, this will be my birthday present to you.”

He let out a smirk, as he could see my frightened expression, “Yama-san…please don’t…” He leaned closer, his lips near mine. I closed my eyes and looked away, not wanting him to touch me. As his breathing faded, I slowly opened my eyes, seeing him playing with the knife. I glanced at the door, seeing it slightly open, I know the others are still at the room, but I need to try, I need to try anything, just to get out of here. I was getting myself ready to scream, but a hand covered my mouth, “don’t think of screaming… no one would hear you.” I tried to take his hands off, hitting him when I can.

Saki… Please save me… I kept on calling on her in my head, trying my best to call unto her, wishing she would hear me and come to my rescue. I tried hard to get Yama-san’s hands off of me, when he again took his blade, waving it in front of me, taunting me to do anything stupid, and I’ll get it, “You don’t want your girlfriend seeing you covered in blood, right?” He continued taunting me, until he slid the knife between the first and the second button of my shirt. My heart raced, I don’t know what he is going to do. I’m scared…

Saki…please come...save me… I kept on calling, but as I glance at the door, there wasn’t any sign of any living creature, that could stop him. He pulled his knife up, cutting the button out of my shirt, as the top of my shirt opened, revealing a part of my body that I only let my girlfriend see. He stared at it for a while, licking his lips as he liked what he saw. I started to shake, “please stop…” I pleaded, but his hand made it difficult to voice it out.

He licked his lips again, as he stared at my eyes, lust and desire taking over his body. I tried to move, but his stare made me stop, draining my strength, as he kissed me. Saki! Save me! I screamed in my head, as I tried to shake him off, but he held my face in place, placing his knife on top of the table. He held my hips, caressing the curve of my body as he continued to kiss me. Please stop… He slid his hand under my skirt, resting his hand on my left thigh. A burst of power came as I pushed him away. I stood and tried to run to the door, but he grabbed my hand, as I screamed, “No one can hear you! The rooms are sound proof.” He mocked as he pushed me back on the chair, holding me down, as he kissed me again. Saki… his lips left mine, as he slides down to my neck, enjoying himself, as I whimper. Tears started to fall. Saki will come… Saki will save me… I kept on believing, as he slid his hand under my skirt again, caressing my thigh seductively. I tried to scream again, but my crying made it difficult.

Saki… I called again and the door opened, surprising the man who was molesting me, “Get the hell away from her!” I heard her say, hitting Yama-san on the face, making him fall on his desk. She turned to me, as my tears keep falling down. I’m so happy to see her, I know she would come and save me. She held my hand and pulled me up, but before we could get out, Yama-san took her hand, making her face him, “You little!” He swing his arm, and the girl fell.

Saki lay on the floor, wincing in pain as she held her cheek. She started to stand, as I glanced back at the man who just hit her. His eyes, glowering at Saki, letting out a smirk as he clutched his knife, blood dropping from it. The man waited for the girl to stand, as he put his hand back, waiting for the right time to stab her. I just stood there, rooted on where I stand. I can’t move. The fear of Saki being killed crept inside of me, making me tremble as Yama-san grip on his knife tighten, “Saki!” I cried, as Yama-san started to move his hand forward.

I didn’t know what happened next, it happened so fast. I just remember seeing Yama-san hitting the metal drawers on the back of his desk, and someone dragging Saki and me out of the room, through the hallway and into the karaoke room, where Erika immediately took Saki and let her sit down on the chair.

***

“How deep is it?” Maimi asked, getting Miyabi to sit down beside Saki, “It’s kind of deep, but it doesn’t need to be stitched.” Erika replied, taking a cotton from her little first aid kit. Maimi then turned to Miyabi, who was staring at the girl beside her, “Are you okay?” she asked, placing a jacket on her shoulders. The girl nodded, “I-I’m okay…”

After putting a bandage on Saki’s cut, Erika turned to Miyabi, searching for any wounds on her, “It seems you don’t have any cuts, bruises or any injury.” She said, as she closed her first aid kit and places it inside her bag. Maimi sat across Saki, as Erika sat across Miyabi, “I didn’t want to follow you earlier, but a feeling made me.” Maimi explained, “Thank you, Maimi. If you didn’t, I don’t know what could have happened to Miyabi and me.” She thanked her, as she held Miyabi’s hand, squeezing it slightly.

Maimi let out a grin, “You were supposed to be Miyabi’s knight in shining armor, but you were the one ended up being saved.” Maimi teased, as Saki’s face grew red, “Stop it Maimi. This is not the time to be teasing.” Erika warned as she hits Maimi’s arm, “I’m sorry.” She replied, trying to take off her smile.

Saki looked at Miyabi, as she pulled her into a hug, “I’m sorry for coming late, Miyabi.” Miyabi shook her head, as she buried her face on the older girls chest, “I won’t forgive that guy for touching you.” Saki looked at her, tilting her chin upward, as their gaze met, “He kissed you, right?” the younger girl nodded, as tears came falling down once more. Saki caressed her cheek, wiping away the tears that fell, “Then… let me take the poison out…” She gently pressed her lips unto the younger girl.

Maimi closed her phone, as she turned to the couple, “The police are on their way. Judging my kick on that guy, he won’t be waking up until the police arrives.”