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#1 ℗ani©kof¶àίи

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Posted 06 March 2009 - 02:28 PM

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As I was saying yesterday, I got a lot of time in my hands and said to post my one-shot also yesterday but it turns out I didn't so I just posted it now. The reason is that while I'm thinking about my one-shot for C-ute, I got distracted by other ideas aside from my mothers constant nagging with other stuff. This idea is to make a fic series (that is what my sister calls it), with Saki in it. Distracted by the sudden ideas for this series, I didn't get the chance to think for my C-ute one-shot. But to my persistent attitude to finish the one-shot first before writing this series. To my surprise, I did finish the one-shot but was not really confident about it.

And now as to what I said to myself, I'll write this series. Comments/Corrections/Suggestions are encouraged. :heart:
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Prologue

Outside a well-built house painted with shades of blue and green, Saki stands with her left hand inside her pants pocket while she raises her other hand to look at the time. How long does it need to take for a girl to get ready for a date? Saki thought until she remembers she is also a girl. But I don't take this long...

"Sorry!" A voice came from the just opened door, revealing Miyabi in her cute shirt with a bear in the middle holding a big heart with the word I Love You written over it. So, she did wear it. Saki thought as she checks her out from top to bottom.

Feeling her face turning red after seeing the older girl staring at her in amusement, Miyabi stuttered as she asks. "W-why are you staring at me like that?" Looking down as her senpai turns to look at her face. A grin came from Saki as she saw Miyabi's sudden change of view.

"You look beautiful in that shirt I gave you." Saki finally said before holding her hand out, waiting for Miyabi to take it.

Blushing a little bit more because of the words she heard, she finally takes Saki's hand and let her lead the way.

"So where are we going?" Miyabi asks breaking the silence between them.

"hmmm..." Miyabi heard as Saki tilted her head to think.

"So you haven't planned this date Saki-chan?" Miyabi asks in a disappointed tone since she thought Saki has plans on what they are going to do or at least where they are going.

Saki quickly turned to Miyabi as she heard a sigh. "I planned this out." Saki replied in defense. Her face changing from defensive to a soft, cheerful, warm expression and gave out a genuine smile. "Why wouldn't I plan this out? When I'm going out with the most beautiful girl I laid my eyes on."

Most beautiful girl I laid my eyes on... Miyabi repeated in her mind as she smiles at Saki, turning a little red again but knowing that this girl she was with really likes her...no, this girl loves her, she corrected herself.

They went in a clothing store, finding Miyabi a new black and white striped jacket while Saki got a new light blue shirt with the initials MN on it.

"Why pick that simple shirt? Don't you want another one in the same color but different printing?" Miyabi curiously asked while searching for a replacement.

"Miya..." Saki called, trying to stop Miyabi from searching, which she did and looks at Saki.

"What?" Miyabi clenched her arms together waiting for Saki's explanation.

"The reason why I like this shirt is because it has the letters MN on it." Saki explained as she points out the two letters that are not hard to see.

"So? Its still plain." Miyabi concluded as she holds the shirt and stares at the letters.

"Think harder." Was the only thing Miyabi heard her senpai told her.

MN? Miyabi asked herself. MN... Saying the two letters the second time helped her to figure out what Saki was trying to say. "Oh..." Looking at the other girl who was smiling pleasantly at her that she finally solved the puzzle. With that thing solved, she instantly changed her mind and let Saki buy the shirt she wanted.

It was about lunchtime that they finished window-shopping after the clothes store and decided to settle in for yakiniku. As they were nearly finished in their meal, Saki held out her hand, signaling Miyabi to give her hand. Not having a reason to disagree, Miyabi held out her hand to the girl in front of her as the other was searching through her pockets for something. Curious on what it is, Miyabi stayed silent and her eyes looking at the Saki, until Saki speaks and brings her other and out of her pocket.

"We've been going out for sometime now Miya-chan..." Saki started while fixing the thing she just took out from her pocket. "And I can't help but think that now is the time to take it to the next level..." Miyabi's eyes widened as she listens to the one who was holding her. Captain...Saki-chan... Are the only words going around Miyabi's brain for a while.

Revealing the gift Saki was preserving in her pocket until the right time, it turned out to be a wonderful bracelet with a heart shaped diamonds. Miyabi stared at it quite surprised while Saki places it on her wrist. Miyabi pulled her hand slowly and raised it up to get a better look.

"Miya-chan... Will you be my girlfriend?" Saki finally asks with butterflies in her stomach not wanting to get a rejection, but to how Miyabi didn't refuse the gift, maybe she will not get a rejection after all.

Staring at Saki after hearing her last word, girlfriend, Miyabi smiles at the girl who was staring at her worriedly, and Saki finds it as a YES, but waited for the girl to answer.

"Yes Saki-chan. I do love to be your girlfriend." Miyabi finally answered seeing the other girls face turn red in content and joy. Without anything further, Miyabi leaned forward to kiss her new girlfriend.

Leaving the empty Yakiniku plates behind, Saki and Miyabi found themselves walking side by side with their hands together and their fingers twined together. Yes they were holding hands before but this time its different, different, because they are not only friends anymore but [i]lovers
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As they were walking, chatting with what happened to them during school, Miyabi suddenly was tugged back and as she looks back at Saki, she stopped walking and was like frozen on the spot while staring blankly at something ahead. Curious on what was the reason that Saki stopped, she looks at the direction Saki was looking at, revealing a well known face that she haven't seen for a very long time.
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I think I lost my writing skills on Chapter fics... That's why I tried doing one-shots and I think I am getting the hang of it. Now about this... I'm not too sure...

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Posted 03 April 2009 - 03:23 PM

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This is the first time I'm doing a one-shot, so please bear with me. And comments and suggestions would be nice. XD
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Leaving

Tick…tock…tick…tock…

The clock sounded in the silent room where Momoko was quietly lying down on her bed. She lay there, as still as a dead person would be but she was awake and breathing. She moves her head slightly to the right to take a peek on the clock. “9 o’clock…” she whispered as she moves back to her former position. She got back to thinking until a knock on the door made her jump out of bed.

“Momoko! Aren’t you going to go and say goodbye to your friend?” her mother asked in a curious tone.

Silence returned to her mother as her reply.

“Momoko! You have to hurry if you want to go. This is the last time you’ll see her.” Her mother continued, trying to convince Momo to leave and bid her friend farewell.

“I…won’t go.” She finally answered, walking backwards until she hit her desk.

Looking back at her cute pink colored desk with her books from school lying organized on one corner, she found this small envelope sticking out from one of her books.

“Momoko!”
Her mother yelled from the other side of the door.

She didn’t pay attention to her mother anymore since she was mostly curious about the small envelope that she just saw. She carefully took it out of its place and studied the parcel from front to back. She didn’t see anything else other than the Kanji letters of her name. She quickly opens it after realizing whom it’s from.

“Why…Why would she…” she said nervously as she started reading the letter.

Momo,

Momo-chan, how are you? How was school? Still having a hard time with the guy in your class? I can scare him off if you want to. Do you? Anyway, school term is ending tomorrow. Isn’t that great? Well, for me it is…


Momo ran out of her room, nearly hitting her mother’s face when she opened the door.

“Momoko!” Her mom shouted back as she was running down the stairs and out she went.

She stopped on an intersection signaling every taxi that went her way but not one stopped. One, two, three… she was beginning to lose hope.

“C’mon, c’mon!”
She pleaded as she signaled the 5th taxi that come her way, and luckily, it went her way and stopped in front of her. She quickly went in while thanking Kami-sama for giving her the ride she wanted.

“Where to miss?” The driver asked, looking at her from the rear-view mirror.

“Narita Airport please.” Momo replied quickly without hesitation.

As she waited anxiously at the backseat, she remembered the letter she was reading earlier.

… Do you remember the time when we were running at the park? You were trying to catch me but before you could, you fell down and scraped your knee. You were like, “You’re mean! Look what you did? How will my fans love me with this scraped knee?” and I was just giggling in front of you but in the end I carried you to a nearby clinic to get it treated. Do you remember?

While I was holding you, it felt different. I mean, we hold each other, hug every time we can, but this time, it really felt different. It felt like I was holding a part of my world that I couldn’t let go of. A part of my world that changed the course of my life, the part that I couldn’t think of loosing…


The taxi stopped in front of the airport’s entrance before Momo quickly got off and ran inside. She ran towards the signboard on where Japan Airlines going to America is boarding. “Terminal 12…” she whispered that only she can hear. Momo ran towards that tunnel hoping she hasn’t boarded yet.

“Please, just a little longer.”
Tears starting to fall from her eyes as she again prays to Kami-sama to grant her wish.

…Do you feel that way when you were holding me Momo-chan?

Momo was still trying to find the terminal. She had passed terminal 10 and that means she’s getting close.

“P-please, still be there.” Stuttering on the first word as she tries to catch her breath.

…About the girl I’ve been telling you…

Passing terminal 11, and seeing terminal 12 just a few meters away. She found hope as she saw people starting to line-up at terminal 12. That hope gave her more strength that she couldn’t even remember having tired and aching legs.

“Please… don’t leave me like this…” Momo begged earnestly to Kami-sama that she wouldn’t board yet.

…That girl was you, Momo-chan

Arriving at her destination, seeing the passengers lining up to board. She examined every person and finally, seeing a small one at the middle of the line.

…I love you.

Momo gathered all her remaining strength before shouting.

“Saki Shimizu! I LOVE YOU!”

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 02:09 AM

Good job! I really like it!

Keep going. :lol:

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 02:14 AM

I really really like this :unsure: The letter to Momo was so sweet :unsure:

Keep writing please, I'll read!!

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 02:34 AM

Very cute, i loved it
I love how you captured Saki's personality in her writing style, it formal but caring, good job :unsure:
keep up the good work!

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 03:13 AM

Thank you guys! <_<
I was really nervous at first, since this is the first time Ive written a one-shot fic.
Just got inspired by one-shot fics I've read in JPH!P and here in H!O.
and I kept wondering why there are only a few fics about H!P kids.
So I figured, I'll do one-shot fics for H!P kids.. http://www.hello-onl...tyle_emoticons/hello-online/laugh.gif

@Hotaru~Ruru: Thanks for being the first one to comment! XD

@EUF: Thank you! ^_^ I was thinking of Miya/Chi next.. ^_^ or any other suggestions?

@Miss Behave: I captured Captain's writing style? I didn't think I could but its better to try.. Thanks for telling me Its like Captain.. ^_^

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 03:47 AM

^You're welcome.

I was nervous when I wrote my "Oyasumi" one-shots over at JPH!P.

So you're not the only one. <3

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 04:05 AM

^ wait.. your the one who wrote Oyasumi in JPH!P? <3
Oh, just checked the author out and I was blind.. <3

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 05:35 AM

^Haaaai! ^^;

I might write a Saki/Miyabi one-shot soon....

And you're not blind. :unsure:

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 11:31 AM

^ oh!! Saki/Miya!!! ^^; please do! :wub: I've been waiting for Berry Beautiful and I can't wait any longer.. lol CHAPTER 39! ^_^

anyway.. I am blind.. I didn't know you were the one who wrote it. Well, I didn't see... <3

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anyway.. now I 'm nervous... I'm going to post my second one-shot now... hope you guys will get the plot... My sister said she can't understand it... now I'm doomed... This is just my second and I'm dying... <3

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"I love you Miya..."

Chinami's eyes grew wide as she heard what the younger girl said to Miyabi inside the room she was eavesdropping. The door was halfway open and Chinami hesistated to peek inside since she didn't know if what she'll see is what she'll regret later.
As curious as she could be, she closed both her eyes and moved her head a little towards the opening as not to get attention from the two girls inside. When she can feel a slight breeze touch her face, she slowly opened her eyes and was frozen on what she saw.
Chinami couldn't believe on what she has seen, the younger girl liplocked with Miyabi. She didn't know what to do and was still rooted on where she was standing until she got back from her little world after knowing what to do.

Run...Chinami...Run!, echoed inside her head. RUN! and so she did. Running faster as she can, getting farther away from the room, that situation and most of all, away from Miyabi.

...

"Have any of you seen Toku-san?" Saki asked her fellow Berryz hoping to get an answer.

"I just saw her a while ago. I think she went to the washroom." Maasa replied while taking one kind of yakiniku on the center plate.

"I'll call her." Risako volunteered and quickly parted the group whom were busy eating.

...

Walking slowly in a small hallway, not planning to get back to the room, Chinami was about to walk out of the front door when Risako called her.

"Chii-chan. Captain is looking for you." Risako called trying to stop Chinami from going out.

Chinami stared at her for a while before looking down to look at her shoes. Feeling that there is something wrong, Risako walked slowly towards Chinami and was about to ask when Chinami was the first one to speak.

"Don't come near me..." Chinami said in a whisper that Risako wasn't able to understand.

"What Chii-chan? I didn't understand." Risako answered, lending an ear to the older girl.

"..." Silence only came from Chinami and Risako asked again. "Chii-chan-"

"I SAID! DON'T COME NEAR ME!" Chinami exclaimed that made Risako step back.

Risako couldn't understand why Chinami was acting that way, and to think, they were getting along preety well this morning. When Chinami felt that Risako was not leaving anytime soon, she started to think on how she would talk to her calmly but it didn't came out as calmly as she could think of.

"She told me first..." Chinami started, finally looking up to look at Risako.

"What?" Risako asked with a curious tone.

Not getting what she was saying, warm blood started to rise to her head and finally, "SHE TOLD ME FIRST THAT SHE LOVES ME!"

Taken aback, Risako's eyes grew wide with what Chinami just told her and she finally get to realize what she was saying.

"A-at first, I didn't know how to respond to her and told her I need to think about it." Chinami stuttered, since she was starting to panic.

...

"What is taking Risako long? She was just going to get Chinami and I think the washroom is just a few rooms away." Saki finally asked after just staring at the yakiniku on the center of the table that Maasa eaten half of the whole serving.

"I'll get them. Maybe they just stop to talk and didn't remember to come back." Miyabi explained while sliding the door shut behind her.

...

Finding herself near the washroom when she heard voices a little farther away. The voices were quite familiar to her but the only thing she found wrong with it is that it didn't sound like a normal voice for a friendly conversation. Realizing what the situation is, Miyabi followed the voices until she finally found Chinami and Risako.

"After a realizing just a few days ago my answer, I was about to tell her earlier. I was about to tell her how I feel the same for her..." Chinami paused not noticing a shaken figure popping out of nowhere was listening to them a few meters away.

"You're too late now Chii-chan! I told her first. So what if she told you first? You're the one who is slow. You gave an opening. I can't back-out just to let her be with you..." That last sentence Risako used to end her debate with the older girl, made Chinami cry.

"You don't understand Rii-chan! I love her..." Chinami answered pleadingly, wiping her tears from her eyes and looks back to Risako.

"I'm sorry Chii-chan... I won't give Miyabi to you. I also love her." With that, Chinami opened the door and ran towards the only place she knows she can relieve herself from her pain.

"Chinami!" Miyabi called while running down the stairs to run after her but before she could, Risako held her arm not wanting to let her go.

"Risako! Please let go. I need to go get Chinami." Miyabi begged to the girl holding her arm tight.

"No! You're with me now Miya!" Risako answered infuriated and pulled Miyabi close to her.

Miyabi tried her best to get Risako's hands off of her until she stopped. Risako thought Miyabi had accepted her fate with her until she felt a warm drop of water touched her right hand. She didn't expect this to happen. She thought Miyabi was happy with her now that they kissed. Miyabi was crying.

"Please Rii-chan..." Miyabi looked at Risako with those eyes of sadness and pain.

Miyabi looked back down when she felt Risako still not wanting to release her but then, her arm felt lighter and the warm body beside her moved. This is the right time to run she thought but before she could, she looked at Risako and said, "Thank you", before running out and goes to the place she knows she'll find Chinami.

...

Finally arriving to the place which she dreaded since she was a child. Now, it is a place where she could relieve herself from her pain. Hesitating for a second, Chinami started to walk towards the shallow part of the place until she reached the last part her feet could reach.

Arriving late to the place, she found only Chinami's head out of the water and any second Chinami might not get any ground and she'll fall deeper in the water. "Chinami!" She called, trying to get the older girls attention. When she realized there was no stopping her, Miyabi ran as quickly as she can towards the shallow waters and started calling out to her again.

"Chinami! Don't do it!" Miyabi shouted for the other to hear but it seems the water is now until Chinami's ears that she can't hear her well.

This is it. Chinami thought while feeling the ground below her that in any minute can't be reached anymore.

Goodbye mother, father, Captain, Maasa, Momo, Kumai, Risako... Miya-chan... Chinami smiled for a while after thinking about Miyabi. Now she knows she's dying because she thought she heard Miyabi's voice calling her.

I forgot to tell Captain to take care of Miyabi while I'm gone. She continued smiling a little again with the voice of Miyabi still in her mind but that smile faded when her feet slipped and found herself slowly being pulled deeper into the water. She was now using her the last few oxygen in her body and her surroundings were in a haze.

"Miya-chan...don't forget... I'll always be with you even if you can't see me..." She coughed and took hold of her neck.

"I love you Miya-chan..." Her eyes closed, her arms fell as she went unconcious.

...

Swimming faster as she could, Miyabi finally catched up to Chinami, hugged her tight and swam back to the shore as quickly as she can. "Chii-chan! Hold on! Please! Don't go!"

Finally getting to shore, Miyabi lay Chinami on the sand and checked her vital signs, but couldn't tell any source of life. She started to do CPR, hoping and begging that Chinami will come back.

"Please Chii-chan..." Miyabi pleaded now losing hope.

She paused for a while, staring at Chinami's pale face. She couldn't help but cry. "No! Chinami is not dead yet!" Miyabi keep telling herself as she stares at the quiet girl.

"CHINAMI!" Miyabi shouted as she hits Chinami's torso.

Still no sign of life, Miyabi held Chinami and let Chinami's head rest on her lap. Crying for a while as she couldn't hold her tears back, a tear dropped and as soon as it touched Chinami's forehead, Miyabi was surprised on the sound she heard. Chinami coughed out water, Miyabi stared at her as she can't believe that Chinami moved. When Chinami opened her eyes, it came to focus on the figure on top of her and when it was clear enough and realized who it was.

"Miya-chan..." Chinami whispered.

Miyabi couldn't answer quickly as she was still holding back her new tears.

"Baka..." She finally said, smiling.

"Why did you-" Miyabi put her finger on Chinami's lips to tell her to stop.

"Its because I love you Chi-chan... I don't want you to leave me again." Miyabi explained before leaning down to kiss her.

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 02:33 PM

Really good Panick-chan!!!

I haven't read all of Berry Beautiful yet. (I'm on Chapter 18/19...extremely slow.)

Chinami and Miyabi, really unexpected, but I love it! :D

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 02:59 PM

^ lol thank you Hotaru-san! :) and please do call me pancake or mai, either is okay. XD
Like your oyasumi one-shots! :D

You must finish Berry Beautiful.. XD I meant until the latest chapter.. :wub: Miya/Saki = XD

Chinami and Miya.. XD unexpected? <3

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 03:02 PM

Eh?

That's Rokun who wrote Berryz Beautiful...that person HAS to finish it.

Poor Saki...Jun is crazy.

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 03:07 PM

^ yeah, rokun wrote it.. what I meant is that you should finish reading it.. :wub:

yeah.. I hate Jun.. but I don't want to be a spoiler so I'll stop there... :wacko:

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 03:14 PM

Okay Im going to go read it now. :wacko:

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 03:28 PM

^yey! :wub: I hope chapter 39 will be out soon.. :wacko:

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well, here it is... I hope it is as good as what I wrote for Berryz... <3
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Airi was walking at a small shopping district when a shop ceased her to a stop. She stares at the TV just behind the glass that is set to the News channel. As she watched the current news being said, she wanted to tear herself from the said mechanism in front of her, but all her attempts failed. She stood there, staring at the screen as the news went on. Nobody around her bothered her, some looks her way but didn't tend to disturb her as they can see her gaze on the screen.

Here it is again...
Airi complained in her head. "C-ute with their new single..." She heard from the speakers outside the store.

Until when will they stop broadcasting it on TV? Airi asked to herself but wanting to let the media know.

Still not parting with her eyes stare at the screen as her groups newest single PV plays, she remembers the incident not too long ago, after the release of C-ute's PV, Bye Bye Bye.

...

"Airi-chan!" A familiar voice called behind her. Seeing Mai running towards her looking a bit pale, Airi couldn't help but to ask. "What is it Mai-chan? Is there something wrong?"

Stopping just in front of Airi, Mai was catching her breath as she speaks, "You... must... stop..." Mai started but found it hard to continue with lack of oxygen. Airi tilted her head a little in confusion. When Mai finally has restored her normal breathing, she didn't wait another second and just spitted it all out on Airi. Airi froze as she listens to her friend and as Mai finishes, Airi left, running, without any explanation.

Why... Why would you still deal with this? Airi took a left turn, ignoring the people she went by.

I even told you not to do it anymore... You asked me why... Airi crossed a road, ignoring the car that honked at her since she was near to be crashed on. "Hey! Look out will yah!" The guy in the car shouted but Airi didn't mind, she kept on running until she took another turn, entering an underground tunnel. The tunnel seemed so long as she looks through it.

She began to run again, trying to race with the tunnel that it won't get longer anymore, that she may reach the end. I didn't respond quickly but I said it in a whisper which I know you heard... Its because... Airi finally finished the race and came up the stairs, breathing heavily as she stops to feel the pain on her legs. Trying to catch some air, tears came falling and it made it harder to breath. Its because... She continued as she continued her journey to the place she told the older girl not to go.

She tried her best to stop her crying as she runs toward the entrance of an abandoned lot. Its because... I love you! Her eyes closed as she can't see anymore because of her tears. She was still running until she tripped on a protruding rock. As she fell down, finding it hard to stand up because of the pain on her legs as she was running non-stop. I love you... can't you see? That's why I didn't want you to continue with this deal.

Knowing she might not make it if she kept on laying there, she finally forced herself to stand up and to run again, as fast as she can. Its because I love you that I don't want you to get hurt! Those last words didn't return right as she saw the older girl sitting on the ground with her back leaning on the packed tires. Airi felt her tears coming back as she runs toward the girl.

Exhaustion took over the other girl as she tries to open her eyes just to see who touched her. "A-airi..." the girl said while trying to put up a smile. Airi only pouted as a response to the older girls smile. "I told you not to go!" Airi finally managed to say as she was debating herself about what she should say.

"But if I haven't, he wouldn't say he'll leave you alone..." the older girl replied.

Airi tried to hold herself not to hit the other girl as she didn't want to give her another bruise since the other girl had many. As Airi was cleaning the blood on the older girls face, they didn't notice a shadow behind them, holding out a gun fixed on Airi. As the moons light went their way, the gun reflected some of its light that the older girl saw. As soon as she saw it, she gathered all the strength she got left and took hold of Airi as the gun shots noise echoed. The gunner didn't stay for long as he saw that he hit the wrong person.

As the echoes faded, Airi, surprised as she was took hold of the older girl in front of her as she feared what she knew was not a dream. The older girl, stayed there, hold into place by Airi. "I told you not to go... Because I know this might happen..." Airi whispered to the older girls ears even if she knew the other girl won't hear her anymore. Tears came falling down once again as she snuggled on the older girls chest and held her tighter as she recalled what the older girl said before the deafening noise came.

I love you Airi

More tears came falling down as she took hold of the older girl she loved and once again whispered on her ear, "I love you too, Maimi..."

...

Airi looks down as she tries to hold back her tears. A cold breeze touched her and she looks at the direction its from. Maimi, stood a few meters away from her, smiling intimately. She failed as her tears started to fall down her cheek. As the breeze came up, Maimi started to fade. Not holding back her tears, Airi found herself smiling as she thought of Maimi. Even if you have faded here, you won't fade in my heart. Airi started to walk the road again, where she last saw Maimi.
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so... how was it? My sister was nagging me to make a death fic from the start but I was not in the mood with my first two fics... but then again, I found it great for Maimi/Airi... sorry... <3

After reading this, I found out its shorter than my former one-shots... XD
comments please... since I don't know how I just did with this new one... ^^;

#17 chiichii

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Posted 05 April 2009 - 05:04 AM

im gonna start reading this
this is gonna be my first time reading something like this but it looks cool :good:

#18 deukkae

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Posted 05 April 2009 - 05:17 AM

MAIRI!!!!!!!!!!!!

SUGOI!!!!!!!!!

Keep going! :good:

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#19 ℗ani©kof¶àίи

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Posted 05 April 2009 - 05:20 AM

^ you already finished reading it Hotaru-chan??? :good: that was fast.. :D

#20 deukkae

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Posted 05 April 2009 - 05:22 AM

Yeah, I'm a fast reader. :good:

And now I'm starting to like Miyabi & Chinami. :D

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